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My friend and I were walking home one day, we use to walk past a very small pond, (so small it was basically a huge puddle) and this day noticed somebody had made some kind of wooden crate raft and left it on the pond. The raft was nearly the width of it. My friend being quite adventurous suggested using it to get on the other side of the water as there was a shortcut to her house on the other side of the bank. Reluctantly I agreed. My friend went first and managed to get across no problem there was barely any water anyway, the raft took up most of the pond space. When it was my turn to go across, I got my foot caught between the gaps in the crate and it went straight in to the water underneath the wooden raft, it was quite a struggle but eventually I managed to get my foot free… but not my shoe! which my friend found hilarious. I ended up pulling a bare cold and wet foot free from the water and my shoe was nowhere in sight.

'What am I going to do?!' I asked to my friend who was giggling like crazy at this point

I decided to leave my shoe; I did not feel like searching in the water under the crate for it. So I just jumped across to the side my friend was on, the gravel around the bank of the pond made me jump as I landed on it. Walking back to her house was defiantly an interesting barefoot experience, being careful not to stand on any thing that may be dangerous but also taking in the new sensations of the cold road on my one bare foot.
A true little story written by my fiancee about a barefoot encounter. Hope you enjoy! more of these on the way.
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The30mono Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010
awsome storry
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Foxy-Feet Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks so much! :aww:
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The30mono Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010
i should b thankin you mate
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Foxy-Feet Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
lol really glad you like it :w00t: :dance:
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entomoam Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010
it was wonderful
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Foxy-Feet Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks so much!
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blackdeathmessenger Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
Interesting story.hope to read more soon.
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Foxy-Feet Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks very much!
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blackdeathmessenger Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010
You're very welcome
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x-i-v Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
an almost similar thing happened to me last year. my boyfriend and i attended a benefit concert held in his former school. we got bored and decided to go home. since the concert was held in the middle of a football field, we had to walk a few meters before we can reach the road. the ground was moist because it had been drizzling the whole day. we were near the road when i made a wrong stepped and found myself ankle-deep in a quicksand-looking puddle of mud. i pulled my foot free, but i lost my flip-flop. thankfully, my boyfriend was able to find it using a long tree branch. my feet was all muddy, but i didn't really care because it was kinda fun.
:D
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Foxy-Feet Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:XD: sounds likt it ended up being an interesting day!
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x-i-v Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010
it was. my pants had mud and i was just very quiet while we were walking. my boyfriend was scared that i got upset, then i started laughing, because when something like that happens, it really is funny. he then laughed with me and proceeded to a bakeshop to have coffee and sweets. :D
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Foxy-Feet Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
lol at least in ended with coffee and sweets :aww: we've had our share of mishaps on photo shoots we should do a gag reel lol :XD:
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x-i-v Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2010
yes, you should do that. it would be so cute. :D
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Foxy-Feet Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you! :aww: we'll give it a go
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Everyday-Grind-Comic Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that's just sexy!
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Foxy-Feet Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you! :w00t:
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southerncrossfire44 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010
Fun story! I look forward to more!
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Foxy-Feet Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you! :XD:
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Dani-the-Naiad Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
cute little story
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Foxy-Feet Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you :meow:
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Dani-the-Naiad Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:blowkiss:
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Elcomber Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010
heh i had a similar story but my shoe got stuck in the mud -_-...
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Foxy-Feet Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:XD: did you find it after?
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Elcomber Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010
i did but i felt in the mud when i was trying to take it out :P
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Wizrares Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010
Indeed interesting story, reminds me of my times at the beach :) Did you find the shoe?
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Foxy-Feet Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you :) no! i never got my shoe back :XD:
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Taggs-TC Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010
Interesting story. :3
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Foxy-Feet Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you :)
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Taggs-TC Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010
welcome. :3
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8bitisawesome Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010
That's cute! :)
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Foxy-Feet Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you! :w00t:
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Possemaster Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010
Interesting story! One question, did she ever find it?
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Foxy-Feet Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you! no i never found my shoe! :meow: :XD:
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