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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

The main critique I have is that it all seems a little static - I appreciate you have tried to add movement with the loincloth, snow and censer smoke, but he still appears statue-like. The pose is perhaps slightly forced? I feel like we need context for why he is there, doing what he is doing.
I also feel like the feet are obscured not because of the specific dynamics of the surroundings, but because you didn't feel like drawing them...
I don't want to be unfair though: In all other respects this is a good piece: it is well proportioned, the light is good, and the distinction between the foreground and background is well established.
Khakir Sharrox
FourWaterReed commented on ActiveInktober's profile
Hi Ashley,

I'm glad you're back! I have closed that group down now because I think it's sometimes best not to have too many groups doing the same thing, and I don't want to poach members from here if this group is still active and well.
No need to apologise - Real Life comes first after all.

If you ever need any help with admin duties I would be happy to assist you if needed.

FWR

Real life comes first, glad you could make it back :)

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