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(The following critique is for the series as a whole more so than this chapter and image alone, so please keep that in mind while reading.)

While the style is most definitely simplistic, it's well executed and clean and completely suits the material. I've seen definite growth throughout the series, no pun intended, and found the story quite enjoyable on its own terms, as well as a piece of fan-service. Lance's character stayed consistent throughout (something I need to work on with my own writing), and she was never portrayed as anything but a hero, despite her "limitations." I appreciate that you had some fun with her powers throughout, as well, and the twist at the end with the "infinitely increasing mass = infinite speed" was satisfying and clever.

Overall, I'm happy to have been able to contribute to the story in my own limited way, and I can't wait to see what you cook up next. Again, no pun intended. Great job!

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So, you're me; you're depressed, you're overwhelmed, you kinda want to eat a bullet. You have two options; one, you can take some medication that yes, does allow you to function and mostly stay out of the ruts, but it also kills your libido and generally dulls your emotions and renders you foggy. The alternative, of course, is that you take nothing and remain lucid, yet miserable, and know full well that you'll likely never get any better.

(I suppose it should be said that the libido part isn't much of a consideration seeing as how I'm painfully single and have been for some time.)

I'm torn. Apathy is self-destruction for the unambitious, it seems. :-S

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