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steal my breath away by fotomademoiselle steal my breath away by fotomademoiselle
I took pictures a few weeks ago during sunset, but I muted the colors in this picture because I loved the twinkles at the bottom of it. I wanted to emphasize the overall skyscape rather than just the typical neon pinks.

(C) A.greenlaw 2015
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:bulletred:Whats the first thing you notice? The shadows of the trees up against the sunset

:bulletorange:What do you like the most? The colors are amazing

:bulletyellow:The least? The way the photo is almost "leaning" to the left. I would rotate it just a bit to straighten it out more. I think the way the trees on the left got cut off and you see the whole one on the right is kind of throwing it off as well.

:bulletgreen::What could make it better? Like I said, straighten it out a bit, maybe play with cropping it, just so it's a bit more visually pleasing.

:bulletblue:Whats the first thing you thought when you saw this? Wow, that is absolutely beautiful

:bulletpurple:Vision? :star::star::star:

:bulletpink:Orginality :star::star:

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Submitted on
April 8, 2015
Image Size
9.8 MB
Resolution
4000×2666
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Camera Data

Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS REBEL T3i
Shutter Speed
4/1 second
Aperture
F/22.0
Focal Length
18 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Mar 16, 2015, 8:14:03 PM
Lens
EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS II
Sensor Size
22mm