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PMD: Stone Circle - Page 34

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I know stating how cute is Abra is something I have been saying too many times in the development of this comic but... let me say that Abra rubbing his eye has thrown him way up into the scale of cuteness.

Now, do you mind a suggestion? I really like all these small gestures the characters have: Abra rubbing his eye, the Rowlett patting his back... but when it comes to short movements like the nod on the fourth panel, I think you would do better if you drew the "key frame" instead of these movement lines. I think that if you had drawn Audino with his head inclined as if he was slightly bowing you would have been able to convey better this gesture.
It's a small thing, for sure, but it could be extrapolated to other moments and thus, be useful for other pages.
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Ooh, that's a really good bit of constructive feedback! Thank you, I'm still trying to get the hang of the comicking style, and this helps a lot.
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You are welcome! Comic makers must help each out, right? XD