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Gif-198 by ForLoveatArt Gif-198 by ForLoveatArt
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decent scenery & correct clothing choices for what you are going for. However, the single "gesture" with the finger is not enough. you should have her gesture with her finger two or three times in order to get the viewer's attention to her hand in front of her cleavage. how she lingered briefly on the camera when turning away was smart especially when she turned back. it made the viewer feel as if she was very interested in them following. good lighting & her hair looks nice. the pose is decent, but, perhaps her hands behind her back so that when she gestures, the hands appearing catch more attention.
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Gunnut51 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
I hate to see her go, but I do love watching her leave...
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Truckgbad Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
<3
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