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Does it mean anything

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Does it mean anything
When I say I love you?

Does it mean anything
When I say I care?

Does it mean anything
When I say I need you?

Does it mean anything
When I say I wish I was there?

Does it mean anything
When I say I miss you?

Does it mean anything
When I say you’re sweet?

Does it mean anything
When I say you matter?

Does it mean anything
When I say you’re all I need?

Does it mean anything
When I say you’re important?

Does it mean anything
When I say I’ll cry?

Does it mean anything
When I say I’m depressed?

Does it mean anything
When I say you’re the reason why?
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CrazyMai's avatar
So beautfiul. And I love how the repetion of "Does it mean anything" make the poem flow so nicely :) 
ForeverWaitingforYou's avatar
Thank you~ I'm glad it turned out better than I expected with repeating the same phrase in every line :aww:
and Thanks for the fav as well :meow:
CrazyMai's avatar
You are welcome :) 
HellsDivine's avatar
i can really relate to this. 
ForeverWaitingforYou's avatar
I'm both glad to know my piece is relateable yet I hate it because it really sucks to relate to it ><
and Thanks for the fave :aww:
HellsDivine's avatar
It is a painful thing to go through, and as comforting as it can be to know I'm not the only one who feels this way - it makes me feel sad at the same time because I know how hard it is to question if you mean something to another who means so much to you, Its sad to think other people feel like this too. 
Sometimes I don't know whats worse, knowing someone doesn't care anymore - or not knowing for sure.
and you're welcome.
ForeverWaitingforYou's avatar
Exactly!! That is literally exactly what's going on and exactly what's going through my head as well.
And it's even more frustrating when you doubt what the other person says; like you're not sure if they're even telling the truth anymore.
HellsDivine's avatar
yeah!! that is the worst!  sometimes someone says they love me or care and i just can't help but not believe them.  its like how could they love something like me?  then it causes more problems because i don't believe them, but they believe themselves.
ForeverWaitingforYou's avatar
I know! ><
And then your doubt keeps annoying them cause you either keep asking or you keep it inside until you explode all at once, and they're both losing situations because they end up annoyed either way.
HellsDivine's avatar
yeah, it kinda sucks honestly. 
Guinevere-X's avatar
No critique... just a wonderful poem!
Guinevere-X's avatar
You are quite welcome! :heart:
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