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I really like the composition: the smack-in-the-middle figure works wonderfully to break the horison line, and the fact that you didn't have her in focus balances out well: she draws your attention anyway. But I think you might have taken the shot even further away from your model? She is a strong enough element in your composition to retain focus even when smaller in view, and I think that would give her even more of a "ghostly" feel. That would also allow you to play around with a narrower, elongated crop. This is one of those images that could get away with a weird format, and might even benefit from it.

There is something about the focus that bugs me. Can't place my finger on it though. Maybe tighten your aperture a little bit. Think a tiny increase in depth of field might make it feel a bit more natural, making the grass fade to a blur a bit more evenly.

But with all that anal nitpicking said and done: gush! This really is a hauntingly beautiful image! You captured a feeling true to the tile with the colour, the composition, the amazing model and your superb technique. I envy your vision and your skill! I want to see a lifesize print in a gallery! Fave ^_^
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corcobbado Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2018
Amazing photo!
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corcobbado Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2018
Hi
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doyo Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
i like the foreground of the picture
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nilvirgil Featured By Owner Edited Aug 15, 2014
"Beg" :iconpinkheart-plz: :iconheartglompplz:
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CrazyGirL44 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014   Photographer
Your beautiful work was featured here:
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:iconfogke:
fogke Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Student Artist
thank you ;)
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Karinta Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Very, very good composition and use of the golden ratio.
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:iconfogke:
fogke Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Student Artist
many thanks
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Karinta Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome, dear.
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sunnykanwin Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
wow...beautiful and meaningful in one photo
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:iconfogke:
fogke Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Student Artist
thank you
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JeronimoMauregui Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
Awesome photo!
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:iconfogke:
fogke Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Student Artist
thank you !
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Meggie272 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love this. Something about the white sand and the spiny grass combined with that figure is wonderful.
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:iconfogke:
fogke Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Artist
it is snow :).. thank you ;)
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Meggie272 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh right! I'm stupid :XD: It reminded me of the white sand we have here, that's all.
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:iconfogke:
fogke Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Student Artist
:) ;)
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Haley-Kun Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
This is so incredibly beautiful. I am very impressed.
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:iconfogke:
fogke Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Artist
thank you
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Bittersuesz Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
...featured... [link]
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:iconfogke:
fogke Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Student Artist
thanks ;)
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humblestudent Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
personally I love the head up! I think it add to the creepiness. Is she jumping? Because it looks like she is floating. I think that I would freak out if I saw this walking in a field. Really great job!!!
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fogke Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012  Student Artist
yes, she is jumping* thank you ;)
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JPtHart Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Student Photographer
Featured here! :aww:
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:iconfogke:
fogke Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Student Artist
many thanks ;)
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niavaah Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
the best picture i ever seen here
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fogke Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Student Artist
thanks !
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7oretta Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011   Photographer
one of the most touching pictures i've seen lately.
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fogke Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Student Artist
thank you
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Puuronen Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Professional General Artist
This is haunting and beautiful at the same time. Very unique idea which you made work perfectly. Fantastic again!
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fogke Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student Artist
thanks man ;)
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xcho20 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011
wow! great shot!:)
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:iconfogke:
fogke Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011  Student Artist
thank you
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greenngold Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011
Surreal. Love it
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:iconfogke:
fogke Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011  Student Artist
thank you
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Malgorzatawiatr Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011
I don't know if you understand me, but
JA PIERDOLE!!!

:)

You're master!

<3
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fogke Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011  Student Artist
oh, thanks ! :)
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CrazyPersikGirl Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! :D
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fogke Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011  Student Artist
:D thx
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Jellyhair Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
My god. This is such an amazing photo. I love how raw everything about it is; how pale she is and the harsh enviroment of the photo. Truly amazing <3
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fogke Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2011  Student Artist
thank you ! :)
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Jellyhair Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2011
You're welcome ^^
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maxxy12 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011
she looks like an alien, or something from a sci-fi movie anyway :) really good :D
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:iconfogke:
fogke Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Student Artist
many thanks ;)
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maxxy12 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011
welcome :)
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yvesnoir Featured By Owner May 29, 2011
real nice
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fogke Featured By Owner May 30, 2011  Student Artist
many thanks ;)
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hecalledmejohnny Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
This is beyond my words. :heart:
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fogke Featured By Owner May 21, 2011  Student Artist
:hug: :thanks:
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hecalledmejohnny Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
:hug:
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