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Firework Safety Animation

Happy Fourth of July everypony! ^_^ or Everypony in America at least <3 

I hope you're all having a lovely holiday, and do be safe if you're out there setting off fireworks <3 Don't be an Applejack...make sure you take the proper safety precautions ^_^ 

Love you all, 

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Penguin-Potential's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

While I love you and all your animations, I have to take a few points off from a perfect score.

Vision is 3/5 only because of the roughness. Clean lines alone would have boosted this to 5/5.

Originality is 5/5 for great character development in such a short time.

Technique is 5/5 for such smooth animation, no slacking in your 24 FPS! Weight and anticipation are spot-on!

Impact is 4/5 for the roughness as well. Compared to your finished "Style Dialogue Animation", impact was a bit underwhelming. Had this been critiqued once lined and/or colored, I would have given full marks. Never stop challenging yourself and improving.
ElementOf-Loyalty's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This is thee most inspiring animation I have ever seen as a patriotic American.
The vision begins as funny and ends with gut rumbling laughter.The originality is from the mind of a true patriot.The technique is of an epic scale.The impact runs the total gauntlet of positive emotions.I would demand of the whole Deviantart community to double the numbers of followers for the genius of FluttershyKind .
It is with a bloated heart,filled with American citizen happiness,never pride,I bestow this animation of Applejack n Fluttershy and total number of Twenty Gold Stars

Jackie is a great Pony for teaching us what never to do with dangerous fireworks.
FluttershytheKind's avatar
Oh my goodness, thank you so so much ^_^ I am so delighted you liked my work <3 and thanks so much for taking the time to critique it as well ^_^
ElementOf-Loyalty's avatar
I think this is a great gift beside the new MLP episode.
terrymouse's avatar
I must say, I've always been impressed with your animations, and your expressions are simply astounding, and this honestly is no different. I have to admit, I'm jealous of your ability to animate so well, and you always use such simple shapes, but they work together to make some of the smoothest online animation I've seen to date!

Having Applejack dang near blow herself up and Fluttershy being so overly cautious of a sparkler that practically couldn't seriously hurt a fly is just so typical and yet you just breathe more life into that tried and true bit of humor.
 Fluttershy Nervous Smile Applejack - Hurpaderp 
goosetooth's avatar
this is so cute and inspiring ;v;
befree2209's avatar
I absolutely love this. It's so freaking cute!!!
CHRlSTOPHER's avatar
You should polish this up for the upcoming July 4th :D
FuturitsicCrystal's avatar
:3 :3 :3 OMG AJ is nocked out! Flutters in this animation is exactly like me on the 4 of July and New Years.
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KingArthur5's avatar
This is fantastic! Great work! I can almost even hear the sound effects and them speaking!
Luckysweep's avatar
I am a complete Applejack. I just run like hell the instant the fuse is lit.
LinkFreak9999's avatar
Forget critiquing this. I've been watching this for three minutes straight and I still can't get enough!
HobbesTCat's avatar
This is the best thing i've seen in a long time. I love it. Love 
verulence's avatar
Every time you make a new animation I'm like can't get any cuter than this. Then you make a new one and I die all over again. One day you'll actually kill me I swear.
shadowring123's avatar
hahaha i love AJ at the end  "Wooo!" *face plant* great work very smooth
YesImDeadpool's avatar
OH Applejack, you's a silly Pony. XD
MegaPatron's avatar
lol this is to cute!
JJ-Snake's avatar
I just LOVE your animations!!
AnimeStrife009's avatar
Ahahahahaha! Ya haven't lived till you've been blown up by something, right AJ? XD

This is awesome! Love it! :D
ColonelYeo's avatar
Dear Lord this is brilliant, Flutters. Very well done! :clap:
TM2-Dinobot's avatar
Yep, no, perfect. 
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