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I Tried, I Did



so i made a comic
inspired by real life events
um i hope you can understand everything?
if not, comment and i'll explain

anyway i would really appreciate feedback since this is my first comic~

it's also on tumblr




field - Reseliee - fav.me/d75zxfc
mountain - Ayame0126 - fav.me/d51ulwd
models - NoUsernameIncluded - fav.me/d83plw2 / fav.me/d5hveql





thank you for reading 

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:icondoomsweater89:
DoomSweater89 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha same
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2017
existential morbid comedy is my favorite
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:icondoomsweater89:
DoomSweater89 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ayyyy same 
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iiFlamingRosesPMC Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2016
:C How sad.
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016
ah i'm glad i could evoke some emotion~
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:icontsubasanesora:
TsubasaneSora Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
T-T Oh my god, this is depressing
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016
i'm sorry ; v;
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:icontsubasanesora:
TsubasaneSora Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
It's okay ;-;
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:iconvocagumimegpoid:
VocaGUMImegpoid Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2016  Student General Artist
aaaaa this is beautiful but very saad ;;v;;
great job senpaaii youre senpai now
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2016
aah thank you~
i'm glad you like it
nuu that's too much responsibility for me
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:iconvocagumimegpoid:
VocaGUMImegpoid Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2016  Student General Artist
welcoomee
of course ;;v;;
its okay you dont have to do anything just keep being awesome
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2016
oh my i'm flattered ( /// v /// )
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:iconvocagumimegpoid:
VocaGUMImegpoid Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2016  Student General Artist
hehe 8D
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:iconweillend:
Weillend Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016  Hobbyist
The fact that the other girl didn't want help is a bit strange, but the comic is still nice to read. I like the render as well (the effects, the typo, the colors and so on).
Good job! 
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
that's what i thought, but now i've just learned to accept it and move on
thank you ♥
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:iconixcva007:
Ixcva007 Featured By Owner May 7, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
i'm crying so hard right now so sweet and sad aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner May 7, 2016
hnnnnnnnn gomen
here have some tissues
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:iconsethsychice:
SethSychice Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2016
Hey can I do a voice over of this and post it on youtube? It's such a good comic!
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2016
oh my god really?
sure, go ahead
just put a link to here in the description~
oh and can you tell me when you post it because i'd love to see it ❤
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:iconblecat:
BleCat Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2016
Uwaaaaaaah that "She decided to wait" part was SO TRUEEE!!!! ;n;

It's like, they always say that they will be there for you, but they never actually try helping you.

I have experienced this so many times...
I know this is a late hug but here's a hug for you and me probably Hug 
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2016
i get a hug
you get a hug
everybody gets a hug
world group hug
seriously tho i always try to help however i can, but sometimes they just refuse to accept it
so i just want to let them know if they ever change their mind i'm still here~
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:iconblecat:
BleCat Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2016
That's a very big hug.

Wait... I thought you were the "falling one"?

Nao I'm the one falling ;w;
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2016
a very big hug indeed
noo sweetie don't fall
who'll drink all this coffee with me
the world needs you
actually i am neither because this is a representation of a relationship i had
but i was the one offering help
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:iconblecat:
BleCat Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2016
Awww okie

So the falling one, they feel the whole world neglecting them and everybody lying to them
They start to lose trusts in their own friends, refuse any helps at all
even though they are not strong enough to help themselves
They keep everything to themselves until they become familiar with the loneliness
And they decide they don't need anyone else

My story, literally ;n;
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Edited Apr 16, 2016
not as much feeling neglected as getting into the "bad" and incontrolable stuff such as alcohol, drugs, cutting, lying, stealing, kissing random people, pretending everybody hates them even tho they have friends who openly tell them they are loved very much and so on
darling, you're not lonely
there are wonderful people who'll accept you just as you are and you just need to find them
i know it's said a lot, but it's really true because it happened to me
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HopefulDreamer14 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016
I love this! :D
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2016
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HopefulDreamer14 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2016
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:iconnousernameincluded:
NoUsernameIncluded Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh wow this is really pretty darn

thank you for using my models bruh
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016
no prob bob
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:iconsleepyseiko:
SleepySeiko Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016
Impressive.
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016
thank you ❤
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:iconfaerea:
faerea Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Really powerful and provoking imagery! Wow.
Feedback: even though you placed narration on the "she" you were referring to, I found it a bit confusing. Maybe somehow define "her" from "her" somehow within narration. Maybe with font? Also, have you considered finishing with an image (no dialogue) that shows the status of the other charter (or more both) as a conclusion?
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016
i was thinking of using a different font, but then i realized
it refers to both of them
both stayed and were safe, from their own perspective
i kinda wanted to finish with her letting herself fall into the darkness because that was my main focus
it's not about the characters personally, but what they represent
one was strong enough to resist and try to help and the other wasn't, so she fell
it's the actual situation that happened to me
no one fell off an actual cliff tho
i hope that clears it out~
thank you very much ❤
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:iconfaerea:
faerea Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I see now what you mean by the story being both of them. I really think you have a striking message. I was moved for sure!
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016
i'm happy to hear that !
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:iconblockdt:
blockdt Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016
omg!!! this is so cool
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016
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:iconthehardstyler:
TheHardstyler Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG! Fantastic work! :O
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016
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:iconthehardstyler:
TheHardstyler Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! : )

And yes this story is some eally good work... c:
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:iconminaliajaebixtsuki:
MinaliAjaebixTsuki Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016  Student Artist
Mistress: Damn o - o thats harsh i would of grabbed her hand even so e-e/ not lettin no one turn into a rotten dark tomato D:!
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016
oh trust me i tried to grab her more times than i can count
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:iconminaliajaebixtsuki:
MinaliAjaebixTsuki Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016  Student Artist
Mistress: o - o/ than pull her in, don't need to count the many times its selfish to count the many times and get tired of grabbing her ya need to pull her in not grab her, because it wont do you need to pull her in for she can be save D:!!


Grob o - o..thoughts~
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2016
it's not up to me to decide about her life if she refuses tho
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MinaliAjaebixTsuki Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2016  Student Artist
Mistress: Well as a light you need to make choices for that person as well..it can come out selfish but they need to understand the hard light doesn't wish to let that one person go, experience life with full of beauty and light.
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:iconbindi-the-skunk:
Bindi-the-skunk Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
yikes.....
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016
yikes indeed
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:iconbindi-the-skunk:
Bindi-the-skunk Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
i like the effects you used 
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:iconfloramy:
Floramy Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016
ah i'm glad, because i really couldn't decide~
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