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Ballad of Mecha Pinkie Pie 00

Flamingo1986 (Zachary Rich) presents the cover page for his now ongoing storybook "My Little Pony: The Ballad of Mecha Pinkie Pie", where Pinkie Pie creates the ultimate party machine and the world of Equestria is changed forever.
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Hey everyone! Here's the cover page for my new storybook. Took me about 16 hours from start to finish (including sketching and thumbnails) and I'm quite proud of it! I've opened it up for critiques so feel free to apply your critical eye to it and let me know how I did. ^^ I'm up to panel 12 in the story so far...

Feel free to add me to your "watch" list for some epic pony madness! :D

• MLPFiM Original characters created by :iconfyre-flye: & Studio B • MLPFiM © Hasbro
• MLPBoMPP is in no way designed to infringe upon the rights of Hasbro and Studio B. It is, completely and utterly, a fan-based concept and intended for free distribution for the promotion of My Little Pony.
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AnMLPATfan's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
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I love this story!! This story is going to be popular right? Love what you done with that evil pony! Love the army ponies! Yay you included Powerpuff Girls This story is 1,000000000% cooler then it thought to be. Good Luck on making another story!

The Title Card is so intresting because it's awesome and Radical!

Love what you did with Pinkie Pie.

Smells like Strawberries
MECHA PINKIE PIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Looks Amazing! The Logo is........................................... RADICAL! I LOVE THIS FIC! LOVE THE LETTERS! I ABSOLUTELY ADORE IT! WE LOVE YOUR FIC!
EvaSharpchan's avatar
Where is the PPG?
cresent34's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This one's for the work as a whole rather than just one pic.

Frankly, I'm not even sure where to begin, so blown away I am by this, and I'm not even what you'd call a hard-core 'bronie'.

Certainly looks like something you'd find in the kids' section of Barnes & Noble. Must have taken a long time just to even get as far as you have gotten recently.

You also did a good job on maintaining suspense & awe as well. Not to mention making it look like an officially authorized storyline, too.

Good luck on seeing this through to completion.
FlamingoRich's avatar
Thank you so much for the official critique! Your wording, grammar, and artistic insight are on a professional level. It's wonderful to have a critic look at my storybook as a whole, instead of just one individual panel - because in the end, it's the story that truly matters to the viewer, not how good the art is. :D
cresent34's avatar
Anytime...I thought that if I'm going to do a critique, I might as well make it a good one.

Though to be honest, I'm more a 'talented amateur' as far as critiques go...this is only my second one. :blush:
FlamingoRich's avatar
Well you have a gift for it! Keep critiquing and you'll only get better and better. ^^
cresent34's avatar
Just need to maintain my subscription, I guess.
KirbyFluttershy's avatar
Wow... this is a pretty nice cover... =3
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cadpig1099's avatar
Pinkie's missing four eyelashes and two nostrils xD
later on after you finish double rainboom are you going to plan to make this into another full episode like double rainboom? just out of curiosity
FlamingoRich's avatar
nah - I DO plan on finishing this (the whole story has about 80 panels) - and I DO plan to put very very very minor animation while I narrate to it and release it on YouTube. But definitely not a full episode.
Nice! Btw thanks for the reply anyway. most people don't reply to me.
Holhander's avatar
NOPE...THAT AINT CREEPY AT ALL...:iconapplejacklieplz:
cadpig1099's avatar
Wait... Mecha... Robots... Must... Not... Have... MLPxSonicgasm... :iconpinkiegaspplz:

:iconcrazysmileyplz: OMGMLPSONICGASM
nuke1007's avatar
mecha pinkie pie...hmmm this sounds interesting
CybertronikPony's avatar
You forgot Pinkie's nostril! :noes:
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RareHare's avatar
it "A Very ***GABBER*** Christmas". Full of madness.
LolOutLoud16's avatar
I luvs it,but I think the mecha Pinkie is going to haunt my dreams XD!

Am I the only brony who is waiting for season 8 of MLP:FiM?
ScarletMarine's avatar
Uh, who's that purple mare?
FlamingoRich's avatar
He's an OC character of mine, "Count Maleficio". He's the central villain of the storybook.
ScarletMarine's avatar
I will wipe you (Count Maleficio) from the Earth! YOU WILL DIE LIKE A CAPITALIST PIG! Mueren los perro del infierno! (English: DIE DOG OF HELL!) BACK TO YER CAGE, BITCH! Perro travieso! (English: Mischievous DOg) I AM THE TRUE UED/MEF COMMANDER! YOU (Count Maleficio) BITCH AND YOUR ROBOT CAN'T TOUCH ME!
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