Vargis is a awesome pin up photo and artist. from way back. you might like them
Very pretty indeed.
I like it, but I would have gone a little more to the side if I were you, just a little.
yeah i had very limited space in the garden soo many chairs there's nowhere to move
Then maybe try and have her turn her head a little more away from the camera at least. See what that does. I'm referring to how they did posters in the old days were you would wither do a more full on face shot or more to the side, and right now it's a little in between.