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Hiya, anyone reading this, I am in need of critique on this picture, I have been working on it for over two weeks but I can't seem to get it to a level that I am happy with, I have to have this picture ready for printing before April 5th

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dragoness96 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
it's looking great! i have not done a critique before so sorry if i'm not all that helpful. perhaps finishing the tree you've got outlined, it'll add a bit more colour than just blue and grey in the background. i like the fact you've gone with a bright colour for the snake in the foreground, it makes it really stand out. but what is going on with it's left eye? is it blind in that eye or something? the fact that there is a white spot sort of draws your attention away from the rest of the picture in my opinion. other than that i can't think of anything else to say. though a more experienced artist would be able to help you out more.
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Flamelight-Dash Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I did notice that fact about the eye, I just haven't changed it yet, and you're spot on with it being blind in that eye, but I might change that, and with the colour, I got it from a drawing prompt, other than that thank you for your input, it's been most helpful
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dragoness96 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
glad to help.
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