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First the technical stuff.  This is a story for adults and Breast Expansion (BE) enthusiasts.  If you aren't the former, you shouldn't be reading it.  If you aren't the latter you've been warned.

Well, apparently these chapters keep getting longer and longer.  Seeing as this is the longest one thus far, I've thrown out the 4.5 label that I intended to use and referenced in the description of Chapter 4 and just labeled this as Chapter 5.  I hope everyone enjoys!  As always, comments and feedback are appreciated.  Seriously, I get a kick out of comments and appreciate any suggestions on making this series better as it goes on.

Also, if you're taking advantage of the suggestion at the end of this chapter, just make sure to clearly indicate it in your comment.

I would be remiss if I did not thank Steve Palmer for writing the original story which provided the basis for my chapters.  Personally, I consider him the aspirational standard against which every BE story should be measured.  If you haven't read his work and "New Beginnings" in particular, you should do so ASAP.  The majority of his stories are available for free if you search for his name as the author over at the website The Overflowing Bra (www.overflowingbra.com).  I would also like to mention that I had absolutely no hand in creating the preview image.  It is by an artist named Paul Forrest who provided illustrations for the original and earliest Steve Palmer stories.  I use his work as a preview in the spirit of Palmer's original work.
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noviecaine Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
Nice Job
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Fitzbattleaxe Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
Thanks!  Glad you enjoyed.
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dethson Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
A fine line drawing.
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Fitzbattleaxe Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
Sure, but what do you think of the story?  The picture isn't my work.
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js1234 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
Breaking the fourth wall angle, nifty!

OK, Judy! How did you come to know this Mike Fitzbattleaxe who has been kind enough to relay your story to us?
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Fitzbattleaxe Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
I'll relay your question!  Look for the answer at the end of the next chapter. :)
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js1234 Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
Sweet!
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tusdine Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for continuing this series. Please, keep going. Or just keep writing in general.
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Fitzbattleaxe Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
No prob.  No promises on when the next chapter will pop up, but I have plans.
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ryver8 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Another great chapter!! I really love the length of it too. Hopefully there will be much, much more like this in the future.
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Fitzbattleaxe Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
I'll see what I can do.  Looking forward to more from you too.
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Chacotay Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Hopefully we see an installment where the machine breaks and leaves someone growing against their will! Hehe.
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Fitzbattleaxe Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Instinct kinda makes me want something like that to happen too, but I've got some plans and that would throw a monkey wrench in them.  Also, I'm not all that into the "against their will" part.  Still, I hope you enjoyed this chapter and there will be more when I can cobble together another one.
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Hattushilish Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
great! you have been writing quite the saga
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Fitzbattleaxe Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
Thanks!  Let me know what you think of it once you've had a chance to give it a proper read.
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Hattushilish Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
well I love measurements and you're generous with them. I have to learn more of your style
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Fitzbattleaxe Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Thanks!  I like measurements too as I think you can tell.  I actually do to a decent amount of effort trying to come up with plausible numbers using a tape measure, some string, and reference art.  As far as my style, I'm not sure what there is to learn or how distinct a style I actually have.  I mean, I'm not trying to write in a particular style, this is just the way I write.  If anything, sometimes I wonder if I'm getting too bogged down in details.
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Hattushilish Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Man, most people into this appreciate details regarding boobs, the rest, not so much, but I know that many BE fans do, even when not breast related.
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Fitzbattleaxe Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Good to know.  I guess I'll keep being my naturally very detailed self.
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Hattushilish Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
lol it is good
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Hattushilish Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
indeed :P
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