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The Girl with the Crimson Mark

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Erica took a snip from her tea cup and sighed as she looked into it.  Her eyes looked up at the person her sat in her sofa in front of her.  A tall, aquamarine haired girl with large breasts sat there on her cushions, with an eager look on her face and yellow gift wrapped box in her lap.  She also had this odd red colored mark across her face for some reason.  Erica narrowed her eyes at the girl, not sure what to think.  This woman had appeared at her apartment only moments ago to wish her a happy birthday and invite herself.  However, that's not what really got her the most.

"So," Erica said, cocking her eyebrow, "You say… you're my brother?"

"That's right!" she nodded, her long hair flowing with her movement.

"My baby brother?"

"Uh-huh!" the girl said with a big smile.

"Gabriel…"

"That's me!" she cheerfully replied.

"Right," Erica said, taking another sip from her tea cup and setting it down, "I don't know how to say this, but… Gabriel… is a guy.  You, on the other hand, are a girl [a rather busty one at that].  You can see the problem here right?"

"I understand,' she said shaking her head, "But I'm your brother."

"Maybe I should spell this out better for you," Erica said, getting annoyed, "Gabriel is a bit chubby and does not an hourglass figure.  Gabriel has short brown hair, not long bluish greenish hair.  Gabriel is a teenager, not 25 or something like you.  Most importantly, Gabriel does not have boobs!"

"But I do now!" 'Gabriel' said gently squeezing them.  A flash of jealousy went through Erica's mind then and she thought, "Is this for real?  Who is this girl and is really trying to show off how big her breasts are in comparison now?!"

"Look," Erica said standing up from her chair, "I think you should leave.  You're starting to piss me off."

"I really am your brother," the girl said jumping to her feet, chest bouncing appropriately and ticking Erica off more, "I can prove it to you!  In fifth grade, I kicked the butts of two bullies who were trying to cut your hair on the playground.  Two weeks ago, I gave you some money to pay off a parking ticket; an extra twenty bucks you didn't have then!  Christmas three years ago, I got a present that Rick Rolled you when you opened it up!  When you were 12, you punched me so hard that I was out for a full minute after I put a fake spider in your school lunch!"

"Holy crap," Erica said stepping back, "How the hell do you that!"

"It's me!" the girl said running up to her and grasps her hands, "It's your brother!"

The girl almost looked like she was about to cry and Erica looked closely into her eyes.  Even though the girl didn't look like him, there was no other person she could think of that would know all of that.  She said gently, "You… you are Gabriel.  Baby bro…"

Gabriel's eyes lit up and she squealed, "Oh big sis!"

The girls hugged happily now that Erica finally understood, though in the back of her mind, she was still pissed that her brother, now sister, had a bigger rack then her.  The two stepped back from each other and Erica looked over the girl once more. "This is unreal!" she said, "You look like an anime character!"

Gabriel smiled, "That's because I am now!"

"Okay then," Erica said scratching her head, "So… how the hell did… this happen to you?"

"Well," the anime girl said, "It all started earlier today…"

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11:23 A.M. and Gabriel is out on the prowl.  The town was having one of its huge events, where one entire neighborhood had every house hosting a garage sale.  There were tons of undiscovered treasures going for cheap, affordable prices on every driveway to be found.  He hoped to find something really good for his older sister at one of the sales.  Her birthday was today and he still couldn't find her something good.  These sales were has last chance before he would end up just getting her some gift cards to some random clothing or book stores in the area.

"Got to be something good around here," he talked to himself, "She got a new Blu-ray player, so maybe I could find her some movies?  Or the Wii she has.  Doesn't have many games, so perhaps I find something there?  Ugh, I need something!"

He glanced around and noticed a driveway coming up with a bunch of tables out with games and movies on them.  He headed to that sale, hoping for something good.  He reached one of the tables, shifting through the movies on it.  "Has this one," he thought as he went over each film, "Hates that one, never seen, has this, doesn't want to see…"

"Excuse me sir," a mature female voice said, "Is there anything I can help you with?"  He turned around and was greeted by a large pair breasts in his face.  He stepped back away and saw that gorgeous looking female.  She sported jean shorts and pink, low cut top with spaghetti straps that hugged her tall, curvaceous form.  And what a form it was!  Large, soft DD, no… EE-cup breasts, curvy hips with great round and firm butt, and top it off with a thin waist to make one spectacular hourglass figure.  Tearing his eyes away from her body, Darren look to her face and was greeted by lovely knockout.  She had a sweet smile with plump lips, but not too plump to make her look odd; kind blue eyes, and long strawberry blonde hair that looked like it was well taken care of.

"Aaaaaaaahhhhhhh…" Gabriel said, in awe of the female who stood before him.

She chuckled and said, "Settle down boy, I'm not worth going all ga-ga over, even though I am a damn good looker.  Just tell me what you need and I can hopefully help you."

Gabriel snapped back to normal and said with a blush, "Oh… sorry… ahh… I'm just looking at your movies here and seeing what you have.  My sister's birthday is coming up and I thought I could find her a movie she may like…"

The woman's eyes brighten and she said, "Well aren't you sweet! I'm sure she'll be happy with whatever you get her… except for that one."  She pointed to his hand, where he was still holding the movie he was looking at before she interrupted him.  The movie in question was Human Centipede.

"Oh!" he said realizing the movie he was holding and tossing it back onto the table, "Right!  She won't want that film."

"Yep," she said with a smile, but then she frowned and rubbed her chin, "Hmm… I still don't know why I ever bother that film in the first place.  Maybe it was when that video store went out of business?"

As Gabriel looked at the woman talk to herself, something struck him.  He remembered seeing this person before.  Not in real life, but in an anime he was watching.  It was… Bleach!  That's it.  He recognized her face and certain body features before.  She was…

"Rangiku!" Gabriel said pointing at her.

The girl looked at him with a puzzled look, "Excuse me?"

"You are Rangiku from Bleach!" he stated with certainty.

She looked at him with an odd look, before it turned to a sly smile.  "I see," she said flickering her hair back, "My name is Jessie *coughJDcough* but I am also Rangiku."

"Wha?" he said, confused by that statement.

"Follow me over here and I'll explain," Jessie said nodding towards the main table in front of the garage door.  Gabriel followed her as she said, "You see.  My friend and I found this very nice spray can awhile back called Costume in a Can.  One spray and you become a whole new you!"

"Okay…" he said, "Following you so far…"

"Take a look at said product," Jessie said, stopping in front of the table and handing him a tin spray can from it, "You'll see what I mean."  Gabriel took the can and looked it over.  It read: 'Costume in a Can: Anime Babe Bleach Edition.  Ready for your enjoyment!  One spray and one new you guaranteed.  Warning: Do not spray into open flames and does not mix well with suntan lotion.  Effects may last up to an hour to a week depending on the amount of spray used.  Side Effects Include: Runny Nose, Upset Stomach, Happy and Accepting Feelings, and Itching and or Sensitive Skin.  Do not use if pregnant.'

"Alright then," he said handing her the can, "I don't see what you mean.  Break it down a little bit more."

Jessie rolled her eyes and explained, "Basically, one spray of this tin can and you'll turn into one of the lovely ladies of the anime Bleach.  As you can see, I turned into Rangiku.  The fun part of it is that the spray works on all genders.  Male?  This can will take care of it!"

"So…"

Jessie smiled proudly and said, "Yep, used to be your average young adult male, but now?  I am the perfection of womanhood!"

"Apparently," a voice said walking up from behind the table, "Another side effect seems to be an increase of ego."  The two turned and Gabriel got a lot another familiar face.  It was Yoruichi, but wearing a blue jean skirt and a blue t-shirt with some sports logo he never seen before.

"I'm just joking!" Jessie giggled, and then pointing at her, "This here is Rachel, now Yoruichi.  She used to be a blue slime girl, but as you can tell, the spray did a bit of work on her."

"Indeed," Rachel said, "So, who is this little guy?"

"Why he's…" Jessie said pushing him forward for Rachel to get a better look, "He's… I dunno."

"Ah," the teen said, "My name is Gabriel.  I'm just here looking to see if I can find a present for my sister's birthday."

"Oh ain't he a sweetie pie!" Rachel said cheerfully, and then giving Jessie a harsh look, "Just don't forget, my birthday is coming up soon and I don't want you to forget."

"I wouldn't forget!" Jessie said giving her the thumbs up, "Not a chance in the world my love!"

"Good," she replied, and then looking at Gabriel, "So, how about one of these spray cans? They are a lot of fun, getting to look like someone else for a while.  Not to mention, they give you this great feeling and make you so happy to be like this!"

"If it is so good, then why are you two selling this stuff?"

"Apparently my boyfriend currently girl next to you thought it would be a good idea to buy fifty or more boxes of this stuff," Yoruichi said, folding her arms and giving Jessie a look.

"So I went overboard a little bit," she said sticking her tongue out, "Big deal!"

"Well we just don't need these many boxes of this stuff," Rachel explained, "We'll keep seven of them for ourselves, but the rest has got to go.  So, anyhow, you think your sister would be interested in one of these spray cans?"

"I don't think so," Gabriel said, "She's not a big Bleach or even anime fan."

"Well then," Jessie said, "How about you?  You interested?  We'll give you one quick spray to try it out.  The effects will only last one hour, so you don't have to worry about being stuck all day or anything."

"Me?" Gabriel said, "I dunno.  I am fine as I am."

"Oh come on!" Rachel said, "Live a little!  Aren't you curious about being someone different for a little bit?  It could be fun!  Try new things!"

"I'm not sure if body morphing is something everyone should do," Jessie said.

Gabriel thought for a moment.  It could be interesting being and feeling like someone else, if only for an hour.  "Well," he said, "Does it hurt?"

"No," Jessie said, "It's actually rather pleasant, except with your pants or shirt gets tight when your hips grow or breasts come in."

"Well…" he said nervously, "I don't see why not."

Rachel's eyes glowed with excitement and she said, "That's great!  Make sure to close your eyes before I spray you and when I'm done, take a look at the mirror we brought out to get a good look as your body changes.  Let's have some fun!"

Gabriel took a deep breath and exhaled.  He closed his eyes and Rachel gave him a quick blast from one of the spray cans.  He sneezed slightly and opened his eyes.  He then said asked, "How long does this normally take?"

"It should take about a minute or two," Jessie shrugged, "It varies from person to person more or less."

"Okay then," Gabriel spoke, but now a more girlish one came out.  He gasped, "Oh my!  My voice… it sounds like a girl's!  It's… pretty cute!"

He blushed at the statement, but the girls only gave him approving smiles.  "Wow," Gabriel said shyly, "My voice is so different now!  It sounds nothing like normal one, but…"

"But?" Rachel asked curiously.

Gabriel couldn't help but smile and giggle, "I really like it!"  Maybe the extra effects of the spray were kicking in now, but he was really liking the change so far.  He can't believe he even hesitated before.  This was going to be very fun after all!

He turned to the full length mirror next to the table and looked into it eagerly.  As he gazed into it, his eyes turned from their dull brown to a pretty hazel color.  He smiled happily, even more so when his lip plumped up a bit.  His nose shorten up a bit; his cheekbones and chin restructured their selves into a more female shape; his skin soften and cleared off blemishes; and finally, a crimson mark stretched across his face.  His usual face was now replaced with that of lovely young woman with an odd mark to say the least.

"Wow," he said and touching his pretty face, "This unbelievable!"

"Considering the things that happen to us," Jessie muttered under her breath, but still loud enough for Gabriel to overhear, "This is pretty believable, even when it first happened."  Gabriel noticed another change happening.  His skin turned slightly darker, giving him a light tan.  His body and muscle mass began to shrink down to a more feminine physique, losing all the unnecessary fat that was in his way to womanhood.  His skin became smooth, hairless, and soft. He was structurally built like Jessie, but minus the curves and figure yet, causing his black shirt and tan shorts to feel very loose on his body.

"Not too bad," Jessie commented, "Looking good so far!"

"Really?" he said turning to face her, "That's great!"  Surprisingly enough, instead of staring into her breasts like he thought he would, he was now at her neck line.  His legs and torso stretched upwards, now putting him at eye level.  Finally, his height stopped with him staring directly at her forehead.

"Cool!" he said, "Now I'm taller than you!"

"Ah great," Jessie pouted, folding her arms with annoyance, "Just what I need!"

"Something the matter?"

"She's just upset with what's happening," Rachel said with a grin, "She always knows what girl you are turning into and she believes her to be the only rival fit to match her in curves and looks.  In other words, she's starting to get jealous!"

"I am not!" Jessie said.

Gabriel turned away from the two as they began to argue with each other.  Staring into the mirror, he saw that his brown hair had turned greenish blue in a matter of seconds.  It then started cascading down from his shoulders and down to his rear.  It was thick, heavy, and had a silky feel to it.  With his new hair, he now knew the form he was taking.

"I'm Nelliel!" Gabriel said running his hand through his hair, "I should have known by just seeing the mark on my face!"

He sighed happily.  Nelliel, or Nel, was so beautiful and now he was going to be too!  Was the spray altering his feelings about this, bringing forth a hidden woman side to him, or is he accepting this and these feelings freely?  It didn't matter.  He was going to turn into a gorgeous woman and he was loving it.  Erica was going to have a new sister soon!

His eyes widen with glee as he felt another change going on.  It was coming from below the belt area and looked down to his crotch area.  Carefully, he stretched his pants and underwear to look.  There was no male part anymore, just a female one instead.  An overwhelming sense of joy flowed through him.  He, now she, was a real woman.

She let go of her pants when she felt another feeling go through her.  She lifted up her shirt slightly and watched as her waist pushes inwards a bit, setting the base for an hourglass figure.  The tingling feeling fell downwards, back into her hip region.  Her thighs thicken to a more feminine build, rubbing up against each other; her hips widen for some nice curves, and her butt plumped up to a nice shapely rear.  She had to quickly respond to the amount of pressure building up by unzipping her jeans to give her hips and butt more room to grow into their proper sizes.

Gabriel grew more and more excited with each passing change.  There was one [well technically two] thing left and she would be complete.  Right on schedule, two small lumps appeared her chest, growing outwards into a size A-Cup, not yet visible underneath her shirt.  Still, she could feel them and she blushed, thinking to herself, "They're coming… oh my!"

Her breasts grew to a size B, pushing and rubbing against her t-shirt gently.  A warm feeling shot through her, but she tried to ignore it, focusing intently on her chest.  They swelled into a C-Cup, now stretching the fabric of her clothes and raising her shirt up, revealing some of her stomach and the top curve of her hips.

Her face grew redder and her breasts swelled again into a D-cup, stretching her shirt to its limits as it tried to hold her massive melons.  She started to pant a bit as her breasts were being squeezed tightly in the shirt.  "Oh…" she thought, closing her eyes "I didn't know boobs were so sensitive or maybe it's the spray with sensitive skin and all?"

She didn't think too much more about this and she heard a tearing sound.  Her eyes widen as she reopened to see the problem.  Her breasts jumped to a size E and had cause a tear down the middle of her shirt, revealing some of her cleavage.  Finally, they grew to a size EE, a few centimeters short of Jessie's exact size, and ripping the shirt even more and lifting it up to reveal her whole waist and bellybutton.  Thanks to these new tears, the pressure died off, but her warm feeling persisted in her.

However, it didn't matter now.  Gabriel looked up into the mirror and smiled, a bit embarrassed and still proud of the image before her.  The slightly chubby teenager was no longer visible, but an aquamarine goddess [Wait, did he just think of something that corny?] with an odd crimson mark on her face stood in his place.  She looked so happy and she was.

"So," she said, with a pleased voice, to the girls behind her, "How do I look?  I make a great Nelliel don't I?"

The two of them turned back and looked her over.  Rachel grinned, "You look great!  A splitting image of Nel if I ever saw one!"

Jessie blushed and said, "Yeah, you look just like her, minus the scar and skull on her head."

"Really?" she said excitedly, "Thank you!"  She gave the both of them big bear hugs, which felt funny with her enormous rack squishing against their own.

"So," Rachel said, "I suppose you want to buy some of the spray cans now?"

"You bet I do!" Gabriel said, pulling some money out of her pocket, difficult as it was considering the tightness of her jeans, "I'll take five cans!"

"Hmm…" Jessie said taking the money from her and looking it over, "There is twenty dollars here and it only costs five dollars for five cans."

"I know!" Rachel said, "We'll throw in a new set of clothing for you to better match your new figure!"

Gabriel glanced at her clothing.  They were too tight, stretched a bit, torn in some places, and personally not well suited for a girl like her.  She needed female clothing for sure.  She said shyly, "Yeah, I definitely could go for some new stuff."

"Okay," Rachel said taking her hand and leading her inside of the house, "I'm sure there is some of Jessie's clothing that would fit you.  You are definitely her size."

"If you give her some more stuff," Jessie said with annoyance, "Don't give her anything of my stuff that I really like!  That means the pink top and black jean skirt!"

A few minutes later, Rachel and Gabriel returned in her new clothing.  She wore black, open toe sandals, similar blue jean shorts like Jessie's that hugged her hips, pink laced panties and bra combo that was hidden underneath her clothing, and a light blue top with low neckline to show off her cleavage.  Jessie gave her a wink and smile, saying, "My my, aren't you a looker now with the rights clothes Gabriel?"

"Actually," she said nervously, "Please call me Gabrielle.  I… I think it is better suited for me when I'm like this."

"Hmm…" Jessie said, thinking out loud, "Simple name, but still pretty and cute.  I like it!"

"Thanks," she said with a blush, and she turned to Rachel, "And thank you for helping me find some better clothes, but did you have to get a shirt with such a low neckline?"

"Well Jessie here only gets shirts like that," Rachel nodded to her boy/girlfriend, "She likes showing off."

"I prefer to think that when I'm Rangiku," she said, "I start acting and feeling like her a bit, so I like having clothing that gives my girls some breathing room."

"You say whatever you want," Rachel said and then her attention back to Gabrielle, "So, now that we got you all happy, do you need some help finding a birthday present for your sister?"

"Oh that's right," Gabrielle gasped, "I need to find something…"

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"And that's pretty much it!" Gabrielle said, finishing her story to Erica.

"So a tin spray can has the power to turn you into a girl from some Japanese show for a while?" Erica said, scratching her head once again.

"Right," Gabrielle said, "Considering the amount of spray I used later, I'm only to be like this for at least half a day give or take."

"Oh?" she said, "What will mom and dad think about seeing their little boy all like this?"

"Yeah," Gabrielle said, "Well, I was wondering, if you would let me crash here in your apartment for the night and explain it to mom?  If you do, I'll try you to a girl's night out!"

"A girl's night out?"

"I know some of your friends are busy today so I want to spend time with you so you aren't lonely!" she said, "A girl's night sounds like a lot of fun, especially with your baby sister paying for it!"

"You know how to have a girl's night out?"

"Well sort of from watching a lot of silly movies in the past," she said embarrassed, "You could teach me though and we do this every now and then.  Come on!  The two of us, not brother and sister, but sisters going out and having fun!"

Erica smiled, enjoying her brother/sister's enthusiasm.  She sighed and said, "Well I guess that can be fun.  Okay then, a girl's night out is and it's all on you!"

"Okay!" Gabrielle said and then walking over to the couch and picking up the present that fell earlier, "And when it's all over, we can come back here and watch this!"

She had her sister the present, who opened it curiously.  Underneath the wrapping, it was a copy of the movie Dirty Dancing.  Erica's eyes lit up and she hugged Gabrielle tightly, "Oh thank you so much!  This was the movie I was missing from my collection!"

"Your welcome sis," Gabrielle smiled warmly, "I knew you would like it."  And with this event, the brother and sister would spend more time together and grow closer, though often at times as sisters.
And ta-da! We have another story all finished up for a new series I'm starting up. This time, this story was requested by shenron204, who requested to be turned into the adult form of Nel.

So we are up to the fourth story in this series and I hope to continue to grow it. Do you want in on this fun? Let me know! Leave a comment here or on my journal, Who Wants In?, to let me know if you want to a story about yourself turning into a Bleach girl.

Go here to the journal for more instructions about what I need to know in order to write the story:

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Anyhow, leave a comment about what you think and don't forget to check out the rest of the series here:

1st Story: [link]
2nd Story: [link]
3rd Story: [link]
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Out of all the Costume In a Can stories, this one remains my favorite. Hopefully there will be sequel to it at some point. ^^