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She's simple not complex. She's cute not gorgeous. She's smart not brainy. But because she's just average she's invisible.

When she hurts no one sees.
When she bleeds no one cares.
When she cries no one hears.

She's gentle not rough. She's kind not cruel. She's sweet not mean. Because of this she blends in with the crowds.

When she loves no one cares.
When she sighs no one hears.
When she smiles no one sees.

She's dark not bright. She's quiet not loud. She's sad not happy. She's EMO, she's nonexistent but constantly ridiculed.
EMO.
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xParanormalNerdx Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I relate except I'm not emo
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2017  Student Writer
Much love to you dear! It does get better. I wrote this as a teenager and now am 23, married, three kids, and a beautiful home. This was my reality and i am so glad Im one of the ones who had hope. If you ever get lost please reach out to me. ❤
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xParanormalNerdx Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aw...Life is better for me currently. But some nights I feel like this. Glad your life turned out alright! And I know mine will to if I keep my head up
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xParanormalNerdx Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This hurts me to read this because I know society is actually like this....If you relate to this poem please respond so I can help give some love that you need!
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abadSTiNKyJeffMyNama Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Professional General Artist
emos should be purged 4 out of 5 dentists recommend brushing your teeth! 
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2017  Student Writer
And perhaps you should rethink that statement considering many EMO children grow up to highly intelligent adults.

Have a lovely day.
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x-x-Cami-x-x Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It doesn't matter how nice you are to people.. They will still hate you for who you are.
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AngelWolves1 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow... so true... this is perfect in SO many ways, WONDERFUL work!!! :D:D:D
(And FINALLY something that actually doesn't have stereotypical things in it, not a bit!! I'm sure you've won all of these people's respect :D)
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!!!
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AngelWolves1 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!! :D:D
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sami53 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
omg this is awesome and i dont say that much anymore (cuz people dont like my sence of humor, my style, my ideas,and me) but this is awesomely awesome^-^
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Student Writer
Lol. thanks.
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sami53 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
your very welcome
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Cyodee Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sad... But nice wording..
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks.
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Cyodee Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome
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UKlinx233 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this my friend is great! wait... you mind read? XD
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Student Writer
LOL XDD
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UKlinx233 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*shruggs* what i do. :iconlikeabossmemeplz:
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Student Writer
I just saw your comment. Haha, sorry.
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UKlinx233 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem XD
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Student Writer
:)
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Angieotaku Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
That was beatiful very well done!
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you.
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Angieotaku Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You are very welcome~!
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StrawberryBonBons Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful. Touching. Wonderful. I love it :iconrainbowheartsplz:
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks!
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StrawberryBonBons Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
welcome :iconhappytearsplz:
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dementedangel1315 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing poem
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks!
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RACEofLIFE Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
exactly like me.
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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InukoHikari Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
emo... something that no one will ever understand...but everyone will be against of...loved your poem...:)
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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Sherrizzy Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Student Artist
<3 , explains it all .
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Student Writer
<3
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blackgirl28 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
is so true.
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks.
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Sphenos Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
yeah this is the 5th poem I've read and this contadicts quite a few of the others...
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Student Writer
Mines different because it's one persons experience.
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Sphenos Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
true and everyone in this world is unique as far as I know, except the people that deliberately try not to be unique to gain acceptance, I don't like those people. Interesting fact the definition of emo is 'a style of rock music...' I find that rather funny. It'd do better to be classical it suits it more :)
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Student Writer
True. I love your points!
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Sphenos Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
why thank you I like to keep my mind busy and these are just some of the random points I think about on a daily basis :)
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Student Writer
You are very welcome. And I like a person who thinks things out! It's refreshing.
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Sphenos Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
lol this conversation is getting interesting your use of words is very good I don't think I've heard refreshing in ages and I'm usually forbidden from speaking in large words because then people have trouble figuring out what I'm saying... only issue is that I draw blanks now when I want a specific word for an essay :P
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student Writer
Well I'm not exactly a child and I do write a lot. I find the need for large words more often than not. The idiocy that is society may be unable to comprehend what I say but at least I can readily express myself.

I know what you mean though, words are often forgotten when they remain unused.
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XxMidnightRainfallxX Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is me. I love it. :) Just started public school a couple months ago and this is my feelings exactly.
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Student Writer
:) Glad you like it!
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bloodiedfirewing Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Stop stalkin me dude
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Student Writer
lol
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