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Published: July 5, 2010
She's simple not complex. She's cute not gorgeous. She's smart not brainy. But because she's just average she's invisible.

When she hurts no one sees.
When she bleeds no one cares.
When she cries no one hears.

She's gentle not rough. She's kind not cruel. She's sweet not mean. Because of this she blends in with the crowds.

When she loves no one cares.
When she sighs no one hears.
When she smiles no one sees.

She's dark not bright. She's quiet not loud. She's sad not happy. She's EMO, she's nonexistent but constantly ridiculed.
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xParanormalNerdxHobbyist Traditional Artist
I relate except I'm not emo
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FireChic86Student Writer
Much love to you dear! It does get better. I wrote this as a teenager and now am 23, married, three kids, and a beautiful home. This was my reality and i am so glad Im one of the ones who had hope. If you ever get lost please reach out to me. ❤
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Aw...Life is better for me currently. But some nights I feel like this. Glad your life turned out alright! And I know mine will to if I keep my head up
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xParanormalNerdxHobbyist Traditional Artist
This hurts me to read this because I know society is actually like this....If you relate to this poem please respond so I can help give some love that you need!
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abadSTiNKyJeffMyNamaProfessional General Artist
emos should be purged 4 out of 5 dentists recommend brushing your teeth! 
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FireChic86Student Writer
And perhaps you should rethink that statement considering many EMO children grow up to highly intelligent adults.

Have a lovely day.
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It doesn't matter how nice you are to people.. They will still hate you for who you are.
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AngelWolves1Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow... so true... this is perfect in SO many ways, WONDERFUL work!!! :D:D:D
(And FINALLY something that actually doesn't have stereotypical things in it, not a bit!! I'm sure you've won all of these people's respect :D)
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FireChic86Student Writer
Thank you!!!
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You're welcome!! :D:D
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omg this is awesome and i dont say that much anymore (cuz people dont like my sence of humor, my style, my ideas,and me) but this is awesomely awesome^-^
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Lol. thanks.
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your very welcome
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CyodeeHobbyist General Artist
Sad... But nice wording..
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FireChic86Student Writer
Thanks.
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CyodeeHobbyist General Artist
your welcome
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UKlinx233Hobbyist General Artist
this my friend is great! wait... you mind read? XD
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FireChic86Student Writer
LOL XDD
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UKlinx233Hobbyist General Artist
*shruggs* what i do. :iconlikeabossmemeplz:
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FireChic86Student Writer
I just saw your comment. Haha, sorry.
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UKlinx233Hobbyist General Artist
no problem XD
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AngieotakuStudent Traditional Artist
That was beatiful very well done!
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FireChic86Student Writer
Thank you.
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