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You will read about me in the library soon  ahhahahahahahahahah   and they all expected that would be on the post office wall.


On Jul 22, 2009, at 9:39 AM, Sandy Palmer wrote:

cool

FYI  She is writting an art book  she has read your story about me.  

Begin forwarded message:

Hi, Robert,

Thanks for returning my phone call this morning. I really enjoyed talking with you and appreciate your sharing your story with me. It is quite moving.

I'm sorry I missed your follow-up call. I had a business meeting at noon.

I have read two of your stories on your Web site's "Tell me a story" page. You asked me to critique them. I am happy to try.

The first is funny military humor. You and my husband laugh at lighting farts! It must have been quite a funny scene.

"I Remember Heaven" is an interesting and very personal memoir. The combat portion is very descriptive. Writing it in the first person is effective, allowing the reader to see and feel events through your senses. Your near-death experience is fascinating. The piece tells an unusual story about war from a perspective that I've never read before. How comforting it is to know that a happy, beautiful place awaits us.

I assume you received one or more Purple Hearts. Are there medals that I should mention in your bio?

Have a wonderful week.

~~ Jini Clare
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Congratulations! :w00t:
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Thank You
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Oh wow. Good for you!
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Thank you very much
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You're welcome. :heart:
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F N awesome
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;-) thanks
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