Now that I know what this is all about, some suggestions.
Meh, I'm not the best graphic designer out there.
I like the earth background.
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Since this is a death scene, after all, maybe it should be a bit more sad? I don't know. I know that was the single saddest point of the whole episode. If I were to plot sadness on an epigraph this'd be the peak. With a slightly smaller peak when Nunnally is beginning Lelouch to open his eyes. And then a slightly small one where the crowd's shouting Zero and Nunnally is sobbing her eyes out. A propagated outbreak?
Maybe have the moment when his eyes are half closed or something.
Or if you're aiming for "he's not really dead"! keep it that way. I like it.
Gotta go do more SCIENCE. *evil Light laugh*