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Soul Fire Chapter 46

Soul Fire a NaruHina fan ficVolume 5Chapter 46: OpinionsThe hidden tree house had been unusually quiet all day. Even the resident’s gruelling outdoor training sessions had been a subdued affair. The three ninja had each been keeping to themselves as much as they could. It seemed all were feeling rather uneasy after the events of the previous night.It was mid-afternoon now, and it was time for the teenagers’ weekly medical examinations. Hinata was in the living room waiting for her turn while Hitomi checked on Naruto. The infirmary door had been left open, and even though she tried not to, the girl couldn’t help but hear what was being said...

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Soul Fire Chapter 45

Soul Fire a NaruHina fan ficVolume 5Chapter 45: ConfusionThe number 45 training ground was one of the most battered, broken, devastated, and often loudest places in the Leaf Village. This was due largely to the fact that it was the preferred training ground of one of the Leaf’s best and most heavily drilled ninja squads. The leader of this squad was considered a slave driver by some, insane by others, and weird by just about everybody.“Alright, Team Guy, let’s make good use of this downtime,” Might Guy said with his usual excess of enthusiasm. “We’ve been taking it too easy these last few months. This is the perfect opportunity to get back...

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Soul Fire Chapter 44

Soul Fire a NaruHina fan-ficVolume 5Chapter 44: DissentionThe forest was looking toward the end of another day. Deep in its shadowy depths, near the foot of the mountains, the rocky clearing had finally fallen silent. The three noisy residents who occupied the house above had finished their outdoor activities for now. But, busy as always, they still seemed to have more work to do. Although the evening meal was finished and cleaned away, a light was still peeking out from the kitchen window, though it was flickering a bit."That damn generator," Hitomi said, tapping on the light bulb. "Remind me to take a look at it before it gets too dark, ...

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Soul Fire Chapter 43

Soul Fire a NaruHina fan ficVolume 5Chapter 43: LoyaltyFew who lived in the Leaf knew how deep the foundations of their village went. Beneath the earth, hidden from the light of the sun, unseen and unknown except to a few, miles of cavernous tunnels cut through the bedrock on which the village stood.Not so long ago, these tunnels had been the domain of an organisation even more secretive than the ninja village built upon them. An organisation which likened itself to the roots of a great tree; hidden beneath the earth in darkness, silently supporting what stood above. Most of the few people who had ever even known of its existence believed ...

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Soul Fire Chapter 42

Soul Fire a NaruHina fan-ficVolume 5Chapter 42: Thoughts, fears and difficult decisions.Neji hurried down the hallways of the Hyuuga manor. He couldn't afford to be late. His uncle had awoken from his coma just a few days ago, and already he'd called all of the clan's elders to a meeting. Whatever announcement Lord Hiashi was going to make, he didn't want to miss a word of it.He arrived at the doors to the clan meeting hall. The murmur of conversation from inside told him that he had arrived on time. He took a moment to straighten his robes before entering.Inside the hall, the tension was palpable. Neji scanned the room. The head family ha...

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Soul Fire Chapter 41

Soul Fire a NaruHina fan ficVolume 5Chapter 41:Dust motes sparkled as they drifted lazily across the shafts of mid-morning sunlight trickling through the windows. The young woman just sat at the kitchen table and watched them float. She could hear the ever present rustling of the wind in the trees. Sometimes she just liked to lie on her bed and listen to it. It was so calming.Hinata loved living there in the tree house. It was quiet and peaceful, and free of all the stresses of her old life. Here, nobody tried to compare her to anyone else. There was nobody that condemned her, or judged her. It was just her and Hitomi and Naruto.She was st...

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Interview Your Character

INTERVIEW YOUR CHARACTER (YOUNG ADULT VERSION)CONCEPT: Choose an original character you have created. All questions must be answered from the character's perspective. The character should remain "in character" throughout the interview. The character may refuse to answer a given question, but must say something in reply to it. The character must answer truthfully, but that does not necessarily mean that their answers must be true, only that the character believes them to be true. Have fun.CHARACTER:SETTING:CATEGORIES: . DESCRIPTION . VITAL STATISTICS . FAMILY . PERSONALITY . ABILITIES AND TRAITS . RELATIONSHIPS . HISTORY AND INFLUENCES . ...

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A few days ago this week, I had the strangest urge to go to the Sundial bridge. The Sundial bridge in Redding, a few minutes away from my home.I had no reason to go, except this random gut feeling. So I went...and as I was there, something told me to go into the gardens they have there, having never gone there before. But I didn't end up going, and so I went home and I was bummed that nothing significant had happened.Over the past few days I have been exceptionally depressed about my husband, and the thought of him. Lately God has told me to give up Shipping and forget about cute romance drawings and things of that nature; because I am con...

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The Hokage Trap by Shawny Wong Prologue "Are you sure there are no more available appointments with Hokage-sama for the next six weeks?"The Hokage's personal assistant smiled sympathetically at the young lady standing before him. "I'm sure, Megumi-san. I've checked and double checked his calendar. Hokage-sama is a very busy man. He works very hard for everyone in the village.""But I was so hoping to see him," Megumi pouted. "I have something important to discuss with him!"The Hokage's personal assistant didn't budge."I'm sorry. Perhaps if you explain what you need from Hokage-sama, I can direct you to one of our department heads. ...

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Hidden Love Ch.15

Hidden Love Ch.15Naruto had had a lot of awkward moments in his past. But the situation he was in right now had to be, without doubt, the worst of the bunch.He had gotten through the rough talk about Hinata's attackers, and even discussing what they would do now that someone had known of their relationship. All had gone so well, they had even gotten a few laughs mixed togetherand then he had to go and do something like kiss her.Not that kissing her is wrong, but the way he did it was not something you'd read in those romance novels. The look of shock on her face said it all 'What just happened?' Without a second thought he smack himself ...

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Detour - Valentine's Day

One Small Detour: Valentine's Day a One Small Step Omake by Shawny Wong Naruto had never seen so much red in his life.Their classroom was decorated with every single shade of red imaginable, ranging from pale pastel pink to deep ruby red. Bright red streamers hung from the ceiling. Cotton candy pink balloons floated overhead. Red paper hearts embellished with hot pink glitter covered all the walls (hiding the life-sized diagram of the chakra circulatory system and the super-sized map of the Land of Fire). At the front of the class, a glass jar of red foil wrapped chocolates sat on the teacher's desk. From the open windows, a gentle br...

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One Small Step, ch. 8b

One Small Step by Shawny Wong Chapter 8b: Birthday Kiss He could think about that later though. He still had a few weeks left. For now, he needed to hurry or he was going to be late meeting Hinata. Hinata eyed the pile of clothing in Naruto's arms doubtfully."Naruto-kun are you sure you want to buy those? They're" The first word that popped into her mind was tacky followed quickly by ghastly . Hinata struggled to find a more diplomatic description. "They're so colorful .""I sure do, Hinata-chan! I don't mind the colors. Besides, these clothes are bargain! They're on clearance and it's buy one get one free!"Hinata priva...

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One Small Step, ch. 1

One Small Step by Shawny Wong Chapter 1: Butterfly Kiss Naruto had the most beautiful eyes shed ever seen. They were like the summer sky, like the tropical sea, and endlessly blue. Hinata thought privately for she would never dare voice this aloud that his eyes were more striking than any Hyuuga eyes could ever hope to be. The pale pupiless eyes of her familys vaunted bloodline were cold, prideful, and intimidating. Narutos eyes were the exact opposite; they were warm, vibrant, and full of life. Narutos eyes were almost too pretty for a boy, she decided. Long, full eyelashes that curled up at the tips framed sapphire orbs. ...

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One Small Step, ch. 2

One Small Step by Shawny Wong Chapter 2: Eskimo Kiss Hinata was the strangest girl hed ever met. He never noticed her before, but ever since that day the day she gave him her tape player he couldnt seem to stop thinking about her. She was nothing like the other girls in his class. The other girls were always together in groups, or in pairs as if they needed the support of numbers. Hinata was always alone. The other girls loved to gossip and chatter and giggle. Hinata rarely spoke. (Hed never heard her laugh either, but hed caught her smiling once or twice.) The other girls were loud and bossy, especially that Ino. Hinata...

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One Small Step, ch. 3

One Small Step by Shawny Wong Chapter 3: Indirect Kiss Life was good for Uzumaki Naruto. For once in his miserable life, things were going his way. He and Hinata had spent hours playing Cats Cradle every day after class. After his nerves settled, Naruto was able to concentrate on the game. He mastered it quickly. (To Hinatas secret disappointment, their hands did not get entangled again.) They had even played a few rounds of the advanced level of Cats Cradle with Iruka-sensei! In addition to the game, Naruto continued to practice hand seals on his own for several hours every night. Within a month his speed had dramatically imp...

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One Small Step, ch. 4

One Small Step by Shawny Wong Chapter 4: Healing Kiss Hinata sighed as she slid gratefully into the ofuro of her own private bath. Most of the time, she did not care for the luxuries and amenities that her familys wealth afforded. But relaxing in the ofuro and letting the hot water soothe away her aches and troubles after a long day of training was simply divine . It was the one vice she didnt think she could live without! As was her custom, Hinata spent this time in deep contemplation. The last three years of her life had been hard, but with Narutos help, she had persevered.The day after she and Naruto had shared their first bag...

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One Small Step, ch. 5

One Small Step by Shawny Wong Chapter 5: Bedside Kiss Naruto knew something was wrong with him the moment he woke up. His head was pounding. His throat was scratchy. His body ached even worse than that first morning after joining Gai-senseis insane workout. His skin felt like it was on fire. Worse of all was the vertigo and nausea. The moment he sat up, he felt the world spinning and his stomach violently objected to being upright. He barely made it to the toilet in time almost falling twice on the way. By the time he was done retching, he wasnt on fire anymore; he was absolutely freezing! Ugh I havent been this sick s...

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One Small Step, ch. 6

One Small Step by Shawny Wong Chapter 6: Familial Kiss Hyuuga Hiashi frowned at the reports before him. How had all of this escaped his notice? As the Hyuuga clan head, he naturally took great pride in his eyes. The Hyuuga eyes were legendary for their ability to see things at great distances and with great clarity even more so for their ability to see through , not just objects, but people, as well. Their fighting style revolved around that fact. Of less renown was their ability to see and analyze a person's potential. The Byakugan was nothing like the Sharingan, of course. But a highly trained Byakugan master could read the sma...

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Soul Fire by FifteenthApostle, literature

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Soul Fire

Soul Fire a NaruHina fan ficVolume 1Chapter 1: First sparkThe noon day sun shone softly through the windows of Hinata's hospital room. It had been three days since she had awoken back in Konoha after her mission to the Land of Lightning. Though she and her team had recovered the stolen scrolls from the three rogue cloud ninja, the mission had been far from easy. Reaching for the glass of water beside her hospital bed, Hinata was reminded why she was there. She winced, clutching her abdomen as she felt fire shoot through her left side. The pain wasn't nearly as bad as it had been; at least she could walk around now without too much discomfo...

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About FifteenthApostle

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Dec 11, 1980
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FifteenthApostle

Mar 11, 2013

Laptop broke

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Laptop had wonky screen. Still under warranty though. Sent it to get fixed. Won't get it back for two weeks. Am writing this on smart phone. Is hard. Don't bother commenting. Too hard to reply on this thing. Having no laptop sucks. Already suffering withdrawl symptoms. Bye.

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FifteenthApostle

Feb 14, 2013

Do you think I should shorten my chapters of Soul Fire so that I can post them more often? If I cut them down to one or two scenes, I could post much more regularly and each would feel like less of a burden to write.

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Go for it! Chop them down as much as you like!

It's more important to have a regular release schedule. Post what you've got when you hit your deadline.

About half the current size would be better. As long as you post whole scenes.

Feel free to cut them down by a few thousand words or so, but not too far. I like big chapters.

I prefer large chapters less often. The current size is just about right.

NO! Make them BIGGER! Spend a WHOLE YEAR on ONE CHAPTER if you have to!

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FifteenthApostle

Feb 13, 2013

Me again.

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Hi. Now I know I posted a journal just yesterday, but I felt like doing another. You see, I asked for inspiration from you guys, and it seems I'm already getting some! :dance:To recap, I asked you guys for ideas on what kind of original story I should write. I've actually had some ideas for a while, but writing yesterday's journal and reading your replys seems to have stoked up the fire. So I thought I'd actually tell you about some of the story ideas I've had (one of which I just came up with today) and ask what you think of them.Now my ideas range from 'vague concept' to 'fairly well thought out with some plans laid down'. Nothing is rea...

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Happy birthday!

Your story is quite amazing, are you ever going to finish it? Or give it for adoption or at list post an epilogue about how it ends?

I hope you don´t leave unfinished this great great story. Also, your writting is really good.
You even got a person that lives across the world -in latin america- to be reading it until 5 am

So please finish it!! Even if it takes you years, but be sure, there be people -like me- waiting to have a clousure.

Thanks for creating it, good luck.