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My first actual story.  College student Casey and her friends play a game that has some fun side effects.  Please let me know what you think and if you want to see more with these characters, or just other stories in general.

I'd like to dedicate this story to a couple of people on here.  First of all, ExplosiveAmmo who is one of my fave SW artists on here.  I hope he enjoys this.  Also, MissSmall since it is almost your birthday, consider this an early birthday present.  Finally, to my fave SW MollyLolly1 .  You're the best, and I hope you enjoy as well.

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ms969's avatar
I know you wanted to leave the nights activities up to the readers imagination.  I would love a follow up though.  My imagination would be Jess was the one who put the candles out on the clearence shelf knowing they were permanent.  After some play she decides who to keep and who to sell to finance the next years schooling. 

Or at least that is what she tells them to get superb performances from "her" minnies.
Fetish-Fotos's avatar
Haha I like the way you think! :)

If it was permanent, this would be an interesting direction for the story to take.  Kind of an alternate universe version.  For me though, I have multiple stories planned with these characters, and have already been working to build up their futures.  The next story concerning these characters will be titled 'Shrunk on the Ward,' and I hope to have it posted on here by the end of the month.  Hope you will check it out!
scidram's avatar
Really cool premise! Enjoyed this.
Fetish-Fotos's avatar
Coming from you, that means so much to me.  Thank you so much! :)
Wonderful story! So sexy, and a wonderful concept! Would definitely like to read a sequel with Jess!
Fetish-Fotos's avatar
I do have a few ideas for a sequel or two... ;) But most of the ideas I have are set after the nights events.  I like the idea of leaving what happened through the night with Jess  up to the readers imagination. ;)
MissSmall's avatar
That’s so kind of you! Thank you so much! ❤️

I was honestly not expecting anything for my birthday, or for anyone to notice, but this was great. Unless someone actually shrinks me IRL, this is probably the best birthday gift I’ll get this year! I really enjoyed it. I was kind of expecting a character named “Missy” to be shrunk in this story! ;) lol Maybe next time though, right? 
Fetish-Fotos's avatar
Damn!  I completely missed that opportunity. I really should have done that. :p  Well don't worry, the next story I write (whenever that will be) will be sure to feature a character named Missy. ;)
I was planning dedications, and I saw your birthday was a few days away in that little birthdays column they show under notifications, so I thought what the heck.  I'm glad you enjoyed it though! Love 
And also, if you do end up being shrunken IRL this year, I will gladly take second place in the best birthday gift ranking. lol :D (Big Grin) 
MissSmall's avatar
You don’t really have to do that! lol I was just teasing you! I still appreciate the thought though! :)
Fetish-Fotos's avatar
Well, I have a new idea I'm bouncing around.  I just might have to have a character named Missy :P lol
MissSmall's avatar
Aww! lol You're making me feel spoiled now! I feel like I kinda forced you to do that by mentioning it. Are you sure you're okay with it?
Fetish-Fotos's avatar
Absolutely!  If I am going to write more shrinking women stories, I clearly need some girls to shrink :D lol
No worries!  Once I get the plot completely figured out, I will send you a note just asking what you think of the idea I have. If you don't like it, I'll come up with a different character.  Sound fair? :)
MissSmall's avatar
Ok, as long as you're okay with it! lol Just a heads up, if you do decide to use me in your story, my favorite size to shrink to is around the 2'-3' area. I'm okay getting as small as 10 inches though. Just thought I'd let you know that! :)
qzar9999's avatar
I quite liked it. :D
Fetish-Fotos's avatar
The great qzar liked my story?  I am not worthy.
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qzar9999's avatar
Heh. Quit it, I'm blushing. ^_^

I'd say there's potentially a full-length story or SFan script in this idea. It's a fun little scenario.
Fetish-Fotos's avatar
Now I'm the one that's blushing ^_^

I have some ideas on continuing it, but am just letting it settle for the time being.  I don't want a follow-up to feel forced, and I kind of like the open ending on it as is.
qzar9999's avatar
Well, by all means, don't force yourself.

But there's definitely the bones of a really fun story or comic in there.

If'n ya ever find yourself wanting to write one, let me know. Could always use a few more Shrink Fan scripts.
Fetish-Fotos's avatar
I'll be sure to think about it.  Thanks for the offer! :)
DownSheGoes's avatar
Very awesome story! I really enjoyed the ''never have I ever" concept! 
Fetish-Fotos's avatar
I am so glad you liked it!  You have no idea how much that means to me. :)  Thanks so much for the fave also!
DownSheGoes's avatar
You're welcome! Keep up the writing I'd love to see more in future!
Fetish-Fotos's avatar
Thanks so much!  I may actually have another idea in the back of my head... :)
DownSheGoes's avatar
I look forward to seeing more!
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