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Shattered.

By femketje
photo and model: femketje©
NikonD70
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a somewhat lighter shot from the same series...

Image details
Image size
3008x2000px 2.3 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D70
Shutter Speed
1/500 second
Aperture
F/4.2
Focal Length
62 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
May 23, 2010, 8:53:43 PM
Published:
© 2010 - 2021 femketje
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GabrielBB's avatar
Beautiful, wonderful Femke
Hugs and kisses

:sun: :blowkiss: :hug: :kiss:
:iconflowersplz::iconflowersplz::iconflowersplz:
sholky2's avatar
It says "requested Critique", so:

- first thing I notice is a grey shade over the whole picture, probably due to lack of contrast. First thing you should do is check levels in PS, if there is space left on the sides of the "mountain", draw the sliders to the edges of it.

- second, I would crop about 20% form the right and put the girl in the right third of the picture (rule of thirds is always a good idea ;) )

- third, the background doesn0t really work for me, the sky is completely burned, it would work better if you shot it in front of something like a one-color background, like a tree or something (contrast between green color of the tree and girl's blonde hair could be interesting)

- fourth, this looks like an ideal situation for fill-flash use, you can try with the pop-up one built into your Nikon, just put it to "fill" and see what happens :)


All that said, I really do like the shot, no kidding. :D

The pose is great, the look also, and the eyes do capture attention, good work. :)
b13visuals's avatar
Wow, erg mooi portret! Sensueel zelfs!
GioArturi's avatar
Another true marvel! :heart:
This series is one of your best! :clap: :clap:
junaidplaner's avatar
that is tha coll!:D
williamfdevault's avatar
The eyes. the eyes draw me in...
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