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Glasses

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photo and model: femketje©
NikonD70
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maybe scraps later!
Image details
Image size
2000x3008px 2.79 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D70
Shutter Speed
1/25 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
320
Date Taken
Feb 24, 2010, 5:44:28 PM
© 2010 - 2022 femketje
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twizzlerz's avatar
:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

title: "glasses"

Ok... so you have this photo, and you are clearly expressing the theme of "glasses", i.e. eye wear... well, starting from the overall shot, lighting is excellent, great use of natural lighting on the subject, use of color is exceptional, blues definitely giving a cool and calm feel, the model's eyes further convey that sense.

The subjective of the photo, being glasses, however does not "speak" in a tone to be heard. What I see in this photo, is a beautiful woman, wearing a pair of frames that ultimately blend into the background, more so like a soldier wearing the wrong camo for his environment. I feel this shot was more about a model wearing glasses, than the glasses them self.

The questions that should be asked are:

1: what am I trying to say with the glasses?

2: how am I going to convey the message?

3: purpose?

4: what does this photo say to me?

Over all, good photo but misses the mark on your message... in other words, good music... too much static.