I dont know really how can someone make a selfportrait with perfect focus, perfect framing, etc, since you cant really see the moment you make the click.
This is a self portrait of one of my favourite faces in DA. It follows the rule i mention above, ok its not technically perfect. I like the depth of field, i like that is divided in 2 "different" parts, left and right of the model, and for sure i like the colors involved.
The face expression ,is what i like most about Ketje always in her pictures, although this hand somehow enters the frame in an odd way, that i think it could be avoided if it wasnt a selfshot.
the other thing that distructs me is the hair on the mouth. It gives character, but its a bit distructing here, it makes me want to put my hand and remove it (that i would do if i was taking this picture myself)
its a classic portait, doesnt show anything new, but in the other hand, it shows one more time, how nicely this face can cause feelings to the viewer even by a simple selfshot
Ik vindt je lippen heel mooi en je oog make up erbij. Maakt een mooi contrast, was misschien mooier geweest als je hand helemaal in de frame stond want die brengt nog wat meer contrast mee vanwege het donkere kledingstuk. Ook jammer van de afleidende achtergrond ( het groen en muurtje) leid af van je blik en je speelse haar.