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  The man in the cloak looked at Haru, looking at how the last of his brother was going into him, and then extracted out into the air, where no one and nothing could save him.

  "Sakura, what do you think what move we should make? We know that he can change his body at will, and who knows what else he could do. Naruto's arms are scratched up with using the wind Rasengan, so he should try to rest up."

  Said Kiba, and then looked at Akamaru. "Akamaru also is wounded on his front left paw when he landed funny on it after we destroyed that one man's body." Sakura started thinking, and then had a idea.

  "Hinata, I need you to distract..." Sakura stopped when she saw Hinata already had her Byakugan activated, and was ready to defend a injured Naruto. 'Oh man, I almost forgot about Naruto. With his arms like that, he won't be able to defend himself, but hopefully he can still make hand signs.

  "Naruto, make six clones, and make them distract this guy!" "Why?" "it's all part of my plan, but before you send them to the man, send them over to me. I need to give them something."

  Naruto made a hand sign, and five clones appeared. 'This is a little risky, but I have to get closer. If I can land one good hit on him, then that should be enough for us to move in, and hopefully finish him off.' Thought Sakura, and then smiled when she felt all of the yellow chakra disappear.

  The clones came up to Sakura, and she gave them all stones. "What are these for?" "You'll see." Said Sakura, and then sent them off to fight the man. The man just smiled as he raised his arms.

  Two monstrous claws came out, he started swinging out his claws to destroy the clones. The clones dodged every attack, but they were having difficulty. Soon one of the clones that tried to get behind got destroyed, and then Sakura smiled. The man turned his attention back to the other clones.

  Soon all the clones were destroyed, and he turned his attention back to everyone else. "What a waste of Chakra. So far, all you've been able to do is buy time, and disperse my brother's yellow chakra from Haru."

  Haru stood up, and everyone, except Sakura who was nowhere to be seen, Naruto, and Hinata, stepped in front of him to protect him. The man was about to attack, but was then delivered a punch from Sakura from behind.

  "HAH! I knew that would work! Hiraishin no Jutsu always helps me..." Sakura was interrupted when her legs were grabbed by two tentacles, and then was thrown against a tree. The tentacles came back, and the man stood up as he rubbed the back of his head.

  He took his hood off to reveal short, black hair in a long pony tail, blue eyes, scars and burns all over his face, and his left eye was missing. He rubbed the back of his head where there was blood coming out, and a bump on his head.

  'H-How is he still able to stand? I hit him with almost all of my strength! I could knock a bull out with one of my punch's with only half of my strength, but this guy was hit with almost all of my strength.'

  The man grinned, and then looked at Sakura. "I can see that you Ninja's are crafty ones, which leaves me with no choice but to take my true form." The man took his cloak off, and he was wearing only pants. On his chest was a weird symbol, and then he put his thumb up to his mouth, and bit it.

  Blood came out of his thumb, and he used that blood to trace the seal. When he was done, he yelled, "RELEASE!" His body started morphing, and then small tentacles started coming out of his mouth.

  Soon his body was turned into a monster(A link to the picture of the monster is in the author's comment), and then it looked at Haru. It gurgled something, and then charged at Haru with incredible speed.

  'Not good! I gotta do something!' thought Naruto, and then started forming chakra in his arms. When the monster was half way there, Naruto finally got enough chakra, and charged at him.

  Soon Naruto and the monster was almost right next to each other, and Naruto yelled as he put his hand on the monster's head, "WIND RASENGAN!" The monster's head was chopped in half, and more cuts and bruise's came on Naruto's arms.

  The monster fell on the ground, and Naruto smiled, but then cringed as he felt extreme pain in his arms. "NARUTO-KUN!" Yelled Hinata as she ran to him. When she got to him, Sakura just arrived also, and started to check out Naruto's wounds.

  "He should be okay, but I suggest he doesn't use the Wind Rasengan for at least two days. If not two days, then maybe three." Said Sakura, and Naruto stood up. "Well I guess we should get going. Whoever sent these two will certainly send more just like them, and the next ones may even be stronger."

  Everyone nodded, and started walking. When Haru got next to the dead monster body, he screamed as he felt a hand grab his ankle. Everyone turned back in time to see the monster grab Haru by the throat, and held him in the air.

  "You will satisfy my appetite... you certainly will." Said the monster, and then he tightened his grip. Five Kunai's went into his arm, and he screamed as he let go of Haru, who quickly ran over to the group of Ninja's.

  "Take this, you annoying Ninja's!" The monster started going through difficult hand seals that human hands couldn't make, and then stopped, saying, "Poison Mist Jutsu!"

  A purple mist started to come out of its mouth, and started to move everywhere. 'Darn! I gotta use that Jutsu again!' Naruto extended his arms, and said, "Wind Rasen..."

  He stopped when he felt extreme pain go throughout his entire arm. 'Not good! I still can't use my Wind Rasengan yet... now what?' Hinata gulped, and thought, 'Naruto's too injured to use his wind Rasengan, and the rest of us doesn't know any other moves that can stop this mist. I guess I have to try using Naruto-Kun's new Jutsu, even though I don't even know the basic about a simple Rasengan.'

  Hinata lowered her head, and whispered to Naruto, "Naruto, tell me how to use the Wind Rasengan." "What? But Hinata, that move will take weeks to..." "Well hopefully I can do it in just a minute because that's how much time we have at most."

  Naruto nodded, and then told Hinata about what to do. Hinata pointed her arms at the man, and then started doing what Naruto told her. It was really a interesting Jutsu to try and use.

  Hinata not only had to gather her own chakra, and use the chakra that her opponent uses to make targeting much easier. Naruto used the yellow chakra that was in that weird monster to make targeting easier, and since it was a creation, it was full of yellow chakra, which made it that much easier.

  They also don't need to get their opponent's chakra, but then it won't be as more concentrated, but attack everything in that direction. Also, it won't be as powerful, so they might get injured or almost killed.

  If you do absorb a opponent's chakra, you can still make the attack area wider, but not that wide. Also, if you do use this with or without your opponent's chakra, then your allies can still get hurt, so if you plan on using this against a army, make sure that you are in the very front, especially if your opponent army doesn't have any chakra.

  It is possibly a S-Rank Jutsu, and Hinata only had one shot at it, so she had to make it count and make sure she does it right. She gathered her chakra, took a deep breath, and then yelled, "Wind Rasengan!"

  Hinata felt extreme pain go throughout her entire body as scratch's went all over her body and cut her clothing. The poisonous wind was sent flying back, and then disappeared.

  "Amazing. That  girl found out my Jutsu's weakness. If it counters high and strong winds, then to keep it in tack, then I would have to use more chakra then I don't wanna use, especially if I want to stay in this form."

  Hinata's breathing started moving faster, and she saw everything in a blur. In fact, she could barely even hear the man's explanation. Hinata was just happy that her plan worked, and then smiled.

  She was also happy that she showed Naruto how strong she was, and then she fell unto the ground. "HINATA!" Yelled Naruto, and he and Sakura ran over to Hinata. While Sakura was doing a quick survey to see if Hinata is okay, the monster said, "I hope she's okay, along with that Blonde Ninja. They will make a excellent meal since they've been a thorn in my side for far too long."

  Haru, Kiba, Naruto, and Sakura both clenched their fists, but Kiba wasn't just mad at the monster's comment, but he was mad that Naruto taught Hinata how to do a Jutsu that seriously hurt her.

  'Darn you, Naruto! Again, you've caused Hinata pain!' Sakura sighed when she was done with the check up, and Naruto quickly asked Sakura, "Is she okay? Please tell me she's okay."

  "Naruto, calm down. Hinata's fine, but she's uncounsce. She just had too much pain, and her body's resting up." 'And what great timing. Who knows what else this man can do, and with an injured Naruto and now an uncounsce Hinata, he is taking us out one by one. DARN IT!'

  The monster chuckled, and then said, "Well this surely is not a disappointment. Me and my dead brother said that the Hyuga will cause some problems, and I'm not surprised that my brother's dead. He really was the weaker one of us two, and since he didn't know how to kill."

  Sakura and Naruto stood up, Naruto holding his arm, and then he made a hand sign. "Naruto, you should let your wounds heal." "Well what are we going to do then?" "I don't know yet, but I do know that I will finalize a strategy soon."

  Naruto's muscles tightened as he felt anger boiling up, and then yelled, "WE DON'T HAVE THAT MUCH TIME! KAGE BUSHIN NO JUTSU!" ten Naruto clones appeared, and then the ten clones charged at the monster with their Kunais drawn.

  Sakura noticed something about the clones. They were only throwing their Kunai's, and staying far away, and are always slow to dodge the man's attacks. Now Sakura gets what was happening.

  Naruto was injured and so are his clones, so they are less fast and strong, meaning that if they get too close, they can't dodge or block in time from any of this man's tentacles.

  Sakura had no choice, they had to retreat. Right now they are in no condition to fight this thing. "Naruto, we have to escape! Kiba, you carry Naruto! I'll carry Hinata!" "Aw, how come I can't carry Hinata?" "Kiba, I have no time for this! Pick Naruto up, he's too injured to run away! He can barely even stand!"

  Kiba nodded, and then put a complaining Naruto over his shoulder while Sakura did the same to Hinata, and Lee picked Haru up to make sure that he wouldn't fall behind. Soon the man destroyed the clones, but he was five minutes late.

  "So they escaped... Oh well, now I know what to expect next time." Said the monster, and then walked over to his brother's arm. "So this is the final battle for my brother. Well I do get more pay, and luckily I get to do this."

  The monster took a deep breath, and visible yellow chakra came into his body. After ten seconds, the monster stopped, and smiled. 'I now have almost all of my brother's yellow chakra with me, and with that, those Ninjas don't stand a chance against me.' Thought the monster, and then he reverted back to his original form.

  The group of Ninjas stopped in a clearing, clearly exhausted. Lee let Haru down, and Haru then ran over to Hinata. "So what are you guy's going to do now?" "Well I need to come up with a strategy, but it has to be after I'm done healing Naruto and Hinata."

  "I-Is Hinata in any danger of dying from her wounds? If I knew that it was going to be this bad, I never would've told Hinata how to do this. Instead, I would've made Kiba do it."

  "HEY!" Sakura sighed, and said, "No, like I said before, she's just unciounsce." Naruto smiled, and then said, "Good, I wouldn't be able to forgive myself if I hurt Hinata this much."

  Two hours later, Naruto felt strength coming back, and all the guys had to leave for a while Sakura started to bandage up Hinata, but that was a hour ago, and now Hinata is awake, and Naruto's arms is bandaged up.

  Hinata was laying down in the field, and looking up at the sky. "H-Hinata, do you mind if I s-sit here?" Hinata looked to her love as he was standing above her. Hinata blushed, and then said, "S-Sure, N-Naruto-Kun."

  Naruto smiled as he laid down next to Hinata, and then she gulped. "N-Naruto-Kun, I have a-a question, and p-lease be honest w-with me." "Sure, what is it, Hinata-Chan?" 'C-Chan? Since w-when did N-Naruto-Kun s-start using t-that?' thought Hinata with a surprised look on her face, and a bigger blush.

  "W-Well when you f-first used the Wind R-Rasengan, w-where your i-injuries as b-bad?" "No, not this bad." "S-So does this m-mean that M-Mine wasn't a-as good as y-yours?" Hinata felt like she is, yet again, not very strong, and felt weak like her father makes her out to be.

  "No way, Hinata. What I found out is that the more injuries and pain you get the first time you use it, the stronger your Wind Rasengan will be when you master it, so you will have a stronger Wind Rasengan than mine!"

  Hinata smiled to herself, and then she shivered. "Are you cold, Hinata? I don't blame you. We are pretty high up in the mountain." "Y-Yeah, I a-am, Naruto-Kun." What Naruto did next surprised Hinata a lot.

  Naruto hugged Hinata. "Do you feel warmer now?" Hinata's face was a new shade of red seeing Naruto inches from her face, and could only nod. In a few seconds, both of them was asleep, Naruto's arm around Hinata's wraist, Hinata had one arm around Naruto's wraist also, their foreheads touching each other, nose's barely touching each other, and the both of them had a smile on their faces.

  Kiba and Haru was watching from a distance, and was clenching their fists. 'Dang, that Naruto moves fast. I have to stop them from getting any closer, but how?' While Kiba thought, it started to get dark, Lee came back with firewood.

  Around Midnight, everyone was asleep, and with a Kiba, Akamaru, and Lee outside Haru's tent with Sakura inside, Naruto and Hinata was sleeping inside Naruto's tent.

  Meanwhile, the man in the cloak was waiting patiently around a campfire, as if waiting for someone or something. "So, you're actually asking for help? Since when did you become such a weakling, Atara?"

  Said a man with orange, long, spiky hair, a eye patch over his right eye, his eye color was constantly changing from red, to blue, to yellow, to brown, and then to black as he stepped out from the forest.

  "Shut up, Ayumu. The Ninja were stronger than I thought. If they didn't retreat, then I might've died. I didn't show it, but two or three more strikes would've killed me. I meditated right after the battle, which healed my wounds."

  "I swear, your powers just get better and better. Healing just by meditating, what's next? You gain control over people with the look of a eye?" "I wish, it could've saved my brother, but at least now I get more of a pay." "You truly are heartless, Atara. You know that?"

  "Whatever. I need you to use your powers to kill the Hyuga in the group of Ninjas when we meet next. Do you think you can help?" The man smiled, and then his eyes stopped flashing colors as it turned into a dark red. "If it means I get to fight, then sure. Wait, where is your brother's body?"

  Atara smiled as he took a bite out of some meat he cooked over a fire, and said, "What do you think I'm eating?"
                             To Be Continued In Part 5
I just got back from a fifty-mile hike, and I am never going on it again. Fourteen people came on the hike, and only 9 managed to finish it. I was one of them. It was hot, the trail went up and down alot and was very rocky, and during night it was even so hot we couldn't sleep in our sleeping bags, and even then we were still sweating.
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Musicguy1 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014
Where is part 5 I can't find it
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FelgrandKnight34 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014
unfortunately, i am very busy and haven't been able to finish this series :(
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Musicguy1 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014
will you finsh it?
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FelgrandKnight34 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014
I am very busy, I will try but no promises. I honestly am thinking of putting a lot of my stories up for adoption.
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Musicguy1 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014
really! I love Hinatas Birthday one :D
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FelgrandKnight34 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014
That one is actually finished, so thanks :D
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Musicguy1 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014
It was the best ones that I have ever read :)
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FelgrandKnight34 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014
Thanks :)
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ninjaW Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I can't find the other parts.
Parts 5 and up aren't here.
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FelgrandKnight34 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012
I'm not done yet, but don't worry, I am trying to get everything done with.
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ninjaW Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
although I'm nowhere close to you're skill, if you want some ideas on how it could go feel free to tell me
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FelgrandKnight34 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012
I have a pretty good idea on how to go with this, but I just need
an idea for one last enemy, so if you could help me with that, that would be great.
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ninjaW Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sasuke?
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FelgrandKnight34 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012
No, not Sasuke. I thought about bringing him in, but no, and whta i meant was what special power and/or personality should the next vilain have? Like, should he have power to read peoples mind and love killing people? Does he have the power to feel no pain and is gay? Something like that, I can't decide.
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ninjaW Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
MMMMM

I'd say give him the power to read minds, but perhaps make him a villian who truely doesn't enjoy killing, but is rather just doing a job; a Bounty hunter, perhaps
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chunxuansonlygirl Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awwww how cute naruto and hinata sleeping together and their lips almost touching
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doomvader Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010  Student General Artist
(she's unciounsce)(a injured Naruto)2 errors(a unciounsce Hinata)(muscle's tightened)(with their Kunai's drawn)(hrowing their Kunai's)(destroyed the clone's)(those Ninja's)(The group of Ninja's)(you Ninja's going)(seeing Naruto inch's)(the group of Ninja's)
Post-Scryptum a/an rule; (a) is for when the word following starts with a continent. (an) is for when the word following starts with a vowel.
Post-Post-Scrytum Good chapter! Not to many errors but I might have missed some.
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Sabyy701 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
GO HINATA!! WHAT A FIGHTING SCENE!!
And great job on the hike! Bet you slept like a log.
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tintin190 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010
naruto is making a move! XD finally!
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khan3 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010
ahhhh so cute, really cute, perfect as always great work ^_^
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ninjaW Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I didn't think the ending was so cute.....
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