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Love the story, I always find very sexy. I wish there was a little more fun between Sam and Liana, but at least we have our imagination...

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Trader Princess Prologue
Trader Princess
Prologue
 Zon Kaarvan exits the Jedi shuttle, wearing his regular Jedi Robes with his family’s crest, an animal skull with two horns coming together but not quite touching, on his shoulder. He spent a good year on his home planet of Dorin, meditating there as he gathered himself and trained in hand-to-hand combat. He has his double-sided training saber on his back, a black belt with four pouches on it. He spots his master, Entum Tris, standing not too far away from the shuttle with his arms crossed over his chest. One of his tendrils are missing due to an explosion he was caught in during the Serien War.
 Entum walks up to his apprentice, smiling at him. “Von, it’s a pleasure to see you made it back safely. How was your time on your Dorin?”
 Von nods his head appreciatively. “It was an insightful experience, master. I understand more why you spend so much time in the garden, but now I have a little more understanding of where
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Zon Kaarvan Prologue
Zon Kaarvan Prologue
 Zon Kaarvan grabs the two training blades, looking at the two through the goggles he must wear, as do all other Kel Dor’s when they’re not on their home planet of Dorin. The nine-year-old inspects the blades length, width, and sturdiness before he does the same with their hilts. “Padawan, are you done yet?” Zon looks back at his new master, a male Nautolan wearing Jedi Robes, but is not wearing a under shirt underneath it.
 “Not quite, master. I’m sorry, but the blades just don’t quite feel right.” He says as he holds the blades up. “Then again, I could never really find a weapon that suited me. It all felt wrong, off, like they weren’t made for my hands.” Entum chuckles as he shakes his head in disbelief, gripping his training sword in one hand.
 “You really are something, Zon. Just choose one of them, and try your luck with…”
 “Hold on, I might have an i
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Zon Kaarvan's Bio
Name: Zon Kaarvan
Species: Kel Dor
Class: Jedi Knight
Physical description: About one-point-seventy-five meters tall with the Antiox Breath Mask and protective goggles, and has the crest of his family on the right shoulder pad over his robes, which consists of an animal skull with two horns near the top coming out of the sides, with the tips coming back in where the tips are almost touching.
Bio: Having grown up on the Kel Dorian home world of Dorin until he was about six years old, Zon feels a strong bond with his family, whom are the head of a manufacturing company that makes Republic One-man fighter’s, and wears the family crest in honor of them. He has four fingers on his hands, and when his goggles are taken off, others would be able to see he has white iris’s that confirm him being a Force Sensitive. His master, Entum Tris, has taught him how his skills with a lightsaber is not the only skill set he should focus on, as his master usually beats him in their duels due t
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Star Wars Skylax and the Defender
Star Wars
Skylax and the Defender
 “You better word that better.” Skylax says to Sergeant Verlatox, a male human who was all too eager to leave the Triumvirate to join him, now stands in front of Skylax, who was just enjoying a nice glass of Rodian Wine, a type of wine from the Rodians that he most enjoys and can’t get enough of. A fine glass of wine while enjoying the outdoors. “I was having a rather nice evening, enjoying the nice summer day with the finest wine in all of the galaxy, and you mean to ruin this moment by telling me that, out of the six spec of troopers I sent in, only two have returned?”
 Sergeant Verlatox nods, obviously thinking twice about telling him this and about betraying the Emperor. “M-My lord, I apologize for ruining this moment for you, but I feel it is my duty to not sugarcoat the truth. Six Special Operation troopers went in, but only two returned. However, it is not all a loss.”
 Skylax is obviously
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Shark Hunt Part 2
Shark Hunt
Part 2
 Tika and Anto are lying on the couch, Tika’s back up against Anto as his arm is around her waist. She is fast asleep as Anto admires her sleeping form, smiling as he uses his free hand to move some hair from in front of her face. God, is she ever beautiful. What did Anto do to deserve her? He then looks up as he hears Anna and Galtiss enter the main area, the two talking about something he can’t hear until they get closer.
 "... that a capable detective turns into a war hero and later vigilante?" Anna asks curiously. The Amiss chuckles with a clop of his beak.
 "That is a long story, but the short version is that I was sick of the red tape on Coruscant where the regulations were tying my hands every time I wanted to do something, especially when a politician or senator was involved. One day I had to leave a case when a senator who was involved in some weapon smuggling intervened with my seniors. To feel better, I broke him his jaw right in
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Ivuur Pafen
Name: Ivuur Pefan
Nickname/Alias: N/A
Race/Species: Ithorian
Place of Birth: Onboard the medical space station ‘Alderaan’s savior’ above the planet Alderaan, so… technically Alderaan, since that was where he was raised.
Current Age: 21 standard years
Gender: Male
Height: 2.0 Meters
Weight: 189.5 pounds
Appearance: A simple male Ithorian with a cybernetic left arm, and a long burn scar that goes from the back of his left shoulder down to his right hip.
Clothing: Simple Jedi robes with a belt around his hip that stores several pouches that mostly carry herbs or some sort of medical advice. Nothing that could stop a severe injury, but enough to keep the victims alive. He wears black gloves, and when he takes his upper robes off he is seen wearing a black V-neck T-shirt.
Force Speciality: He focuses more on the healing aspects of the force, hoping to become a Jedi Healer, like his great grandfather was. He is also good in using Force push and Force Pull, but not in
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Teen TItans! BBRAE Episode 2
Teen Titans! BBRAE
Episode 2
Party Stopper
 Speedy and Aqualad are on the back of two separate dolphins, on their way towards where Aqualad felt his fish friend met his demise. The two are in their usual Hero attire, Speedy in his red, sleeveless shirt with red pants and Aqualad in his blue-scales one piece that covers everything from his feet up to his neck. Speedy quickly checks the string on his bow, making sure that it is in good shape before checking on the string to make sure it won’t snap on him.
 Once satisfied, he looks back to see the coast coming up quickly to them. Just another thirty seconds, and they’ll be there. “Hey Aqualad!” Speedy yells over to him. “What do you think this thing we’re looking for could be?”
 “I don’t know, Speedy, but we should make sure it doesn’t represent a threat. If it does, we take it down.” He replies back as the shore is now only ten seconds away. “Keep your
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Teen Titans! BBRAE Episode 1
Teen Titans! BBRAE
Episode 1
The Get Together
 “Cyborg, how many girlfriends have you had since you became, you know, Cyborg?” Beast Boy asks as he sits on a crate almost as tall as him, but wide enough to fit about three of him if all three of him were back to back. Cyborg, who is currently under the T-car, has his robotic left arm as a wrench as he makes some small adjustments to the car.
 Cyborg looks at Beast Boy with a raised eyebrow at the question. “Girlfriends? B, why is my dating life suddenly any of your business?” Cyborg asks as he pushes himself out from underneath the T-Car. Beast Boy sighs as he looks down at the ground.
 “I’m just curious, especially since, oh, you know,” He points above him to a yellow banner hanging above him, with the words in large, red letters, that say, ’Welcome, Titans East’. “We’re about to throw a huge party, and I’m going to show up with no date!
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YuGiOh! Soul Seeker Duel 1
YuGiOh!
Soul Seeker
Duel 1
 Police sirens go off in the streets of Emblem City, the police cars speeding through the city towards an abandoned apartments building. Inside of the building is a middle-aged man in tattered clothing, holding a magnum in his right hand, looking out the window as the police cars surround the building.
 “Damn, they found me.” He says, and then looks at the two bags of valuables he recently stole from the nearby museum. “I guess I’ll go down…” He brings the hammer of the gun back. “With a bang.”
 ”Duel field activated.” The man looks around in confusion as the room is surrounded in what appears to be digital code. “W-What is this? Who’s there?” He hears someone clapping from right outside the room. A figure in a brown overcoat steps around the doorway, his black gloved hands clapping together.
 “So ‘smart’ of you, hide in a abandoned build
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Stari Chronicles Book 1 Chapter 2
Stari Chronicles
Book 1: Shadows of the Past
Chapter 2
 Maryna Caballa meditates in the middle of the training room, allowing the force to flow through her and allow her to become one with the flowing force. She becomes her strongest when she lets the force flow through her like this, Maryna no longer fighting, but instead letting the Force fighting through her. She opens her eyes as she feels energy signatures approaching her.
 No life stems from them, but they are causing Maryna’s danger senses to go off. She waits until they have surrounded her, their weapons trained on her. Right before they fired, Maryna opens her eyes to see five different training droids surrounding her. Now is the time to act. She jumps up in the air as the droids fired where she was, the laser’s scorching where she was sitting.
 However, as Maryna lands behind one of the droids, whom is dual wielding two blaster Pistols, she instantly knows it was not her moving. She did not command
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Stari Chronicles Book 1 Chapter 1
Star Wars
Stari Chronicles
Book 1: Shadows of the past
Chapter 1
Twelve years later
 High King Kunko Radu sits in at the head of the table, looking at the long table filled with his loyal aide’s. Kunko Rdu leads the prosperous planet of Xi-Vang-Mu, a planet in the Outer Rim territories, known for their medical research and some key figures currently in the Galactic Senate. Kunko’s species is the Xi, which in his language translates to, “Heavenly beings”, the best species of this planet in terms of culture, beauty, and intelligence. The Xi are identifiable by their pointed ears, blond hair, and silver iris’s, and are always in positions of power.
 Next is the Vang, which translates to, “Honored followers”. They are in what is considered the middle class of Xi-Vang-Mu, known to be loyal to the High King and the throne. They are identifiable by their red hair, and blue eyes. Then there’s the Mu, which translates to “Exiled
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So I am about to finish up the Prequel novelizations trilogy, and here's the order I read them in and what I think of them because... why not? Also, like I said, I am not done just yet, so this might change, but we'll see when we get there.

Episode 3: Of the three novels, it has the best story. I LOVE how Palpatine manipulates Anakin in this book, if you enjoyed Palpatine's manipulation in the movies, then your jaw will DROP like mine did at just how much Palpatine plays Anakin like he was a piano, and Palpatine is a master pianist.

Episode 1: It is better than the movie, but not by much, in my personal opinion. I will say the parts they add that have to do with Anakin before Qui-Gon and the others arrive on Tattooine are really good, and I'd say read it just for that, but beyond that, not much else to really say. Besides the fact the best Jedi in the Prequel Era, Qui-Gon Jinn, is obviously in this book, and you should read it just for him! :stare:

Episode 2: So I am at Page 101 of 353, however so far I have to say that not only do I like Episode 2's novelization more than 1's, but of the three, it is actually the most enjoyable, and this is coming from someone whose least favorite movie of the prequel trilogy is Episode 2, however so far every page has just about every page has kept me enthralled, and excited to read more. I felt the same with Episode 3, but that was more because of the story and the character arch of Anakin. But the enjoyment of the events happening? The manipulation is, like, ninety-percent of the events, and it is enjoyable, but trust me, the speeder chase in the novel is MUCH better than in the movie, not saying it was bad in the movie, just better in the novel. Now Episode 2 does have the most memorable scenes of the Prequel Trilogy, with, like I said, the speeder chase, Obi-Wan VS Jango Fett, Shmi Skywalker's death, "I don't like sand", The arena fight with the Beasts AND the Jedi, and the fun fight with the three Jedi against Dooku. It has it's very fun scenes, and the book can focus on those scenes! We'll see if this stays the same as I read the book.

So personally, even if you don't like the Prequel movies and aren't certain if you want to try the novelizations, then just stop doing yourself a disservice, and read them already. Trust me, they won't take you too long to read, and you won't regret it :)

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HEROMASTER85 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2018
Did you see the durasteel giant
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FelgrandKnight34 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2018
Just did ^^
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FelgrandKnight34 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2018
No problem ^^
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HEROMASTER85 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2018
I prefer the new Jedi order and legends do you?
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FelgrandKnight34 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2018
I do prefer Legends, and while I have only sadly read one book of the New Jedi Order, I do LOVE the KOTOR era. :)
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HEROMASTER85 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2018
I dont like Disney’s attempts

Like replacing the vong, or leaving luke single, as so I like the concept of a rogue imperial faction but it’s being done poorly

I writing concept of a sequal but this would show the first order screwed up in a way
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FelgrandKnight34 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2018
Honestly, I do feel the same. But for me, my biggest problem with Disney is not taht they're trying, it's that they're not trying. They're rehashing old stories, and trying to sell them as new. That's always fun, right? And they are sticking mostly to the OT era... yeah, because we don't already have COUNTLESS stories about that era, right?
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D o u mind if we chat on hangouts for a bit, this is sucking up so much data on here and I have an do idea mumay like
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FelgrandKnight34 Featured By Owner May 11, 2018
Please, for this type of message, use ONLY notes. 
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