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August 7, 2009
The end of the world by ~feimo "is absolutely fantastic! The detailes, the colors, the techinque...simple amazing! A true masterpiece worth being seen."
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The end of the world

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Already it's something I can't draw in a million years, but here's my two cents on this piece: If I remembered correctly. you wrote somewhere about lacking passion when it comes to drawing female characters. As I'm a newbie, I'll just say that the bishojo in red does look flat, from the way the shadows fall on her face and her silken dress. Also, the flowing ribbon could be more brought out and look more translucent.
一笔一画都能看出十分精细,但在某些细节上略有不足:假设我没记错的话,你提到过画女人没有男人的feel,这一点在红衣女子身上就展现出来了。脸部缺少的层次感可以说是骨架不同,但纱裙比起男子的军靴就少了意境。另外飘带也可以透明度高一点以求比对明显、
最后想说的就是--大触乃收了我吧我都是瞎扯的~