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Fuck the Bullshit
Fuck the lies
Fuck everyone of your alibis

I'm done with it
I'm done with you
Nothing you ever say is true

You play your games
and you play them well
Turned my whole world
into a living hell

you showed me now
what it takes
To identify the reals
from the fakes

So fuck the bullshit
fuck the lies
fuck everyone of your alibis

I see no reason to go on like this
so your last shot
you fucking missed.
Have you ever been done? done with the brush off, done with excuses, done with alibis?
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LindaBostic Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
F*** me baby, awesome work of art!
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Feast4daBeast Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank Ya kindly
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LeDbrite Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know why, but the ending of this piece made me laugh lolXD I think it was the part about "you missed" that tickled my funny bone.

Either way, it was well written. A powerful capturing of anger.
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Feast4daBeast Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Actually that line was designed to have a double meaning, the girl that inspired it's nickname is "OneShotOtt"cause she only needs one bullet for her kill. Thank you for the comments and the read, please stop by my page anytime friend :)
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wickedsoulsbook Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Student Writer
i feel that way all the time when it comes to certain people. This is a great piece :)
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Feast4daBeast Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh you know I can do better this was just a rant haha
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Spowers12 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014
I've felt this way SO many times before... Awesome job!
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Feast4daBeast Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks man :)
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Spowers12 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014
No problem :)
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