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Exquisite - Part 1: Beginnings

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Exquisite - Part 1: Beginnings

If you haven't by now heard, there is a new superhero in town named Exquisite.  She has the prerequisites of every super hero goddess out there.  She's strong.  She's fast.  She's got a great moral code.  She's gorgeous.  She's tough as nails.  She's everything every little girl should aspire to be.  But most importantly, she's my wife.  We met when she was just starting out.  Petty crimes here and there, armed robbery, burglary, assault; the basic wave of vigilante heroism it takes to get noticed.  But it wasn't until I got kidnapped by Colonel Petro Popoyowich, a Russian Ultranationalist who wanted to use my award winning knowledge in bio-c

The Last Thoughts of Edward

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The Last Thoughts of Edward

 He bit me. That sick degenerate bit me! I had to kill him. Not because he bit me, no, that's not a good enough reason, but he attacked my daughter. Playing in the front yard, Lillian always enjoyed setting up tea parties with her dollies on the lawn. A sweet girl if such things can be measured. It breaks my heart to see her cry. But when she screamed, all I could hear was the terror in her voice. The terror in my heart as I charged out of the house, fists clenched, fearing the worst has happened to my daughter. Out on the lawn she was cornered. A plastic house is her only guard against the invader. I flashed red and pounded my way across th

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Jenny

I saw you watchin' me as you strolled 'cross the fine marble that I been washing on hand and knee.  A poor little girl wearing dirty white work clothes that haven't smelt clean in ages.  A girl who hasn't smelt good in ages.  And you look down on me with that finely waxed mustache and perfectly stitched bowler hat as if I am in your way.  Wasn't needed, that kick in my side you decided to plant on my ribs.  I sure you claim it to be no harder than the way you'd shoo a cat or a dog.  But I am no dog sir.  I am no dog.  And so you push me out of the way and I see you smirk over your shoulder.  You think you some big man mister mustache but I kn

The Early Call

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The Early Call

It's three in the morning. The phone rings. Not completely awake you answer the phone. Something whispers through the receiver fast and you're not sure what you heard. So you ask them to repeat themselves but the line goes dead and the constant drone of the dial tone gives you cause to hang up. And you sit there, worried, puzzling, wondering what they said. Did you hear correctly? Are you dreaming? A whisper like a breach of water spreading across the floor with slow intent and purpose seeps into your every thought not allowing you to even think about resting your head back down on your pillow. Are you sure...whoever on the other line said wh
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Exquisite - Part 1: Beginnings

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Exquisite - Part 1: Beginnings

If you haven't by now heard, there is a new superhero in town named Exquisite.  She has the prerequisites of every super hero goddess out there.  She's strong.  She's fast.  She's got a great moral code.  She's gorgeous.  She's tough as nails.  She's everything every little girl should aspire to be.  But most importantly, she's my wife.  We met when she was just starting out.  Petty crimes here and there, armed robbery, burglary, assault; the basic wave of vigilante heroism it takes to get noticed.  But it wasn't until I got kidnapped by Colonel Petro Popoyowich, a Russian Ultranationalist who wanted to use my award winning knowledge in bio-c

The Last Thoughts of Edward

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The Last Thoughts of Edward

 He bit me. That sick degenerate bit me! I had to kill him. Not because he bit me, no, that's not a good enough reason, but he attacked my daughter. Playing in the front yard, Lillian always enjoyed setting up tea parties with her dollies on the lawn. A sweet girl if such things can be measured. It breaks my heart to see her cry. But when she screamed, all I could hear was the terror in her voice. The terror in my heart as I charged out of the house, fists clenched, fearing the worst has happened to my daughter. Out on the lawn she was cornered. A plastic house is her only guard against the invader. I flashed red and pounded my way across th
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Under the Radar - Chapter 1

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Under the Radar - Chapter 1

Beneath a line of mercury lights, a black sedan crawled along with the rest of the turnpike traffic, its polished surface reflecting the wet asphalt like some moving urban mirage. Rain dotted and streaked its darkened windows, hiding all but the faintest silhouette of the middle-aged man behind the wheel. He was a shadow in an endless sea of shadows that trailed out of Manhattan, and he was currently stuck on the highway leading out towards Newark Airport. His thumbs tapped anxiously against the steering wheel, his eyes darting repeatedly towards his watch, and then he reached in his pocket and pulled out a lighter. For a second, his features
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Nicholas Favorite here, and I'm a writer who is finishing up his first project with the help of John Huddy Jr., Juan Romera and Ed Brisson who have helped bring my idea to life.

Current Residence: California
Favourite cartoon character: Rocko
Personal Quote: Write something worth reading or do something worth writing

Favourite Movies
Dr. Strangelove, Amelie, The Fall, Brick, Four Lions,
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Coconut Records, Regina Spektor, They Might Be Giants
Favourite Writers
Alistair McClaine, Phillip K. Dick, Issac Asimov
Other Interests
Hiking, Bicycling, Cooking, Politics

Character Sketches for New Project

Character Sketches for New Project

Just updating my blog.  Check it out if you can.  Follow it if you please.  Would love to get some feedback.  Thanks again http://nicholasfavorite.blogspot.com/2011/10/sketches-for-current-project.html

Favorite's Blog

Favorite's Blog

Hey everyone.  Starting to promote myself a bit better.  I have a blog that I will post updates here and other places.  Planning to also submit writing samples to get people more interested in my work.  Till then! http://nicholasfavorite.blogspot.com/ join my blog if you dare!

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Thanks for the watch. And by the way, I really loved your funky comic! :)
haha. NP. And thanks. I'm still working on it. Looking to get a new artist on board. My initial artist bailed for personal reasons, which is fine just kind of a headache. I started reading your story. You have a great flow with your words. Makes it easy to read.