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yokie44Hobbyist Photographer
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

This reminds me a lot of one of the classes i took on photography at school. This is one of those images they would use as the PERFECT example of how to use lines and shapes in composition. I love how the curves really draw the eye around the perimeter of the image, and then right into the center. The straight lines radiating out from the wall in the center, however, ground the spiral with a slight bit of rigidity. Awesome. The technical aspects all look to be spot on too. exposure, contrast, etc: perfect.

Another really strong point I think would have to be the colors. I think the subtly and the cool colors, combined with the curves really give this image a very natural, organic, flowing feel. Pretty incredible, in short.
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Thanks a lot for this detailed critic. :sun:

I've worked on the colors to enhance the result.
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wow
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Thanks :)
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:D
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You have been featured in my journal: [link]

Thank you for watching my gallery! :heart:
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:hug:
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zuckerblauHobbyist Photographer
Your beautiful work has been featured in my recent journal: "Beautiful Deviations"!

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Thanks for this very nice feature :rose:
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Oh wow! Love it! :+favlove:
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Thanks!
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I love this one a lot: the lighting and colors complement each other perfectly, the angle is just perfect, and the texture and lines from the area itself work quite dynamicaly with eachother, both the enveloping curves and the lines. In terms of technique, everything shines with flawlessness. In terms of personal preference, it just seems to me that the frame is a bit too much to the left, giving me the feeling that I have to adjust the way I look at it every time
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Fant0meHobbyist Photographer
Thanks for this detailed feedback :) . Do you mean that the picture seem to be tilted ?
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Yes, that's what I meant ^^
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Wow, this is beautiful! I've got a thing for spiral staircases and walkways, they make for such great photos, and you captured it perfectly!
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Thanks a lot :)
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No problem. :-)
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I featured your picture in my journal link
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:hug:
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Vraiment une belle prise. Vous avez tout un auditoire aussi :P
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Merci!
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Kroenen-DurdenProfessional Photographer
J'adore l'utilisation des lignes courbes! :) :+fav:
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Fant0meHobbyist Photographer
Merci!
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