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uuh i'm feeling like critiquing your designs or art, so send me a couple examples of either QvQ

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GuineaDraws Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
PlEASE i need critiquee  Custom #2 ~Bubble Witch~ by GuineapiqGal The Seasons by GuineapiqGal Softly Listening by GuineapiqGal
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uritsu Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017
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fairytoys Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
why do you do this to me,, you know i love your designssss buT I'LL TRY MY BEST AAAH

1) The colors are a m a z i n g,, but maybe the design should be more complex and interesting?? And maybe the yandere form should be more different and recognizable from the innocent  form?? because like the stripes added are too subtle imo (the broken hearts are perfect though,, i loVE)
 



2) This one is super pretty omg-- i have nothing to say about this, goOD JOB




3) Again, her colors are suuper pretty,, but maybe her design should be a bit more intriguing and eye-catching,, maybe add some stripes or something so that it's not just dots aah




4) i loVE HER SM YOU HAVE NO IDEA I SOB- But maybe you should add more markings to her chest and the back of her arm




i honestly had so much trouble critiquing these, because imo,, your designs are flawless QvQ
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uritsu Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017
Screams thank you for the critique qvq
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Elixiri Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HOPEFULLY IM NOT TOO LATE UHHHH
i KNOW MY stylE is incOnsiTenT But UhHHH

speedpaint - Elektronomia by LunaTiqqer cute by LunaTiqqer
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fairytoys Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your art is honestly super cute hHH

the first pic looks fine,, but maybe the arm looks sort of odd as it's like merging into her stomach lmAO

and the second pic seems sort of weird,, i just can't put my finger on it,, maybe it's Mellow's eyes?? idk aah,, 
 
but your art is super adorable and I love it!! QvQ
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Elixiri Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
y EAH I KNOW UHH x'D

and i've been trying out with eye styles 
byt thank you!! 
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Kurubai Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aaa I hope I'm not too late
Mirror by Kurubai   vanity by Kurubai   Grow into it by Kurubai   Sas Machine by Kurubai   Spork (Commission) by Kurubai  
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fairytoys Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I honestly have nothing to say for your art,, a couple things about designs, but i don't believe you wanted that aah

but your style's super cute and sparkly!! Everything looks fine, and the first piece is beautiful!! Aah
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Kurubai Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you uvu
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keiikko Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
please do critique- i need it

design
Auction Adopts - Closed by Kei-Kers

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self time by Kei-Kers Screen Shot 2017-06-25 at 1.13.55 PM by Kei-Kers
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fairytoys Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ooKAYY LET'S GOO MAN

Starting with designs,, imo they're a bit too simple and plain with colors?? like make them a tad more unrealistic, with a bit of like pink or blue or  something, and like swirly or cool patterns!!
But i really do like your designs aah

For your art, that fiRST PIECE IS GORGEOUS,, LIKE THE BACKGROUND AND EVERYTHING I??? LOVE LOVE LOVE

But for the second piece, the char looks a bit weird?? like the position is sort of awkward, and her eyes are too far apart, but again, that might be a style choice

but overall, I'm a huuge fan of your work!! Don't take my critique too harshly QvQ
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keiikko Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for critiquing me, i greatly appreciate it!
and I totally agree with all your pointers! nwn
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Ridqevale Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Student Digital Artist
heyy i just made some new characters ;00 
the art is pretty lazy, so i guess a design critique would be nice?
the designs were meant so be simple but memorable, so i can animate them ;0

The SquadFam by Ridqevale
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fairytoys Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ya know what

i love these designs,, i have nothing to say lmao

the colors are great,, and the little outfits and special items make them memorable!!

The only thing I have to say, is Brennan looks a little too dark and similar to Tess??

but other than that, these are amazing,,, good job!!
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Ridqevale Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! ;00 
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minqie Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Student Digital Artist
ooo if you're critquing,,,, here are some pieces that i've made:
Luca | Art Trade by mntyyy   Nah, I'm good | Personal Art by mntyyy I'd Rather Be In Space | Commission by mntyyy  
could you critique these ;v;?
 
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fairytoys Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
okay,, let me just say I loVE YOUR ART SO MUCH I NEED IT IN MY LIFE

but,, yeah lmaO-- 

So I really love your art style!! It's super aesthetic and pleasing, and the eyes are super cute QvQ

But I think you need a little work on the anatomy of your pieces. 

On the third picture, the pose is sort of odd,, and the knee bends awkwardly and looks really uncomfortable,, and clothes don't  really flow that way,, maybe make the curls a little less aggressive. 

Another thing,, for the first picture,, she doesn't have any calves,, her legs are completely straight,, and the bottom seems a bit round?? I used to do my anatomy like that,, but it looks a lot better if you move the bottom a bit lower and give her a longer stomach?? cause she barely has one aah,, Let me sketch you something as an example.

instead of doing this  2 by Maple-Waple  try to do this  1 by Maple-Waple aah QvQ  

but other than that,, i'm a huuge fan of your work,, you gotta tell me if you do commssions or ATs QvQ
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minqie Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Omg thank you so much for the critique !!
Yeah,, I know my anatomy is real funky and I've been working on it,,, but I didn't really know where to start and your tips seem real helpful and I'll definitely use them >:3
dgJfhls and your other compliments??? omg it means so much to me that you like my art,, you're so sweet oml <33
I'll definitely notify you when commissions or art trades are open >;3c
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fairytoys Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i'm glad my critique was of use!! QvQ
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perii-draws Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bluescreen Ref by Peridorito7152   Yo by Peridorito7152   Happy by Peridorito7152  
how about some of these?
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fairytoys Featured By Owner Edited Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Alright! Starting with your art nvn

I think your style is super cute and cartoony, and i love it!! But your anatomy needs some work,, as in the first picture,, one leg is  skinnier than the other, and they're shaped kinda awkward.. and the elbows are too sharp and jagged?? and this might've been intentional, but the neck is waay too slim, but yeah lmao.

and on the last pic, the  cat in the back has one chubby arm, and one loong skinny arm, and it looks kinda painful hh

moving on to designs

Bluescreen is really cool, but I think there should be more colors?? Also just a tip, he should have something that makes him stand out,, like his tv head does, but maybe add an interesting shirt logo, or like a cooler outfit idk

but yeah!! ii hope i wasn't too harsh hh
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perii-draws Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks! and you weren't too harsh lol
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