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Critique by isolophobee Mar 8, 2018, 6:52:24 PM
I see what you were attempting but the image looks very messy. There are a few factors that attributed to this:
1. You smoother the skin out too much. The model looks fake. As though she was drawn and the artist forgot to add shading to their image.
2. In pairing with the overly smoothed skin her eyes are almost to real. This would not of been a problem if some texture was left in the skin.
3. The hair framing the face seems to be blurred on the outside edges, this is common when the refine edged is used for hair. I also use the refine edge, but I recommend drawing in some stands along the edge to make it appear less blurred.
4. In the bottom right, on her shoulder, you'll notice that in smoothing out the models skin you removed some of the shadow. Again, this is rather common.
5. The lighting on the model does not match the background. The background appear to be emanating some light yet none of this can be seen on the model. Lighting is hard, I struggle with it also, but it is super important to study where the lighting is coming from.

If your intended idea for this piece was to make it seem fake (doll like) then I say it was successful. If you were aiming for a realistic Gothic-esque piece I recommend not smoothing the skin as much, drawing in some hair strands and focusing on the light more. All in all it's not that bad, definitely need a bit more practice though.
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AliaChek Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2018
 Very beautiful  :heart:
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FairieGoodMother Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much :glomp: :iconlisabagherpour:
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AliaChek Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2018
You're welcome!
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ImaginedMoments Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Beautiful :heart:
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FairieGoodMother Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much :glomp: :iconlisabagherpour:
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pjenz Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this model from pixabay, I think I faved every one of her pics lol she has such a great look, love the softness of her skin, and the eyes, beautifully done :heart:
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FairieGoodMother Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much :glomp: :iconlisabagherpour:
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pjenz Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so very welcome Heart

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paranormallily32 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful Piece...
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FairieGoodMother Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much :glomp: :iconlisabagherpour:
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paranormallily32 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your very welcome....
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