Rats Redo Old Page17

Another page from my revision of "Rats in the Cellar." The revision work is explained here in this journal entry .

Again, the first person who can correctly guess this stock model's identity (and get that guess to me) I'll feature in the "'Demon's Due' Defined" journal entry.

Because I am doing the revision somewhat out of order, and with some expansion, I've begun calling the pages by names instead of numbers. This one is "Standing Order."

The old "Standing Order" was Page17, which is here (where it will remain): [link]

And, lest someone grow concerned, not all of the "Rats" revisions are close-ups on Valerin's face. I'll try to post something different on the next one.

Enjoy!