Could you help me with some editing of my work?
I would love to edit yours(even though I've never seen it
Maybe we can enjoy editing through the fact that the terrible mistakes are not our own and the corrections to our work is done by some idiot that knows nothing about writing
I see I struggle to write common speech, when the battle is not on and the characters sit down to speak common... I always cringe at that, it's always so cheesy or feels so fake, like no one would ever say that!
Writing has a air of professionalism to it, when ever we miss that mark... it hurts.
anyway... I'm sending a note regardless of your yes or no
but maybe that's not a good idea