Thanks to <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/a/n/a…" alt="" title="AnIvorySoul"/> I saw her critique and was able to see you beautiful artwork! Regarding this piece, I'm with what has been said regarding the foreground buildings and the background panorama. Maybe a different hue or color mood (a level in "color" in PS, cutting out the buildings) could help distance the mountains and the background houses. I didn't notice the character immediately too, but that easy to fix, like making it all blueish llike his cloak( again a simple color level) <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/>
Hope you don't mind my point of view, in any case it's already great and will watch your works from now on!