Drawing any Final Fantasy outfit is an ambitious venture, as anime outfits and especially Final Fantasy are unforgivably intricate. That being, said, you did a wonderful job with your version of it!
You asked me a little while back for some helpful criticism and I've been working on a list for you if you're up for it
Remember, I say these things as a friend that wants to help you iron out
- Her leg looks just a little knobby in the knee area. The DK legs are hard to do, so I often mess them up as well! Her bent leg was handled well and adds to the dynamic nature of the pose!
- If she's in a leap, then this is mostly irrelevant. The spacing on the toes looks great, it's broad enough to be making contact with something, but the way the ends of the toes are doesn't look like she's making contact. The toes would have to be shifted one way or the other to show the pressure of being on a surface.
- I really REALLY like her tail, it would have been even more fun if you'd had more canvas space to sweep it out in a clean arch. That being said, the initial arch coming out from her back is just PERFECT.
- Last note, the cape. The direction of it is really good and the placement balances out the tail. The folds could have been more "deep" to show a true fold in the fabric flapping.
The head and outfits are great, the black case on her hip was done perfectly! And I love the brightness you gave her green shoulder pad, it stands out as a bright beacon to the entirety of her outfit.The gun was also impressively done. Overall, great work! This is a great snapshot of your progress this last year!