Just checking in to let you know that I just caught up with the latest Dorvak chapter on MCstories and gonna leave some feedback here because there's really no place to leave feedback there.
Was a bit disappointed to see only one chapter this week instead of the usual two, but it left me on such a cliffhanger. I'm hoping to see Talia get Dorvak'd, but I'm also aware that Angie is messing around with some stuff up with the harem and could potentially make that difficult.
I just hope the beautiful young reporter was a factor that Angie hadn't anticipated and Norma keeps a pawn on her chessboard before her inevitable fall. Seems like Talia would be an exceptional slavegirl, being related to a congressman. I do hope that if she DOESN'T luck out and gets brainwashed by Norma, that we get to see the process in action and in detail. We haven't seen it at work on a fresh girl since Briar.
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I too hate when the villainous hypnotist loses in the end, but at least Angie is still hypnotized, as she puts it, she just has a better master now.
I posted only one to give some readers (assuming I have many left) a chance to catch up. Also, As I am working to the end game, plotting is now important. Once a chapter is posted, I’m plot committed by it. I am currently writing Chapter 10, a very Norma centric chapter.
Please do keep reading and giving feedback. It means a lot.
Just curious, do you have a favorite character(s)?
Obviously Angie and Briar, being the leading ladies, have my heart. Norma is a bitchy antagonist, but despite that, she's a slave to the process, so I know her comeuppance is soon.
I really like what I'm seeing with Talia in the short time we see her. She reminds me a lot of Briar with her spunky, "do it myself" attitude. I...admittedly sorta hope that backfires on her, because I know that Norma sees value in having a family member of someone in congress as her obedient slavegirl. I think Talia believes she's tricking Norma, but it wouldn't surprise me if Norma asked for this girl personally to interview her. I hope, if she gets processed, that we see it in its full glory as Talia becomes Barefoot Talia.
As for male characters, I like both Trevor and Peter. Trevor has a lot to live up to with regards to Johnny, but Peter gives me a very young Armand vibe with his very early detective skills.
Writing her, I fell in love with Angie, and I actually hated writing her humiliation at Norma’s hands.
I think of Norma as an avatar for my hypnosis fetish....,.often bad for me but too good to quit.
Your comments, and a few others have actually inspired me to write Talia’s processing, I hadn’t originally, and I usually don’t take requests on ongoing stories. But it makes sense so I’m in the process of writing it.