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Literature Text
When I close my eyes,
I can feel it and see it,
but it's never enough.
I need some real affection,
someone to touch.
The emptiness I feel inside,
is enough to make me want to
run and hide.
So much unknown,
in these dark sad eyes of mine.
So much I have to share,
but no one's ever there.
One day someone's bound to
come and listen to what I
have to say.
Maybe soon, maybe far away.
I can feel it and see it,
but it's never enough.
I need some real affection,
someone to touch.
The emptiness I feel inside,
is enough to make me want to
run and hide.
So much unknown,
in these dark sad eyes of mine.
So much I have to share,
but no one's ever there.
One day someone's bound to
come and listen to what I
have to say.
Maybe soon, maybe far away.
this is kind of a feeling sorry for myself poem,
I wrote it a while ago. Let me know how it is!
I wrote it a while ago. Let me know how it is!
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mmm... me likes the poem except the two lines that only have 3 words... seems like it makes it not flow as swell. me likes though. you're very good at putting things into words, and i can relate to lots of what you write about, or what i have read so far.
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