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MLP_Lauren's Legacy Chapter 1_Page 10

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Published: September 2, 2012
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Lauren’s legacy is an nonprofit fanbase comic project, My Little pony Friendship is Magic and all characters and elements from such that may appear on this project are legally owned by Hasbro, HUB and created by Lauren Faust :iconfyre-flye:, please support the official franchise.

Summary:

Cover: [link]
Intro: [link]

Page 1: [link]
Page 2: [link]
Page 3: [link]
Page 4: [link]
Page 5: [link]
Page 6: [link]
Page 7: [link]
Page 8: [link]
Page 9: [link]
Page 11: [link]
Page 12: [link]
Page 13: [link]
Page 14: [link]
Page 15: [link]
Page 16: [link]
Page 17: [link]
Page 18 (Final): [link]

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RaingThunderHobbyist Artist
Who's that hockey mask wearing guy on the black-haired kid's shirt?
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PenRoseTheArtistHobbyist Traditional Artist
i was just reading this
and just when i read the part where sister stuqerpoiuq said she needed to go to the market... as soon as she finished that word, since my parents were watching arrow in the living room, it sounded like one of the characters said "condoms in a store"...
sunblaze32's avatar
Doctor John... hmm...
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chiaotzuloverStudent Artist
Man, I hate those other kids, calling her stupid like that, they're stupid, not her!
boronium's avatar
Why is she living in a french orphanage ?
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Evil-RickProfessional Digital Artist
Question as why is she an orphan or why the orphanage is French?
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*French* orphanage, the other one is kinda batman obvious. ;)
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Evil-RickProfessional Digital Artist
Lauren lives in France (altough she's from england)
boronium's avatar
I didn't know that... Well still good to know if I go crazy stalker !
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mirtar34Hobbyist Digital Artist
O.k, second panel, the word "carrying" should be "carry" with the words The other" to help the sentence a bit, And I think there should be a period after the word "myself" instead of a comma. Also, dont feel too bad about yourself, your main language is Spanish, and your English is pretty good, I admire a guy that knows more then one language, keep up the fantastic work. :D
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Evil-RickProfessional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot for all the help, I'll do the corrections as soon as I can. :)
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mirtar34Hobbyist Digital Artist
I believe there's more to come, I'm just taking a break, lol
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InfinitelyImpossibleHobbyist Artist
I dont know why... but this reminds me of a game called 'Alice: Madness Returns' was it supposed to? Because she was like in an orphanage, had nightmares about her past, had a kinda creepy guy talking to her about her problems and someone who told her to go into town to get stuff xD
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mirtar34Hobbyist Digital Artist
You know, I was thinking that myself.
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Evil-RickProfessional Digital Artist
In a way.
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How old is lauren? 10 years in the orphanage plus maybe 6 when the event happened?
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Evil-RickProfessional Digital Artist
She was 5 when she lost her parents, plus 10 years at the orphanage, she's 15 now.
KingArthur5's avatar
WOW! Those were fast responses!
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Why does the name Sainte-Jeanne De Valois ring a bell? :/
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Evil-RickProfessional Digital Artist
She's a saint from France.
karkovice1's avatar
Ah! Okay! I think there's a few roadways named after her in Canada. I think there's one in Montreal. Boulverard Jeanne-De-Valois, or some such thing.
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PrincevNightFuryStudent General Artist
Those two boys remind me of snips and snails.
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Evil-RickProfessional Digital Artist
lol really?
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PrincevNightFuryStudent General Artist
Yeah, ones is tall and lanky with sharp buck teeth, and the other is short and chubby with a big nose and spiky hair.
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