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Trixie Vs. Discord

Ta-Da! The Great and Powerful Trixie returns! :icontrixieclapplz:

There are a lot of firsts for me with this one, the biggest being Discord, I was surprised by difficult he was to make.

I've had this comic planned for a very long time but wasn't sure how to do most of it, and then it dawned on me that I have no idea if Trixie and/or Discord will be making an appearance on the show soon. So I wanted to make this before any thing canon might have rendered this idea unusable.

I was going to have more faces and catagories on the "scheme" panel, there were even some I took away after already making them, but I ran out of space so I thought I'd include some here in the description:

Doughnuts: Spike and Donut Joe

Gourmet Desserts: Gustav the Griffon and Mulia Milds

There were also more faces in existing catagories but I removed those to.

I've got to say I came up with Discord's 4th wall breaking line after trying to come up with a way to explain how he was at one of Trixie's shows, and I thought
"This sucks, I have to come up with something not relevant to the comic at all, that will take up a panel that could be used for a joke or reaction, just so that people wont complain about it not making sense. Why don't they just stop overanalyzing things and accept that it's just a joke comic and go with it."

Tools used: Pencil, Paper, MS paint, GIMP

Here are the links to the other Trixie Vs. comics:

Colgate: [link]

Derpy 1: [link]

Derpy 2: [link]

Zecora: [link]

Pinkie Pie: [link]

Berry Punch: [link]

Fluttershy: [link]

The Cutie Mark Crusaders: [link]

Also yes, I'm aware that a plot isn't an actual part of the horse anatomy, I did it for the lulz.

Edit: I added an extra M to the M.M.M.M., I forgot about the mascarpone. I also added some blush to Trixie in the last panel.

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Coolposh's avatar

Or, DECOY rather. Get it? Because Evil Decoy... Yeah I think you get it.

Evil-DeC0Y's avatar
Yeah I get it! 👈😎👈
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wow this comic is amazeing and the humor is good too and I dare say Trixie makes a point. take away all the sugar and it's absolute torture to everyone. Also I like how Trixie blushes at the end I think you may have started a ship, that is to say if Disctrixie isn't already a thing anyways.
I laughd when Discord is like it's a coic strip don't question it and Trixie is baffeled by the forthe wall joke. but man is Discord actualy planning to get rid of suger? that's just evil. I like it sneaky trick DIscord
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This is amazing (I just love Discord)! My favorite panel was when Discord was all like "No reason"!
I don't really like Trixie because all she cares about is herself and doesn't really care about other horse's feelings and how er actions make others feel, but your comic made her seem less...less self-centered!
Good job! <img src="…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

If you really love Discord, they made a song about hi,. I forget what it's called, but it's really good! You can find it on Grroveshark. You could probably find it on Pandora, but I don't really use Pandora that often. I'm blabbing because of the 100 word minimum).
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First of all, you have made a comic series. Which I wish more Bronies and Pegasisters did.
Secondly, I already like Trixie. But you make her even more likeable.

And the obviously thing is that your comics are funny. I don't laugh at much. Usually I just smile and move along, but this comic got a little laugh out of me.
And your drawings too and amazingly well done and look very much like the actual artwork of the show.

And I'm guessing this is your first time drawing Discord (my favorite character ever by the way) and you did an extremely good job considering.

I applaud you on a job (more like eight jobs) well done!
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Hey Evil Dec0y,

I really think you outdid yourself this time. Everything was great; the concept, the art, the jokes... I could go on and on. What I loved was that the humor was so dynamic; every three panels had a laugh that was really something else.

I'm not sure if this is your style, but with Discord looking so show-accurate, Trixie's eyes and nose were slightly off proportion, and fixing that would make this comic truly flawless. The facial expressions were priceless. Perhaps Trixie's pupils could contract in shock a bit more...? I'm not sure, but its up to you.

Excellent work.
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Well this is true. Same thing will happen to us. The one thing that us humans can't survive is well simple, fossil fuel. If you take that away you will see a drastic change to our lives we might even go into extinction if we ran out of oil. and the dialogue to this is very interesting now here's my rating. A 4 1/2 on Vision due to that this is a very true thing all that you foreshadowed is very accurate. A 5 on originality because I'm guessing no one thought of this so this thought is originally your idea. A 3 1/2 on Technique because of vectors a good but yet simple way. And a 5 on Impact because this is a very huge impact on the aftermath in which if the sugar did disappear in Equestria. Its there main natural resource. But thats my critique~~~Zombieinferno32
Evil-DeC0Y's avatar
I actually didn't use any vectors, I made everything myself.:)
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You just fucking nailed it. The humor worked well, the visuals - Well they look like the real thing. As real as animated brightly colored equines can be. I´m not sure if you used vectors or drew everypony yourself, eitherway, they look well animated.
I do not really know how to judge the point "Impact" because well you just gave me a few good laughs but not nothing like a deep message to live my life after. So I think 4 stars for giving me the good time is fair enough.
So all in all,
great comic, I´d like to see more stuff like this.
Nightmare-Serenade33's avatar
Wait, no! I didn't mean to mark your critique as unfair! Oh darn! Please forgive me!
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Since I already gave my personal opinion in the comments I will just talk about the art.
(Sorry for eventual grammar problems. English is not my main language and I try my best)

Technique: I gave a 5.0 for techique because your drawing looks like the one of the show. Since it is a comic based on FIM it means that the show's art is the top, anthing above that is unecessary awesomeness.
Obviously, if I simply ignore the rule above, you would not receive a 5.0, which is not fair since you are required to use this kind of art to represent a comic of the show.

Impact: The comic was very funny and I really liked how you showed that equestria's economy is heavily based on sugar. Seeing discord in trixie vs. X comic was a nice surprise, but I guess people were already expecting that, thats why I gave a -1.0 point.

Originality: The concept of the Trixie Vs. X is pretty original in my opinion (I would give a 5.0 to your first one), but since you are doing a lot of it, the comic is not that original anymore.

Vision: I am not sure if I understood what Vision is supposed to mean, so I will write about what I think it is.
Discord breaking the 4th wall is awesome, and your simple explanation of how he managed to escape what very funny. Ponies shouldn't expect logical answers from the element of chaos!
The concept of equestria's sugar based economy should also be included here, that is a fun and interesting view I haven't thought before.

Final note: I have no idea if I gave a low rate or a high rate (Based on the standards used here), this is the first critique I write in Dev.
firekitu's avatar
whats m.m.m.m again? i always forget...
Evil-DeC0Y's avatar
Marzipan Mascarpone Meringue Madness (the cake from the train mystery episode in season 2).
firekitu's avatar
oh yeah ive forgot about that episode... i should rewacht mlp...
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Fleetwing13's avatar

love the plot joke!;P

fanfics4ever's avatar
never saw Sugar being used in zap apple jam.
Honey, yes.
Sugar, no.
Evil-DeC0Y's avatar
Well, teeeechinically there is sugar in honey, you just don't have to add it yourself. ;)
battlecruiser006's avatar
Radar has picked up a helicopter going soi soi soi.
PurpleWonderPower's avatar
That's just hilarious!
papillonsisi2012's avatar
Me: I SHIP THEM. Bisexual Heart 
CardmasterWild's avatar
"I like your plot". The damage is done. Trixie might now think that Discord has the hots for her.
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