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Human Shimmer by InvisibleInk by Evil-Count-Proteus Human Shimmer by InvisibleInk by Evil-Count-Proteus
A prototype character sheet of Sunset Shimmer, that is, the Human counterpart to the Equestrian Pony Sunset Shimmer, or Human Shimmer for distinction. This is a prototype design for Human Shimmer from a fan-fiction of mine. She is a member of a secretive global organization known as the Technological Consortium, or just "The Consortium" or TEC for short, which holds science and technology in the highest regard and has secretly safeguarded Humanity from the supernatural and other threats for centuries.

Sunset Shimmer's job is observation, and she has been assigned to monitor Canterlot High, her Equestrian counterpart and her friends.

PERSONALITY
Human Shimmer is almost humourless, she is dead serious all the time and is dedicated to her job and safeguarding the masses. She often comes off as ruthless, malicious and vengeful, particularly towards those who upset the order that the Technological Consortium has established, especially the chaotic and untrustworthy supernatural beings that threaten her world.

She also has a very high IQ, and the Consortium respects intelligence. It is this intelligence that has placed Human Shimmer at a higher than average position for someone her age, and Shimmer is proud of her strong mind. She gets along extremely well with fellow intellectuals as long as they are not beholden to arrogance and a high and mighty attitude about their intellect.

She is still in meanie mode, similar to how Sunset Shimmer was in the original Equestria Girls movie, but more serious and with a "stick up her butt" professional attitude regarding her job. She is prone to insulting the Rainbooms and their friends when they meet.

Meanie Shimmer for comparison.

Human Shimmer being in meanie mode will offer a contrast between her and the reformed Equestrian Shimmer.

CASUAL ATTIRE
Human Shimmer's preferred style of dress when off-duty. Cool but with a touch of sophistication.

BASE UNIFORM
The standard uniform of Consortium members when stationed within one of their bases.

OPERATIONS
Operatives typically wear something like this when on a mission that does not involve being in disguise or hiding in plain sight. The insignia on the right arm signifies the operatives speciality and role, in Human Shimmer's case, she is adept with electronic devices, particularly ones for reconnaissance and information gathering.

THE FAN-FIC
I tend to plan my fan-fictions like a television series, averaging at 6 seasons so I can plan various events and development throughout. I would plan to have Human Shimmer be the primary antagonist of season 1, with the Dazzlings as secondary antagonists. The Humane 7 initially assume Human Shimmer is evil, but when finally confronted for a finale, they learn she and the organization she belongs to are genuinely concerned about the safety of the Human race and are not even malevolent towards magic, the supernatural and so forth, they just want to regulate it and protect people from danger, they are antagonists, not true villains.

The Technological Consortium has been watching the Humane 7 and their antics for a while, and have been assisting them from behind the scenes in hopes that the Equestrian portal problem will resolve itself while taking steps to perform damage control or commit resources to backup plans should the Humane 7 fail. For example, they were prepared to step in during the Sunset Satan and Midnight Sparkle incidents before those things resolved themselves. Sometimes their assistance was necessary, such as during the Sirens incident, where they sent another of their young operatives, Vinyl Scratch, to free the Rainbooms and provide them with aid against The Dazzlings. What, you think Vinyl Scratch just so happened to show up with a giant transforming speaker-equipped car...?

The Consortium is responsible for the seeming absence of magic and other supernatural elements in the Human world, but that is not to say that they aren't there, it is simply in hiding, under quarantine and sometimes what could be described as house arrest. Most magic users practice their art in secret, some do so under scrutiny and regulation by the Consortium, and some even work for the Consortium as experts on magic.

I'll leave things here for now, but more on the Technological Consortium and the other characters for my Equestria Girls setting later.


Drawn by Invisibleinkdoodles, commissioned by me. :iconevil-count-proteus:

Artist - invisibleinkdoodles
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Would appreciate comments and feedback, and a golden doubloon to the one who guesses the role-playing game reference.
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lyokian Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2019
"Sometimes their assistance was necessary, such as during the Sirens incident, where they sent another of their young operatives, Vinyl Scratch, to free the Rainbooms and provide them with aid against The Dazzlings. What, you think Vinyl Scratch just so happened to show up with a giant transforming speaker-equipped car...?"

Yes, yes I did. Why? ...cause it was awesome.
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OMEGAZX1234 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2019
All right, I've got another idea, if you don't like it, I wont bother you anymore. Here goes:

A portal opens in the night and part of The Pony Of Shadows emerges. Suddendly, it's starting to expand, taking the form of a Little boy, with no memory of his former life. Nurse Redheart, who was passing by, finds him unconcious and take him to the nearest hospital. When he wakes up and meet her, he says that he doesn't remember anything. The night after that he was taken away by the Consortium because he has, as the said, an "Unusual Energy". They interrogated him, experimented him and torture him endlesssly; Until, when he had enough, he acquires his pony form: With Bat wings, ears and tail, fangs, claws and cut pupils, unleashing his powers for the fist time, destroying great part of the facility in the process. He took the chance and ran off, finally escaping from their captors (In some point he took a look at himself in a mirror or a river and saw his transformation). The organization made a search for him, but they never found him.

Since that moment, he starts living in the streets, doing anything to survive, until a group of mercenarieas found him stealing their food. When the leader cough him, he saw in his eyes all the pain, the suffering and the loneliness he went through, he takes him to his place and, with help of his fellow partners, raise him as one of them. Years have pass and He acquires the same skills as Deathstroke, Deadshot and Red Hood from DC and finally he choose an name on his own: "Noir MoonSpawn".

As time goes by, he leaned to control his powers, transforming at will. And, in some point, he gains a new ability: Cryokinesis (Cold Powers) and becomes as skilled as Sub-Zero from Mortal Kombat. Finally his group belives that it was time for him to inscribe him, so they sent him to Canterlot High to start his education.

One more thing: He's three years older that the Mane 7.

And that's it. I hope you enjoy it. If you don't, thank you for taking your time and Reading my ideas. See ya and good luck.
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Evil-Count-Proteus Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2019
I'm sorry but that is oddly specific. I have some constructive criticism on your proposals though. The problem with ideas and suggestions such as these is that they are not so much ideas/suggestions for the setting as they are stories in themselves. The trouble with "suggestions" this in-depth is that it would require my story to shift in order to accommodate them, and from a storytelling stance I'd have to return to this character constantly. it sounds like this is a story you all ready came up with at some point in the past.

I hope this rejection doesn't hurt your feelings, but it's always hard to turn someone down on something in a way that isn't hurtful. :(
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OMEGAZX1234 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2019
Oh crap, sorry, I haven't thought about it. Don't worry, it's never easy to tell the truth but it must be told. Thanks for the tip.
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Evil-Count-Proteus Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2019
It's OK, I'm happy you are taking it well. I have always thought that offence cannot be given, only taken, and I myself take criticism in stride if it's tasteful and constructive.
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OMEGAZX1234 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2019
Pure poetry buddy.
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OMEGAZX1234 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2019
If you're interest, I my have an idea for Season 5 or 6. Let me know.
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Evil-Count-Proteus Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2019
I all ready have quite a few things in the works for Seasons 5 and 6, but you're free to make suggestions, though I can't promise I will use anything, particularly if I don't think it fits the theme. For example, no death of main or secondary characters unless they're major villains, Equestria Girls is meant for children and is typically full of good vibes, so I tend to stay somewhat faithful to that, even if things do get a bit serious sometimes.
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OMEGAZX1234 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2019
Thanks. Okay, here's the thing: What about if The Consortium created an Ultimate Life Form a long time ago? Using an extract of The Pony Of Shadows that ended up in the Human World. Then they gave it form: 1st It took a Thestral (BatPony) Form; 2nd a Human Form (A Male). They name him like the Project: "Noir". Full Name: "Noir MoonSpawn". They trained him so hard like the Spartans from "300" that he became cold, ruthless and mercyless. He's a great acrobat (Like Red Hood from DC Comics), he acquires his pony form: With Bat wings, ears and tail, fangs, claws and cut pupils. When he realices that they were using him as a weapon and planning to get him rid of, He manages to escape, lossing his memory in the process. Eventualy, he gets his own magical abillities: Which one would you like it most?: The same as The Pony Of Shadows or Sub-Zero from Mortal Kombat?

That's all I got for now. I hope you like it. Feel free to make some changes so it'll make sense. Thanks a lot and see you son.
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Evil-Count-Proteus Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2019
Sadly the Consortium would not create a magical life-form, especially one so powerful. They would use genetic engineering and cybernetics though, which they have. I all ready had plans for the "X of Shadows" (since it wouldn't be a Pony in this universe) as one of several creatures of the same race. Paralel dimensions, such as the spirit world(Elementals and Spirits), the Spectral Realm(Ghosts) and the Fae realms are planned(Queen Chrysalis is going to be a Fae Queen in this setting), The Consortium calls the science of these beings "Dimensional Science".

I was going to have the X of Shadows and other shadow beings be a part of the Spirit World. What I was going to do was have Spirits "embody" things, like Anger, Fear, Hope, Love, Fire, Air, Trees, Rivers, and so forth, and the Shadow beings are a type of spirit that feeds on negative emotions that can bond to people who strongly emit the emotions they need, which would be what happened with The Pony of Shadows being created from one bonding with whats-his-face from Friendship is Magic.
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OMEGAZX1234 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2019
Your idea is so cool. But, why not? Othe organizations created very powerfull beings: Mewtwo from Pokémon; Shadow The Hedgehog from Sonic; Sephiroth from Final Fantasy; Adam Warlock from Marvel; Bizzarr Superman from DC; ETC. And no matter how supreme their powers were, they were always defeated (After an incredible and amazing battle of course).
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Evil-Count-Proteus Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2019
The Technological Consortium distrusts magic and the supernatural so they wouldn't create weapons from it. They spend all their time fighting, destroying, imprisoning, policing, regulating and quarantining magical and supernatural things. They see magic and the supernatural as unpredictable, while they see science and technology as tried, proven and reliable.
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OMEGAZX1234 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2019
But what about, in some point they think "We have to fight fire with fire"?
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Evil-Count-Proteus Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2019
Nah, that would burn the world down. ;) Besides, they unfailingly believe in science, technology and progress.
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heavens-champion Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2018
Very nice.
So, when will it be made?
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Evil-Count-Proteus Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2018
It's not an actual written fan-fiction, it's just a setting I am building, which I will commission designs and art/comics of.
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heavens-champion Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2018
A shame. This would make an interesting fanfic. Especially if Human Sunset teams up with the Humane 7.

Human Sunset: I know we got off on the wrong foot before, but if we're going to save the day, it's time we put our differences behind us.
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I was all ready planning to do that. I tend to plan my fan-fiction like a television series, averaging at 6 seasons.

Season 1 - Human Shimmer as main antagonist, Humane 7 and co. are vaguely aware a behind the scenes force is watching and hindering them. They become aware of the Technological Consortium by the end of the season.

Season 2 - The Consortium is taking a more direct approach to the Equestrian Magic problem, presenting the Humane 7 with rules, laws and ultimatums, with the Humane 7 becoming more aware of the Consortium's power, reach and history, as well as where the Human world magic has gone and how it is hunted, oppressed and shackled by the Consortium. The Consortium sends envoys through the portal to politely and diplomatically tell Princess Celestia to keep her stuff on her side. Princess Twilight is forced to be monitored and go through "official channels" to visit her friends in the Human world, Equestrian Shimmer narrowly avoids being deported back to Equestria. We learn Human-Sparkle(Sci-Twi) was originally being groomed by the Consortium to join them while at Crystal Prep Academy and they intended to induct her at graduation. The Humane 7 learn more about the Consortium's goals, ethics and ideology, and on technical terms they find it hard to find fault with, creating a moral grey situation. Humane 7 indirectly cause something terrible to happen in the season finale which angers the Consortium.

Season 3 - The Consortium is actively trying to capture the Humane 7 so they can be stripped of their magic and Equestrian Shimmer sent back through the portal, which is intended to be destroyed by the Consortium. Humane 7 on the run in this season and we get a "world tour" kind of arc where we see more of the world. The Humane 7 periodically encounter other entities that are on the run or in hiding from the Consortium, painting the Consortium as oppressive villains as we explore the Consortiums darker side, or at least, that is how they seem to their victims... We see various magical and scientific outcasts and rebels who have angered the Consrtium and are in hiding or on the run, including supernatural beings like Vampires and Werewolves, Wizards and Witches and scientists who refused to let the Consortium seize their inventions.

Canterlot High is seized and put on lock-down and so is the Equestrian portal. Humane 7 and The Consortium eventually team up to end a supernatural threat which has been building since the first season in the finale, but more on this threat later... The Consortium admits they can probably get along with the Humane 7 and many of their supernatural friends they have made throughout the series, and the two groups start to work together. Human Shimmer still does not like the Humane 7 but respects them now.

Season 4 - The Consortium are allies now and we see the Humane 7 interacting with the organization and it's members on friendlier terms, though old rivalries still remain. Plot and episodic occurrences focus on the Humane 7 and Cosortium learning to get along and dealing with supernatural and technological threats. Sub-plot about Human Sparkle(Sci-Twi) and Rainbow Dash thinking the Consortium is really cool and considering joining.

Season 5 - TBC. Things a bit shaky from here on out since I have not thought things through as much from here on.

Season 6 - TBC. The only thing I've thought about at this point in the story is the final boss of the series.
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heavens-champion Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2018
Right. As a possible idea for season 6, have Human Shimmer sacrifice herself to save the heroes.
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Evil-Count-Proteus Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2018
Nah no one is going to die.
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heavens-champion Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2018
That's okay. It was only a suggestion.
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HenryLouis21 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
Give me a link when you're done with it because I would very much like to read it. 
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Evil-Count-Proteus Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2018
It's not going to actually be a story, more like a setting I am world building. I will be revealing more information about it with commissions. I think The Dazzlings and then The Consortium other members will be next.
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HenryLouis21 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
OK cool, but you should actually begin writing a fanfiction about it, also since Sunset is working for a Technological Consortium, wouldn't it be cool if we saw other characters that use technology to create some badass tech and suit such as a Tachyon device and an Iron Man suit???
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Evil-Count-Proteus Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2018
I was actually going to have the Consortium have that kind of technology, as well as things like artificial intelligence, robots, etc.... if I was going to write a series, the threats would not always be magical in nature, but sometimes technological.

One plot point I was going to go with was that they run Crystal Prep Academy and were nurturing Human Sparkle to join them before she left. Abacus Cinch is still running things from an outpost below Crystal Prep Academy with her daughter Sunny Flare, who is also a member, which is why she has that out of place PIP Boy on her wrist. Indigo Zap and Sour Sweet are also members, and Indigo's absence is explained by her taking part in missions. Sour Sweet is a spy and master of disguise. I hope you can see what I am trying to do with Sour Sweet being a spy.

I will probably do a Technological Consortium character sheet showing off it's members at some point where I will go into major detail on the organization and it's members.

There are also some OC villains I want to do, and some G1 characters I want to bring back, like Hydia the Witch and Mr Moochick.
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HenryLouis21 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
Nice, and what plans do you have for the mane 7 ???
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Evil-Count-Proteus Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2018
I have not put as much thought into them so far, though I was going to have it so that Sci-Twi was being groomed by Crystal Prep Academy, which is run by the consortium, to join them, before she transferred. I was going to have a sub-plot about Fluttershy establishing a connection with Fae in Everfree Forest because they feel she is similar to them. Everfree Forest is on quarantine and is basically a "magic preserve" which is monitored by the Consortium.
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HenryLouis21 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
Huh, nice, 

Also, does Consortium have a machine that can send people to parallel universes???
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Evil-Count-Proteus Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2018
I was considering alternate universe stuff, but I have not thought of the specifics yet.
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Davinci975 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2018
I would read it
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MrSeyker Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2018
A fan of best girl, I see. Noice.
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GaiasHeritage Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2018
Quite the concept you have planned out. I wish you all the luck for its completion
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