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so i upgraded war... by ethan-k793 so i upgraded war... by ethan-k793
my only problem with him is that his head cant move : (
he is a lot more stable now though!
id request a critique, but I don't have any fancy membership... bricklink funds and whatnot.
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Vedkarrtheunbroken Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist

In the past, I've forced my opinions on people in critiques, but I'll try to stay nice and neutral here.

 

The hip joints don't look strong enough to support the legs, that could use fixing.

The shoulders seem to be a little bare, and expose the inner workings.

I like the piston system you've incorperated into the torso, well done!

 

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ethan-k793 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks for the critique! I could use more of these...
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BioRockDude Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013
I would say...
Blue parts on the legs need to go.
Something to add to the shoulder. Like another one of those parts on the other side if it fits and if it doesn't hinder movement.
And some tiny detailing maybe? Like lego figure hands on the pistons of certain parts to fill in some gaps.

As for the head, I'm not really sure how you have attached them. But I bet that with a few technic parts you can give them an angle.
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ethan-k793 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
im not too happy with him myself. the back could use a lot more armour and I need to find replacements for thoe blue parts XP. seeing I don't dave many lego figures in general I cant do the lego hands but he will get a little more detail in him. thanks for the criticism though!
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lbpfan21 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
looks good :) maybe put a barraki eye for an eye though? idk lol
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ethan-k793 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I tried that once. it kinda stuck out funny though.
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