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Victor and Anita walked into the lab of Professor Professor.

“Are you sure this time will work?” Victor asked when he saw Professor Professor. “We wanted to go to the beach today.”

“It won’t take very long, Victor.” Professor Professor said. He walked to Anita. “Are you ready?”

“That depended, will it hurt a lot?”

“No…maybe it’ll tickle a bit.”

“Alright, but I hope it’ll over soon.”

Professor Professor smiled and he took Anita to an empty spot in the lab. “If you stay still here, than I can put the laser on.”

“What laser?” Anita asked, worried.

“Relax, it’ll be like Doctor Doctor’s laser, only this one will make you see again.”

“I hope so.” Anita said. Professor Professor put on the laser and not much later, a red ray hit Anita and she fell on the floor.

“Now look what you have done!” Victor said and he ran to Anita. “Anita, Anita, can you hear me?”

“Victor?” Anita whispered and she blinked with her eyes.

“Anita, did it work this time?” Professor Professor asked.

Victor gave him a warning look and he helped Anita back on her feet. “I’ll take you home, maybe…”

“Victor, why didn’t you tell me that you coloured your hair?” Anita said.

“I didn’t do…” Victor looked to Anita. “Anita, look at me.” he said and Anita looked him straight in his eyes. “Which colour do my eyes have?”

“Brown, like always.” Anita said. She looked to Victor and gave him a big smile. “I can see again.” she said.

Victor smiled and gave her a big hug. “Hey, don’t cry.” Victor said, when he felt some tears on his shoulder. “Everything is okay now.”

“I know, but it’s just…I’m really happy I can see again.”

“So it worked?”
Anita and Victor looked to each other. They both forgot that Professor Professor was there too.

“Yeah, it worked.” Anita smiled. “Thank you Professor Professor.”

“It’s nothing, everyone could have known that…”

Anita and Victor walked away, leaving Professor Professor alone with his proud.

“You still want to go to the beach?” Victor asked and Anita smiled.

“Of course.” Anita said.


Not much later, Victor and Anita sat on the beach.

“I’m really glad you’re back again.” Victor said with a smile.

“What do you mean?” Anita asked.

“Well, you’re really shining again. I mean… in the period that you were blind, you looked a little bit down. But now, you’re really happy again.”

“I was a little bit down. But, wouldn’t you when you didn’t know if you would be able to see ever again?”

“I guess so.” Victor said.

“I almost forgot.” Anita said and she looked to Victor. “Do you like to have something to drink with me?”

Victor smiled. “Why?” he asked.

“Well, I didn’t see you drinking something.”

Victor laughed. “Alright.” he said. “We’ll go home than.”

That evening, Victor and Anita sat in Anita’s living room.

“I think I will keep those air-fresheners.” Anita said with a smile. “My house really smells wonderful.”

“I started to get used to it.” Victor said.

“Do you hear that?” Anita said and Victor looked at her.

He gave her a little smile. “Your favourite song.” he stood up and pulled Anita out of her chair.

“What are you doing?” Anita asked.

“Because you’re can see again, doesn’t have to mean you can’t dance anymore.” Victor said with a smile.
Anita laughed a little bit and Victor  took her to an empty spot in the room and started to dance.
During the dance, Anita and Victor looked to each other.
And at the end of the song, Anita came a little bit closer to Victor.

“Thank you.” she whispered and Victor smiled.

“You’re welcome.” he whispered back and he looked in her eyes. His head came closer to hers every second and he thought of an excuse about why he kissed her.
He just closed his eyes and was ready to kiss, when his communicator went off.

“Victor, are you still alive?”

“Yes, I’m still alive.” Why did I left this thing on anyway?
The last chapter is a long chapter, I know.
It's two am so I'm really tired right now.
I hope you liked the story.
I'm not sure when I'll put my next one, but I know there will be one at Halloween.
Right now, I'm really busy with school. But I hope I can write some more, stories.

I really thank you girls for the favourites and the comments. (Special thanx for that to babysoniclover-=D)
Right now, I'm going to sleep.
Good night!
Eszies-Eszie

For the other chapters, follow these links:

chapter 1: [link]
chapter 2: [link]
chapter 3: [link]
chapter 4: [link]
chapter 5: [link]
chapter 6: [link]
chapter 7: [link]
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:iconvictorvoltfan1:
VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Student Photographer
:giggle: Victor needs to learn how to put his phone on vibrate or on silent when he's alone with Anita.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, he should
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:iconvictorvoltfan1:
VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Student Photographer
BTW I drew a pic for you from one of your stories =)
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I must have missed it...
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:iconvictorvoltfan1:
VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Student Photographer
it's really cute =D
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
ok
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010  Student Photographer
The ending was halariouis:rofl: and when Victor tried to kiss Anita,so sweet:aww: To bad it got interuped by PP
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I know. It was really too bad. =D
Thanx for the comment :hug:
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010  Student Photographer
Your welcome.=D By the way,was my story"Victor's Story" in the profile good.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
The plot is wonderful. It is really good.
Only the style is something you need to work on.

A little example: Victor:"So,what are you doing this week?" I asked a little nervous.
In my oppignion, this kinda troubles reading.

You can choose to do this: Victor: (a little bit nervous) "So,what are you doing this week?"
this is mostly used for roleplaying stories.

But if you want to have a story with first person perspective, the best way to write is like this:
"So,what are you doing this week?" I asked a little nervous.

But don't worry, you learn from mistakes by making mistakes.
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010  Student Photographer
Ok thanks.I'll work on that on my next stories comeing up soon.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Alright, good luck with it and I can't wait to read it :)
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010  Student Photographer
Thanks
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Mimi7789 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008
Yet another great story!









Jesus is love!
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you =D
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spiritjujuhari Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2008
Aww...Cute! =D A/V! :heart: <3
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
thanx :) :heart:
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spiritjujuhari Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2008
LOL I can imagine the last scene in my mind "Yes! I'm still alive!"
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
lol =D
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spiritjujuhari Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2008
^^ =D :XD: =P
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:P
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spiritjujuhari Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
;P :P =D :XD:
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:rofl: =D :)
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peachykatara Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Totally sweet ending. "Victor are you still alive?" XD
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
thats soooo cute!!!! :D ^_^ :aww:
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
thanx :)
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Np ^^
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:iconeszies-eszie:
Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
=D
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D :D :) :)
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:)=D
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littlepuppyeyes Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
Just one questionnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Help! help!



PLEASE STAND BY...................
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:?
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