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Chapter Eight.


“Well, come on, let’s read an other story.” Kowalski said. She was really enjoying this.

“Alright, let me see.” Eliza said and she was looking for a nice story.

“What about this one?” Victor said and he pointed to a story called: An other love.

“Sure, why not?” Anita said with a smile. It didn’t bother her anymore, she actually started to enjoy this.

“Everyone agrees with it?” Eliza said and the other nodded. “Okay.” and she clicked on the story.

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An other love

“As you know, for reasons of security,  name is Changed Daily. Today, you may call me…oh, Salomon’s Trumpet.”

Anita, Victor and Professor Professor started to laugh. It was just another day at the U.Z.Z. base.

“So, Salomon’s Trumpet, why did you call us here?” Anita asked.

“There are a few reasons.” Salomon’s Trumpet said. “First, we have some new agents. You’ll meet them this afternoon. And second…”  Special agent Ray walked into the Briefing Room. With him was a tanned man, with brown eyes and dark hair. “This is Julius and he’s an exchanged agent. He’s from the south of France.”

“But who went to France?” Victor asked.

“Agent Kent was send to France.” Salomon’s Trumpet looked to Julius. “Agent Julius, these are Professor Professor, Victor Volt and Anita Knight.”

“Nice to meet you.” Julius said with a big smile and he looked to Anita. “And I’m looking forward to get to know you better.” he said while he grabbed Anita’s hand and gave a kiss on it.

Anita giggled. “Me too.” she said.

Victor looked to Anita, but didn’t say a thing. She wouldn’t listen even if he said something. There was something about Julius, but he didn’t know what.

“Mademoiselle,” Julius said.  “I would be most delightful if you could give me a tour.”

“I would be honored to give you one.” Anita said when she stood up.

“Let’s go then.” Julius said.

“Is it just me, or does anyone else see that there is something wrong with Julius?” Victor said when Anita and Julius left the Briefing Room.


“Maybe it is just you, I didn’t see anything wrong about Julius.” Ray looked to Victor. “I ran his files and everything and he’s ok.”

“I still don’t trust him.” Victor said. “Thanks anyway, Ray.” and he walked out of the Control Room.

“Hey, Victor!” Suddenly sounded and Anita walked next to him. “Where were you? You missed all the fun that Julius and I had.”

“Oh, Ray called me. He needed my help.” Victor lied. “What do you mean with ‘fun’?”

“He’s really nice, Victor. You really have to know Julius better.”

Victor looked to her, he knew he didn’t want to know Julius better. He looked to the clock. “We need to meet the new agents.” he said.

“I almost forgot.” Anita said. “Let’s go to the Briefing Room then.”

A few moments later, they arrived at the Briefing Room.

“Ah, there are you.” Salomon’s Trumpet said. “Agents, these are the new agents. Agent Alley Finey.” and a young, brown-haired woman walked into the room.

“Hello,” she said with a smile and you could see her braces. She wore her hair in a ponytail and her suit was turquoise.

“And this is Agent Felicity Jones. “ Salomon’s Trumpet said, but nobody came into the Briefing Room. “Where is she?” Salomon’s Trumpet said.

Suddenly, a very young woman walked into the room. Her strawberry blond hair was down on her shoulders. She didn’t noticed the people in the room, because she was singing one of her favorite songs, Come on over by Shania Twain. She looked up and she saw everyone staring at her.
“Sorry,” she said with a smile. “sometimes when I sing, I forget where I am or what time it is.” she plugged out her iPod and she looked around. “I’m Felix Jones.”

Salomon’s Trumpet sighed. “Victor, Anita, I was hoping that you two could help those two girls to become one of our best agents.”

“Sure.” Victor and Anita said in common and together with the new agents they walked out of the Briefing Room.

“How old are you?” Anita asked when they walked through the blue hallways.

“I’m eighteen.” Alley said with a smile.

“I’m thirteen.”  Felix said.

“And you became an U.Z.Z. agent?” Victor asked and he looked to her.  “You’re just thirteen.”

Felix smiled. “I was attacked by the Red Eye from the Impostors and I beat him up. Special Agent Ray saw me and asked if I wanted to work for U.Z.Z. So I said yes. And age doesn’t matter.”

“What is that?” Anita suddenly asked and the girls looked up. A raccoon walked next to Alley.

Alley smiled. “This is Fluffy, my pet raccoon. He’s very sweet and he never leaves my side, no matter what I try to do.”

“Well, as long it doesn’t cause problems, it can stay.” Victor said and Anita looked to him.

“You are still here.” she said and Victor gave her a strange look. “You’re the one who’s causing the most of the problems.”

“O, come on. Why is it always me?” Victor said. “It wasn’t always me.”

“I said most of the time, not always.” Anita said when she opened a door. She didn’t mean to harm Victor’s feelings, but the way he said it about the raccoon…she just couldn’t stand it.  “Let’s train.” she said, not listening to what Victor was all mumbling about.


“Do you have a boyfriend, Anita?”
Felix looked to her. It was lunchtime and Felix, Alley and Anita were sitting at the same lunch table.

“Why do you want to know it?” Anita asked.

“Just curious.” Felix said.

“No, I don’t have the time to have a boyfriend.” Anita said. “Working at U.Z.Z. take so much energy, that I fall asleep at the couch when I’m home, most of the time. I guess a boyfriend ask more energy than I’ve left after a day at U.Z.Z.”

“And how about an agent from U.Z.Z.?” Alley said. “He would have the same energy left as you.”

Anita sighed. “Well, it can wait.”

“Can I sit down here?” suddenly sounded and Julius sat down next to Anita.

Anita smiled. “Of course.” she said and Alley and Felix looked to each other. “Girls, this is Julius, he’s an exchanged agent from France. Julius, these are the new agents, Alley Finey and Felix Jones.”

“Nice to meet you.” Julius said with a smile.

“Yeah, nice to meet you too.” the girls said, but they didn’t seem to mean it.


“I don’t get it, what does she sees in him?”
A few days went by and Victor sat with Alley and Felix at the lunch table. “I mean, he’s…”

“Awful.” Alley said.

“Horrible.” Felix said and Victor nodded.

“I just don’t get what she sees in him.”

“You’re jealous, aren’t you?” Alley said.

“Who, me? No…no…no, I’m never jealous.” Victor said.

“You love Anita.” Felix said with a smile.

“No…may be…alright, I love her.” Victor sighed. “But what can I do? She is only with Julius right now. I don’t think she would see me.”

“We can fix that.” Felix said with a smile.

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“This is it? What are they going to do with me?” Victor said.

“No, this isn’t it.” Eliza said. “Look, there is another chapter.”

“So, not every story has just one chapter?” Anita said.

“I read a story about you two which had twenty chapters, if I’m right.” Kowalski said.

Victor looked to her. “Really?” he asked and Kowalski nodded.

Ray smiled. “You two are really that interesting together.” he said.

“Well, can’t we read the next chapter?” Anita said.

“Sure.” Eliza said and she clicked on the next chapter.
Well, it took me a while to write this chapter and it'll take a while before I write the next one.
The characters Felicity Jones and Alley Finey are from my new friends Anymonous and Em. I want to thank them for their characters, because of them I had a new idea for a new story =D

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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Photographer
Now I wonder how they would really react of they did discover us VxA fans that there are stories, fanart, and videos about them together. XD I also wonder how much they could react to their club I made for them. :iconvictorxanitafans:
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I hope they know. That would be just awesome :XD:
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Photographer
Yeah, girl! :iconlawooplz: Dat'd be da coolest!!
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008
I got to read about different agents. ^_^ I got all giddy after reading about the French gentlemen. Now apart from anonymous I forgot you also had that other reviewer Em.

I can expect really great things in the next chapter. =D

Great work!
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I try to write as fast as I can =D But I'm afraid it won't be finished until tomorrow (maybe)or saturday or sunday.
But I'm very glad you liked it =D
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008
Take your time I can wait.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Alright =D
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008
:hug:
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:cuddle::giggle:
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Can't wait till the next part! :D
And very imaginative names ;)
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I'll say it to Anymonous and Em =D
And I'll write as fast as I can.
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cool :D
And yay!
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:giggle:
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