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How to write a TSS fan fiction?
Chapter Six


“So, what’s the title?” Ray asked.

“An UZZ Christmas.” Eliza replied.

“Sounds harmless to me.” Victor said. “So why could this be more embarrassing than the last story?”

“The only way to find that out is to read the story.” Anita said. She started to like those stories, although there were some outsiders.

“So, let’s read it.” Kowalski said with a smile. She couldn’t wait to see how embarrassed Anita and Victor would become after this story.

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An U.Z.Z.- Christmas

It was the evening before Christmas and at the U.Z.Z. H.Q. every agent was celebrating Christmas. The Viewing Theatre was changed into a real ballroom. Every agent was dressed up and almost every agent was already there at the H.Q.

“Where is she?”
A Victor Volt in a tuxedo suit was waiting in the doorway between the hallway and the Viewing Theatre. Next to him stood Special Agent Ray.

“Tell me once again why you didn’t pick her up?” Ray asked. “It would be much easier.

“I wanted to, but Anita didn’t. She wanted to let me wait ‘till we saw each other here.”

“Hey big bro!” sounded and a blue haired young female walked to Ray. She was dressed in a purple glitter dress.

“Please, Sammy, don’t call me like that at work.” Ray said, but he gave her a little smile. “You look wonderful in that dress.”

“Thanks.” Sammy said and she looked to Victor. “I put this dress on for somebody special.” and she gave Victor a very sweet smile.

Victor started to blush. “That’s nice. Is it an agent?” he asked.

“Yeah.” Sammy looked to Ray. “I’ll see you later.”

“Didn’t you tell her that she’d never must fall in love with a secret agent?” Victor asked when Sammy left.

Ray laughed. “I like to see you like this, so embarrassed.”

“Please don’t say she has a crush on me.” Victor sighed.

“I’m not sure.” Ray said when a blond woman walked to them. “But it looks like it.”

“Good evening, sirs.” she said playfully.

“Kowalski?” both men said and Kowalski nodded.

“You look fabulous.” Ray said.

Kowalski smiled. “Thank you.” she said.

“Kowalski, did you see Anita tonight?” Victor asked, but Kowalski shook her head.

“Not yet.” she said and she looked to Ray. “Do you want to dance with me?”

Ray smiled. “With such a beautiful woman? I wouldn’t be able to say no.” and he and Kowalski walked to the dance floor.

“Victor,” sounded and Sammy came to Victor. “there is something I want to show you.”

“Well, alright.” Victor said and he walked away with Sammy.
“So, what is it?” he asked when Sammy stood still.

Sammy smiled. “That’s what there is.” she said and she pointed upwards. Attached to the ceiling, a little mistletoe was hanging just above their heads. “I guess you know what to do.” she said and she bowed her head towards his.

Victor sighed. “Yes.” and he gave her a kiss. He was planning to give it on her cheek, but Sammy turned her head enough to let him kiss her on her lips.

“Victor?” sounded and Anita walked to them.

Victor opened his eyes and he broke the kiss. He turned around and saw Anita standing there, long enough to see what happened. “Anita, this isn’t…” he felt that his cheeks turned red.

“This is so much as it looks like.” Anita said.

“But she tricked me into this.” But Anita didn’t listen and she turned around. “Anita, wait!” Victor walked after her. “Please, trust me. She tricked me in to this.”

Anita stood still and she turned around. “You enjoyed it, didn’t you?”

Victor gave Anita a strange look. “Why do you want to know that? We are only partners.” he said.

“Maybe that’s the way you look to our relation.”

Victor walked up to her and grabbed her hands. “Anita, do you mean what I think you mean?”

Anita tried to get her hands back, but Victor didn’t let her. “What… let me go.”

“Anita,” Victor said and he looked into her eyes. “listen first to me, I think you want to hear this.”

“And maybe not.” Anita said, still trying to loosen Victor’s grip.

“There is only one woman I love, Anita. And that’s you.”

Anita stopped. “Are you…do you…”

“I’m sure and I really do love you.” Victor said and he let her hands go.

“I love you too.” Anita whispered and Victor smiled.

And suddenly, he gave her a long, romantic kiss on her lips.

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“Wow, that’s amazing.” Kowalski said and she looked to Victor and Anita, who’s cheeks turned really red.

“So, would you really kiss her in public?” Ray asked to Victor.

“No comments.” Victor grumbled.

“Well, get used to it.” Eliza laughed when she saw the looks on Victor’s and Anita’s faces.

“What…what do you mean?” Anita said.

“Most of the fans love to see you two together.” Eliza explained. “So a lot stories are about you two.”

“You’re kidding, right?” Victor asked, but Eliza shook her head.

“I’m serious, there are really a lot of this kind of stories.”

“Great.” Anita and Victor mumbled, while Kowalski and Ray started to laugh.

“I wouldn’t laugh that hard.” Eliza said with a smile. “I’ve got a little surprise.”
This was a request from :iconbabysoniclover: She wanted to see Sammy again and to see Anita and Victor become embarresed!
So, I let Sammy come to the ball and let her get a crush on Victor. (I thought you would like it, babysoniclover=P)
I'll hope I can update soon!
Eszie

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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Photographer
Poor Victor and Anita!! XD I loved that last part! :XD:

Kowalski and Ray laugh. "I
wouldn't laugh that hard."

I just knew what was gonna happen next when I first read this! =D
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha, indeed
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner May 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD Oh dearrr....

Cringe alert!

I'm sorry I did that! ^^;
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner May 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, it's alright :D
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner May 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heh, I didn't mean to... I love those two together ^^
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner May 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
They are cute, aren't they :)
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner May 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yep ^^
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Student Photographer
That's good,very good.Love it:love:Are u thinking about writing more stories about Sammy like u made 'Sammy's Fantasy' and 'Sammy's Dream'?
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I wouldn't have the slightest idea. I could do it, but I have so much things to do and so little time.
But who knows?
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Student Photographer
Yeah i know that u are busy with school.I was just wondering.I can be nosey at times^^; hehe:giggle:
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Ow, that doesn't matter :)
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Student Photographer
Ok^^
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for putting me in the story! :D
I made Anita jealous LOL
Special thanks for putting me with Victor ;)
<3
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I knew you would like! =D And it's still a VictorxAnita story. :)
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yep I know ;)
But still Victor is quite the charmer... *loving sigh*
:love:
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
=D I guess I would like him as a friend. You and Anita have to fight out which one would get Victor=P
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL!!
Well she can have Alphonse XD
Jokes! ;)
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
hahaha, I hope that'll never happen. I'd rather see her with Ray than Alphonse. (But I want to see her with Victor more than everything)
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah thats true...
and yeap! :D
I just loved the idea of me and Victor kissing though *sighs* lol
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
=D
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