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How to write a TSS fan fiction?
Chapter Five


“Bubbly?” Victor said. “What does that means?”

Anita smiled. “It’s a song called like that. So this must be an other Songfic.” and she looked to Eliza.

“Yep, it’s another Songfic.” she said.

“What does AN mean?” Ray suddenly asked.

“That means Author Note.” Kowalski said. “It means that the author wants to share some information about the fan fiction.”

“So, what does she wants to say?” Victor said.

Anita looked to the screen. “I wrote this story for my friend, who put so many comments to my last story that I couldn’t resist to write this story. She asked me if I could write a fanfic with the lyrics of Bubbly from Colbie Caillat. It’s written in Anita’s POV and Anymonous, thanks for this wonderful idea. I hope I worked it out just like you hoped it would. Before I forget, thanks for being such a wonderful friend to me. Eszie.”

“What sweet.” Kowalski said.

“So there are fans who write idea’s from somebody else?” Ray asked.

“Yep, if they ask for it and you’ve got an amazing plot, they can write it for you.”

“What does POV means?” Anita asked.

“Point of View. You see the story through the eyes of one person.” Eliza said.

“I’m starting to be curious.” Victor said. “Can we read the story now?”

“Of course.”

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TSS – Bubbly

Will you count me in?

I've been awake for a while now.
You've got me feeling like a child now.
'Cause every time I see your bubbly face,
I get the tingles in a silly place.


I look to my ceiling. I think of him. Every time I when I see him, I feel something tingle inside me. It’s something special, I only feel when he’s around.

It starts in my toes,
And I crinkle my nose.
Wherever it goes I'll always know,
That you make me smile.
Please stay for a while now.
Just take your time,
Wherever you go.


I hear the rain falling down. I look to him, it was an amazing night. Who’d ever thought that it would have come so far as we came tonight? I know I won’t ever get a feeling like that with someone else.

The rain is falling on my window pane,
But we are hiding in a safer place.
Under covers staying dry and warm.
You give me feelings that I adore.


It is morning and I feel that he’s getting up. He gives me a little kiss on my forehead, assuming I’m still asleep. I love to hear him getting up, it makes me feel so comfort, to know that I was with him last night.

They start in my toes,
Makes me crinkle my nose.
Wherever it goes I'll always know,
That you make me smile.
Please stay for a while now.
Just take your time,
Wherever you go.


I open my eyes. Is that the smell of coffee? I get up and I pull on my clothes. It’s our free day so nobody will be looking for us. And they won’t find out about this for some time, not before we’re ready to tell them.

What am I gonna say...
When you make me feel this way...
I just... mmm
They start in my toes,
Makes me crinkle my nose.
Wherever it goes I always know,
That you make me smile.
Please stay for a while now,
Just take your time.
Wherever you go...


“Goodmorning, sleeping beauty.” he says with a smile. “Did you sleep well?”

I smile. “Didn’t you noticed?” I tease and I get a kiss on my lips.

“I noticed that.” he says with a smile and he put his arms around me. “You look wonderful today.”

I smile. “Thank you.” and another kiss follows.

I've been asleep for a while now.
You tucked me in just like a child now.
'Cause every time you hold me in your arms,
I'm comfortable enough to feel your warmth.


“You know,” he says and I look into his eyes. “I’ve loved you for years now, but I’d never had the courage to tell you. But then… you looked so beautiful, more than ever.”

“So you needed to tell me how much you loved me.” I say with a smile and Victor nods.
Suddenly, he gives me a kiss on my nose and I give him a sweet smile. I’d never want him to leave my life. Not now, not in the future. I want him to stay with me, forever.

It starts in my soul,
And I lose all control.
When you kiss my nose,
The feeling shows.
'Cause you make me smile.
Baby just take your time now,
Holding me tight.


“Anita,” he says and I look to him. “I love you.”

“I love you too, Victor.” I whisper. “And I don’t want you to leave me ever again.”

“Did I ever leave you?” Victor asks and I smile.

“No.”

“And I will never do it.” and I get another kiss on my lips.

Wherever, wherever, wherever you go.
Wherever, wherever, wherever you go.
Wherever you go,
I always know,
'Cause you make me smile even just for a while.
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Ray smiled. “So what did you do that night?” he said, teasing Victor and Anita.

“You’ll have to ask it to the writer, not us.” Victor said. This starting to become very embarrassing and he felt that he started to blush.

“I think this is sweet.” Anita said. “At least it isn’t like the story about me and Alphonse.” She’d never thought that someone would write something like this.

“So, Anita.” Kowalski smiled. “You’d really think that Victor would give you a night like that?”

Anita looked to her. “I…I dunno. It’s really…well…” she didn’t know what to say. She like Victor as a friend and sometimes even more than her best friend, but if he could give her a night like this?

“Hey, there is a second AN.” Eliza suddenly said. “If you thought this was embarrassing for Victor and Anita, then you haven’t read this story.”

“It can’t possibly become more embarrassing than this.” Anita said and Victor nodded.

Eliza gave them a devilish smile. “There’s only one way to find out.” she said and she clicked on the link.
I wrote this chapter for my new best friend, Anynomous. (Just like I said in the story)
The next chapter is a request of :iconbabysoniclover: But I don't know how long it will take before I can put it on DA.

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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Student Photographer
Real cute:aww:but what really happened that night in the story in the story?
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I dunno. Maybe Victor and Anita just fell asleep in each others arms, or they had a very romantic dinner that night before.

What do you think what happened that night?
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Student Photographer
Well i thought that they were married and that they....umm....u know and it said Anita heard Victor get up from his side of the bed.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
=D That could be the thing too :)
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Student Photographer
Maybe=D
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I'll guess we'll never know ;)
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Student Photographer
Yeah
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ooh...
Looks like something's gonna happen with those two tonight... ;)
It gets more embarrassing?! Can't wait!! :D
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
=D I'll write it as fast as I can.
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good! :D
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
=D
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