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Chapter Two
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“So, what’s the title?” Anita asked.

“It’s a secret.” Kowalski said, but Eliza saw the title.

“You can’t do this.” she whispered to Kowalski. “She’ll kill you.”

Kowalski smiled. “I don’t care.” She said. “I’m just wondering how she would react at a story like this.”

“So, are we going to read that story or what?” Victor asked, getting curious.

“As you wish.” Eliza said and she opened the story, without showing anyone the title.

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There she was, lying in bed, together with him. She loved him ever since she met him for the first time. It was a little bit magical, but it was always magical when she was with him. She still couldn’t believe he asked her to marry him and she still couldn’t believe that she said actually yes.
She looked to him, he was asleep right now.
She turned around and tried to get some sleep, but she couldn’t.

“Is there something wrong?” she heard and she turned back.

“Everything is alright.” she said with a smile. “I just can’t sleep.” She looked to him. “I thought you were asleep.”

“I was, until you turned around.” he said playfully.

“It wasn’t that bad.” she said, laughing a little bit.

He smiled. “What’s going on?” he asked. “You can tell me anything, you know that.”

She smiled back. “I know. But it’s just I can’t get any sleep. I don’t know why.”

He laughed a little bit. “Maybe it’s because you’re nervous for our wedding.” he said.

“Why would I be nervous?” she asked.

“Maybe because it’s one of our greatest days of our life?”

“No, I’m not nervous. It’s just that I can’t get some sleep, that’s all.

He gave her a sweet smile. “You know, it’s really wonderful that you wanted to marry me.” he said.

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“So, about whom are they writing?” Victor said. “They only write about he and she.”

“Have some patient, you’ll see it in a minute.” Kowalski said and they read further.

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“Why not?” she said. “I mean, we love each other, so the best thing we could do is to marry each other.”

“And before it’ll be too late.” he said and he placed his hand on her bare shoulder.

“You’re acting like I’m already pregnant. And besides, we have all the time in the world after our wedding.”

“I can’t wait to take you to Rome, I know you’re going to love it.” he said with a smile. His hand ran down her arm.

“I can’t barely wait for our honeymoon, just you and I, together.” Anita looked to her fiancé.  

“And not only then, but also for the rest of our lives.” Alphonse looked to Anita. “Did I ever tell you that you are really beautiful?” he said.

Anita smiled. “A hundred times, at least.”

“Then I’ll say it one more time, you are really, really beautiful.” his hand reached Anita’s stomach. “It won’t take long until our baby would be in there.”

Anita smiled. “Why don’t we already start?” she said and Alphonse gave her a long romantic kiss on her lips.

“You’re absolutely right.” he said and he pulled the blankets over their heads.

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“No, I’m way too young for this kind of stuff.” Eliza said and she put her laptop away.

“You have to be kidding me.” Anita looked to the screen. “Alphonse and I…but that…”

“Hey, Anita.” Kowalski said. “I didn’t know you could do this.” she was still reading the story.

Anita watched over Kowalski’s shoulder. “Me neither.” she said when she saw what Kowalski meant. Then she looked to Kowalski. “I believe this was your idea?”

“I’m sorry, but I didn’t know they wrote a new part. I’ve never seen it before.”

“Yeah right.” Victor said. “I don’t believe it at all.”

“But you have to, I swear, I’ve never seen this part.” Kowalski said.

“I don’t care.” Eliza said. “I don’t want to see anything like this ever again.” and she closed the story.

“So, is there anything else?” Victor asked and Eliza nodded.

“Every story is totally different.” she said. “I know a sweet one.”
For those who think I'm an AnitaxAlphonse fan, I'm not! I really hate to see Anita acting that girly and stuff when she sees Alphonse. I only did it because there is a possibility that there are fans who like to see Anita and Alphonse together.
I promise I won't make an other story like this, at least not for this story. It was once and never again.

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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Student Photographer
:bleh: at the last part of the AnitaxAlphonse story.Victor had a stoke at that ending,didn't he.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, I guess he had =D
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008
You proved Kowalski can be a little devil. XD It wasn't till the part when 'he' spoke of Rome was when my mind registered. Alphonse your good and after the other part when they pulled the sheet over there heads. I can't wait to see what else you have planned for the future chapters.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the compliments :) I loved it to make Kowalski a little bit devil. I had this kind of feeling you would find out earlier than the story tells that it was Alphonse she was talking to.
You'll have to wait for a few days, because I'm very busy with school right now. But I'll do whatever it takes to write the next chapter. :)
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008
Take all the time out that you need. The story can always wait, it's always neat to take time out for what's important. =D
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I wrote the new part already. Thank heavens I didn't have too much homework for now. =D
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008
That's cool.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
=D yeah
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
COOL!!
Are ya gonna do a VictorXAnita one?
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Very soon, I promise! :)
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YAY!!! :D
I think you should make Victor and Anita look really
embarrassed... ^_^ Could I possibly be in it? ^^; Sorry it's such short notice
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I'll think about it. :P I've already searched out a few more plots, so I need to write those first. =D
Oh, and by the way, I got a message from Anymonous that I had to say thanx for putting your youtube vid A x V Kiss the Girl. She loved it.
(To be honest, I've no idea who she is, but she put a comment on my story on fanfiction.net, and she asked if I could say it to you=D She's really nice:))
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
Well if she leaves a comment on my other videos then I will subscribe to her for sure! :D
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I don't think she has an account, maybe that's why she asked me to say it to you. :)
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah cool :D
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
=D
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