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Last Chapter; A Christmas Feeling

It was Christmas and Victor and Anita were both at their own places. They were both checking their mail and they noticed that they had mail from Eliza.
It said:

I thought you would like this story. It’s a Christmas story.
Have fun and Merry Christmas!
Eliza Fox

“Well, it can’t hurt someone to read this.” Anita said to herself and she clicked on the link.

“Maybe it’s another one like the last story.” Victor smiled and he clicked on the link.


These are the special times

It was Christmas morning and Anita was busy with breakfast when she heard the doorbell ringing.

“Merry Christmas!” sounded when she opened the door.

“Merry Christmas, Victor.” Anita said and Victor gave her a few kisses on her cheeks.  Anita smiled. “Come on in, before you’ll be frozen.”

“You know, it’s really wonderful that we made a little tradition.” Victor said. He and Anita were sitting at the breakfast table. It was their tradition to have breakfast together on Christmas morning. And, at the end of the day, Ray, Kowalski and Mildred came to enjoy the Christmas dinner. But nobody of them knew about their little tradition of Christmas breakfast.

Anita smiled. “I love our tradition. I mean, otherwise we would  have to celebrate it on our own.”

Victor smiled. “Anita, there is something I want to give to you.”

“But we always do that after the Christmas dinner, when everyone is here.”

“But it’s a special gift.” Victor said and he gave Anita a little present. “Open it.” he said.

“Well, alright.” Anita said and she opened her gift. It was a golden necklace, with a golden heart attached to it. “Victor, you really didn’t need to give this to me.” she looked to Victor. “I don’t even…”

“Don’t even think about giving it back to me.” Victor said.

“Alright, but only if you’ll help me with this necklace.”

Victor stood up and Anita gave him her necklace. He carefully shoved her hair away and he placed the necklace around Anita’s neck. “You look wonderful with it.” Victor whispered in her ear.

“Merry Christmas!” sounded that evening when Anita opened the door.

“Merry Christmas, Mildred.” Anita said with a smile. “How are you?”

“I’m fine.” Mildred said. “Victor is already here, I presume.”

“You know that he always helps me with the preparations of this evening.” Anita said when they walked into the living room.

“Hey, mum.” Victor said. “Merry Christmas.”

“Merry Christmas, Victor.” Mildred said with a smile.

The doorbell rang again. “I’ll open it.” Victor said and he walked away.

“I’ll be in the kitchen.” Anita said and she headed towards the kitchen.

“I’ll help you.” Mildred said and she followed Anita. “So, he gave you already his present.” she said when they were in the kitchen.

“What…What do you mean?” Anita asked. “We give the presents after diner, that’s the tradition.”

“I saw him when he bought the necklace.” Mildred smiled. “He told me it was a part of his Christmas present.”

“I told him to wait, but he wouldn’t listen.” Anita said. “But it’s really beautiful.”

Merry Christmas.” sounded and Ray and Kowalski walked into the kitchen.

“Merry Christmas.” Anita and Mildred responded.

“I’ll leave you women alone. I’ll help Victor with decking the table.” Ray said with a smile and he left the women alone in the kitchen.

“Do you want to walk with me?”

The evening fell and Anita was in the kitchen, together with Mildred, washing the dishes. She looked to Victor, who was standing in the doorway. “But I’m…”

“Just go, Anita. I’ll handle this on my own. You deserve a nice walk.” Mildred said.

“Well, alright.” Anita said and she walked away with Victor.

“Thanks, mum.” Victor whispered before he left Mildred alone in the kitchen.

And a little bit later, they were walking through the park, which was covered with snow.

“It’s really beautiful.” Anita said.

Victor nodded. “It’s wonderful.” he said.

Anita looked to Victor. “You know,” she started. “it’s really nice to be here.”

“I know.” he said. He looked to Anita, who placed her head on his shoulder. They were both standing in front of a fountain, which was lightened up with white, red and green lights.

“It’s quite romantic.” Anita whispered. She looked to Victor, who seemed to be in deep thoughts. “What is it?” she asked.

“There is something I forget to give to you.” Victor said and he looked to her.

“But you gave me the most wonderful thing already.” she said.

Victor smiled. “I know, but there is just this little thing I want to give to you.”

“What is it?” Anita asked, getting curious.

Victor looked into her eyes. “Anita,” he started. “I love you and…” Victor went down on one knee while he grabbed a little box from his jacket pocket. “I want to ask you to marry me.” and he opened the little box. In the box was a ring with a purple flower, which held a little diamond.

Anita looked to Victor. “Do you…”

Victor nodded. “So, what do you say?” he asked.

Anita gave Victor a little smile. “Yes, Victor, I want to be your wife.” she whispered.

Victor smiled and he placed the ring around her finger. He stood up and they looked in each other’s eyes. They bended forward and Victor whispered: “I love you.” in Anita’s ear.

Anita smiled. “I love you too.” she whispered back and they gave each other a loving kiss.

“There you are, I thought you two got lost.” sounded when Victor and Anita walked into the living room. Mildred looked to them. “I think you two need some hot chocolate.” she said and she walked into the kitchen.

Anita and Victor smiled and they sat down on the couch.

“So, how was your walk?” Kowalski asked with a smile.

“Cold.” Victor said with a smile and he looked to Anita. “And wonderful.”

Anita smiled and Mildred gave them a cup of hot chocolate. “It was quite romantic, the snow which covers the streets.” Anita said.

“And what about my question? Wasn’t that romantic?” Victor asked and everyone looked to him.

“What question?” Ray asked.

Anita smiled. “He asked me to marry him.” she said.

“And you said yes, right?” Kowalski asked and Anita nodded.

“I wouldn’t say something else.” she said and Victor gave her a kiss on her lips. “Even if they would give me all the snow in the world.”

Victor smiled. “I’m glad.” he whispered. He looked to her and gave her another kiss. “Merry Christmas.” he whispered in Anita’s ear.

“Merry Christmas.” Anita whispered back.


Both Victor and Anita looked to their screen, this wasn’t true.

Anita sighed. “Well, it was a nice Christmas story, but I’m afraid that that won’t happen, unfortunately.” she whispered.

“I wished it could be like this, so easy.” Victor sighed. “But I’m afraid Anita wouldn’t like it.” he shut  his computer down and he walked outside. The snow started to fall and it was such a beautiful sight. Anita was right in the story, it had something romantic.  He loved Anita more than anyone else, but he couldn’t just say it to her. He looked up. He was standing in front of a house, he couldn’t remember that he walked up to it. He walked to the front door and he rang the bell.

“Victor? What are you doing here?” Anita asked when she opened the door.

“Well, I was just around and I thought it would be nice to say Merry Christmas to you.”

Anita smiled. “Come on in, you must be frozen.” and she held the door wide open.

A little bit later, they were both holding a cup of hot chocolate.

“Hmmm, it’s nice.” Victor said with a smile. “You read the story too, I presume.”

Anita nodded. “It was…special.”

Victor chuckled. “You can say that, again.” he said. “But I think it’s a nice idea.”

Anita looked to him. She had the feeling that her heart skipped a beat. “What…What do you mean?”

“Well, we always celebrate Christmas on our own.”

“But, you have your mother.”

Victor smiled. “But you don’t. So, what do you say if we going make dinner, together. This year we’ll do it on Boxing Day and every other year we’ll do it on Christmas Day. And maybe we can invite mum too. But not tomorrow, then it’ll be just you and I.”

Anita smiled. This was the most beautiful Christmas gift someone could ever give her. “It sounds wonderful to me.” she said.

“I’ll see you tomorrow.” Victor said and he stood up. “Merry Christmas, Anita.” he said and he gave her a kiss on her cheek.

“Merry Christmas, Victor.” Anita whispered.
This is the last chapter! I gave it some extra Christmas feelings and I hope you loved it!
Merry Christmas!

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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Photographer
I have a feeling that after Victor and Anita read all those stories about them they looked up more on FanFicNet when they got home ;p and maybe even dA where the Balloon pic came from.
Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha, who knows, I should update that link, this isn't a valid one anymore
VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Photographer
Yeah, you should =D
vertiline Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2009
Hee! Awww and awesome. :D
Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D :hug:
HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It made me cry with happiness!! <: )
You're gonna take it slow...
I thought so :)
So now this is the marriage, what's next?? ;)
I think I know... lol
Is it gonna be Theo and Hope?
Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Hold your horses girl! Just take it slow. Victor and Anita will take it slow too ;)
HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thats true...
Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
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