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How to write a TSS-fanfiction?
Chapter Twelve


“So, what is it?” Anita asked.

“It’s called: ‘TSS – My Balloon’.” Eliza answered.

“Strange title for a story.” Victor said.

“I’ve heard stranger titles.” Kowalski said and Ray nodded.

“Just like: ‘Special Agent Life’.” he said.

Eliza snickered. “Get over that. You’ll see there’ll be more stories with you and Kowalski.”

“Great.” Ray said.

“But about whom is this one?” Anita asked.

“Well, you’ll see it in a moment.” Eliza said and she clicked on the story.

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TSS – My Balloon


It was a beautiful day. It was spring, the birds were singing and it wasn’t too cold and not too hot. Anita walked through the park. She loved it when spring came. It was the best time to walk.

“What are you thinking about?” suddenly sounded and Anita smiled.

“About everything.” She looked to Victor. “It is such a beautiful day.”

Victor nodded. “A perfect day for a walk.” he said and Anita grabbed his hand. Victor smiled and he squeezed softly in it.
They fell in love, more than five years ago and they still loved each other.

“Mommy, up!” sounded and Anita smiled. She kneeled down and she picked up the little boy.

“Hey, Theo.” she said.

“Are you already tired?” Victor asked and the little boy nodded.

“We walked from our house to the park, it’s a little bit too far for him to walk through the park too.” Anita said.

“That’s true.” Victor said and he looked to his son. He was almost three years old and he really started to grow up.

Anita looked to Victor. “He starts to look like you.” she whispered. “Your hair color, your nose.”

Victor smiled. “He has your freckles.” he said. “And maybe he’ll get your skills.”

“Who knows.” Anita said with a smile.

“Daddy, I want a balloon!” Theo suddenly said and Victor and Anita looked around them.

“Do you really want one?” Victor asked and Theo nodded. “Alright then.” and he walked away.

Anita to him while he walked away. She and Victor both loved their son Theodore and it wasn’t so hard to love him. He was just adorable, most of the time.
She saw how Victor asked the ‘balloon man’ for a balloon and she smiled when she saw Victor’s moustache moving. He decided to let his moustache grow when they found out that Anita was pregnant. She still didn’t know why he did it, but she was getting use to the moustache.

Here you are.” Victor said and he gave Theodore his balloon.

“Look, mommy, my balloon!” Theo said.

“It’s beautiful.” Anita said with a smile. “I’m afraid I have to place you back on the ground, you’re getting to be a little bit heavy.” And she put Theo back on the ground. He started to run a few feet away from his parents while he played with his balloon.

“Anita,” Victor said. “Happy anniversary.”

Anita smiled. “Four years.” she sighed.

“Four wonderful years.” Victor said with a smile.

Anita looked to Victor. “Where is my present?” she teased.

“How about…the balloon?” Victor said and Anita laughed. Victor gave her a kiss on her cheek. “Am I not a gift?” he whispered.

“Together with Theo.” Anita said.

“Mommy, my balloon is gone!”  they heard and Theo ran to them.

“Did you let it go?” Anita asked when she picked the boy up.
Theo nodded with the tears in his eyes. Anita looked around her to see where Victor was heading to. “Don’t worry, Theo. Daddy’s buying you another one.” she said when she saw where Victor stopped. She gave Theo a big hug. “It’s alright.” she whispered when Victor walked to them.

“A new balloon for the sad boy.” he said and he tied carefully the rope of the balloon onto Theo’s wrist. “Now you can’t lose it anymore.” Victor  looked to Anita. “Maybe it’s better to walk back home. Those clouds are heading towards us.”

Anita looked up in the sky and she saw big rain clouds heading towards them and she nodded. “Before we get wet.” she said with a smile.

“Daddy, I want a horseride.” Theo said and Victor smiled.

“Well, alright.” he said. He took Theo from Anita and placed him on his shoulders.

Anita just started to laugh. “Are you sure?” she asked and Victor nodded.

“He isn’t that heavy.” Victor said and he looked to Theo, who was sitting on his shoulders, feeling free and without cares.


Just a few blocks away from their home, it started to rain.
“And just on the day we didn’t take our jackets with us.” Anita sighed. She looked to Victor, they both stood underneath a lean-to, trying to stay a little bit dry and waiting for the sun to come out of the clouds. “Theodore, come back here! You’ll catch a cold.” Anita said.

“Let him play in the rain.” Victor said with smile. And suddenly, he remembered something and he reached for something in his pockets.

“You can say that easily, you won’t be the one… What are you doing?”

Victor looked to Anita, while he held his hand out in the rain. “Professor Professor gave me this. It’s an umbrella in a capsule. When you hold it in the rain…” an umbrella popped out of the capsule.

“Why didn’t you…” Anita looked to Victor.

“I forgot I had one in my pockets.”

“I’m glad you have one.” Victor held up the umbrella and they walked to their home.


“You’re going into bath, young man.” Victor said when they walked into their house. “Otherwise you’ll catch a cold and your mother will be blaming me for that, because I let you play in the rain.” And he walked with Theo on his arm to the bathroom.

Anita chuckled. Ever since they got married and even before that, Victor teased her with everything and most of the time Anita played along. She loved to do that. For them, it was a little game.
Anita walked into the kitchen to warm up the whistling kettle for the tea.

“Boo!” a little bit later sounded and Anita turned around.

“Hey, ghost.” she said with a smile and she lifted Theo up.
Since he had the white bathrobe and since his father told him he could ‘scare’ his mother with it, he did that every time he had the chance to do it.

The doorbell rang and Anita walked to the front door with Theo on her arm.

“Granny!” Theo said when Anita opened the door.

“Hey, Theo. Hey, Anita.” Mildred said.

“Come on in.” Anita said and Mildred walked into the house.

“Granny, hold me.” Theo said and Mildred took Theo from Anita over.

“Would you like some tea, I just made a teapot full.” Anita said with a smile.

“I’d love to.” Mildred said. “Where’s Victor?”

“Probably changing his clothes.” Anita said and she told Mildred what happened.

“And here I am again.” Victor said and he walked into the kitchen. “Hi, mum.”

“Hey, Victor.” Mildred said and she looked to Theo. “I guess he’s falling asleep.”

“Well, maybe it’s a good idea to bring him to bed. He didn’t have his afternoon nap.” Anita said.

“I’ll bring him to bed.” Victor said. “Or…”

“No, it’s alright.” Mildred said when she hand over Theo to Victor. “He’s your son.”

Victor smiled and he walked away.

Mildred and Anita sat down in the living room.

“So, how are you?” Mildred asked and she looked to Anita.

“Wonderful.” Anita said with a smile.

Mildred smiled. “It’s your fourth anniversary today.” she said and Anita nodded.

“And how are you?” Anita asked.

“The same old thing. I’m already glad they asked me to teach the basics of karate, so I’m doing something.”

Anita smiled. “You already did something. You’re watching over Theo when it needs to.”

Mildred laughed. “That’s what a granny suppose to do with her grandson.”

“Doing what?” Victor asked when he came into the living room. “Never mind.” and he sat down. “Mum, can you watch over him tonight? Anita and I are going out tonight.”

“We are?” Anita asked.

“To celebrate our anniversary.”

“But…”

“I would be glad to do it. You two need an evening alone.” Mildred said with a smile. “I’ll take him to my place tonight, so you two have the whole evening for you alone.”

“Well, alright.” Anita sighed.


That evening, Anita and Victor sat in a restaurant.

“To four wonderful years.” Victor said and they clinked their glasses.

“It were four wonderful years.” Anita said. “Our wedding and Theo.”

“Every second that we were together was wonderful.” Victor said.

He bended over the table and he gave Anita a kiss on her lips.

“I love you.” he whispered after the kiss.

“I love you too.” Anita whispered back.

“And may many years follow.”

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“There’s written something underneath the story.” Kowalski said and everyone looked to it.

“It’s an author’s note.” Eliza said. “I hoped you loved the story. It’s based on a drawing ~SangoWings333 once made. The story just came from nowhere and I couldn’t resist to write it. Theodore Thomas Jefferson Volt doesn’t belong to me, but to ~babysoniclover. I figured she wanted to have Theo in a story so badly, that I thought it would be fun to write one about him. But just a little bit about him. Sweet love, Eszie.”

“Isn’t that the same writer from the story; ‘Bubbly’?” Victor asked and Eliza nodded.

“She wrote some more stories, especially about you and Anita.”

“Great, a fan gone mad, just what we needed.” Anita mumbled.

“Well, I kinda like this story. Theo sounds really nice.” Victor said and he looked to Anita. “The way she wrote it, it sounded that he is our son. I almost believed it.”

“Well, I wasn’t pregnant, so I didn’t believe it.” Anita said.

“Victor is right, he sounded like he was really a kid of you two.” Ray said.

Kowalski chuckled. “Didn’t he sound sweet?” she asked to Anita.

“I guess so.” Anita looked to Victor. “But, how about that drawing?”

“She placed a link, so let’s look.” Eliza clicked on the link and a drawing appeared.

“You look nice with the moustache, Victor.” Ray said with a smile.

Victor smiled. “I think Anita looks very nice with our son.” he said and Anita felt that her cheeks turned a little bit red.

“Thank you.” she said. “He looks sweet, that’s for sure.”

Suddenly, their communicators rang.

“Code Custard!” sounded from their communicators. “The impostors are trying to steal the Secret Thing!”

“We’re on our way!” Anita and Victor said and they ran away.

“We’re coming.” Eliza, Kowalski and Ray said and they walked away, to their new mission.
Just like I said in the story, I got the idea from :iconsangowings333: from her drawing 'TSS - My Balloon' (Sorry for not asking it first for using it, but I gave you the full credit ^^;) If you want to see it, here's the [link]
Theodore doesn't belong to me, he belongs to :iconbabysoniclover:. I hope you liked it girl!
Let me just tell you this last thing, there'll be just one more chapter!

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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Photographer
“Great, a fan gone mad, just what we needed.” Anita mumbled.

Anita and Victor........... you don't know. Btw, I iz a mad fan of them. My "Our Love Is Deep" drawing is proof enough ;p
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha, that was exactly what I thought back then :XD:

Have to be honest, I had to look up what chapter 12 was about. I really should rewrite those stories soon...
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Photographer
XD

I don't think they need that much rewriting =) Maybe not at all.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hm, see it more as a self-pleasing thing. I will keep the old ones, but I like to change some things and especially some (dumb) spellingmistakes I see now that I didn't see back then
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Student Photographer
Ok =D
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwww! :)
Thats exactly like the picture I asked for!! :D
I'm glad I made Theo! ;)
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:D And I'm glad you liked it =D
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for starring my character!! ;)
:D
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
np, you talked so much about him, I figured you liked to see him in one of the stories. =D
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
I LOVE my newphew, Theo! :heart:
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I love him too, he's sooooo cute :aww:
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sure he will be pleased to hear that! ;)
Btw he's 3 years old :aww:
Do you think I should make a sister for him?
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Sure, why not?
I've other plans for them, but I'm not going to tell you what :evillaugh: It's a secret :devilish:
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