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How to write a TSS fanfic?
Chapter One


It was a rainy day in England when Victor Volt and Anita Knight walked into the Briefing Room.

“I really hope we don’t have any cases today, I’m not in the mood to fly in the rain on my sky-bike.” Victor said and Anita nodded.

“Then you are very lucky.” Changed Daily said and Victor, Anita and Professor Professor looked to him.  “It’s very quiet today, so I would suggest that you would do something useful.”

“I think we can go training something, to stay at good shape.” Anita suggested and Victor nodded.


“It’s very quiet here.” Anita said when they walked through the hallways.

“A little bit too quiet.” Victor nodded. “Where is everybody?”

Suddenly, they heard some laughter from one of the emergency night bunkers and they walked to it.

“You have to be kidding me!” Eliza Fox said when Victor and Anita walked into her emergency night bunker. “No way.”

“What’s going on?” Victor asked and Eliza turned around.

“Nothing.” she said and she closed her laptop.

“Let me see that.” Anita said and she tried to grab the laptop.

“I didn’t think so.” Eliza said. But what Eliza tried, Anita got the laptop.

“You were chatting with Kowalski?” Anita asked.

“Yeah, is there any problem with that?” suddenly sounded and agent Kowalski came into the room.

“You can chat in the lunchroom, why do you need the computers to chat?” Victor said.

“We were busy with private stuff.” Eliza said. “And this was a good solution.”

“What’s this?” Anita asked and Eliza looked to her laptop.

“That was my secret.” Eliza said when Anita gave Eliza her laptop back. “And that’s a long story.”

“Since we don’t have anything to do, tell us that story.” Victor said and they all sat down at Eliza’s bed.

“We all know that they made a cartoon of our missions.” Eliza said and they all nodded. “Well, some fans made some stories about us. It’s called fan fictions. They can write whatever they want, whenever they want.”

“Really?” Victor asked and Eliza nodded.

“I know a few fan fictions, but I just got started. There are really a lot fan fictions.”

“Like what?” Anita asked.

“All kinds of fan fictions. Song fan fictions, romantic fan fictions etcetera.”

“Well, give us an example.” Victor said.

“Are you sure? I mean, it’s… I don’t think you’re going to like it.”

“We’ll see.” Kowalski said with a smile.

“Alright, there’s only one way to find out.” Eliza said and she clicked on a story called: An unexpected love.

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An Unexpected Love

There she was, finally married with the man she loved for years. He finally asked her and she said ‘yes’, even before he really asked the question. She sat in a rocking chair, in an almost finished ‘special’ room.

“Hey,” sounded and Anita looked up. “How are you?”

“I’m fine, thanks.” Anita said and Ray sat down next to her. “How was it at U.Z.Z.?”

“Just an ordinary day” Ray said. “Doctor Doctor tried to rule the world again and the impostors tried to send us down there.”

Anita smiled. “That sounds like an ordinary day to me.”

Ray nodded. “So, how are you and the baby doing?” he asked.

Anita placed a hand on her stomach. “Very good.” she said. “The baby is really growing now. And sometimes I can feel it kicking.”

Ray smiled. “That’s a good sign.” he said. “I guess you’re glad that you don’t have to work for some time.”

Anita sighed. “Are you kidding?” she said. “It’s wonderful to be pregnant, but I can’t do some of the things I loved to do anymore.”

“It’s for the safety of the baby.” Ray said. “You really have to understand it.”

“I do understand it, but still…it isn’t fair.”

“But you can be busy with this room.” Ray smiled.

“I was busy with the room today. I placed some baby books and some baby stuff in the cupboard and I wanted to paint some, but I couldn’t because everybody says the smell of paint is bad for the baby.”

“Safety comes before fun.” Ray said. “I forgot to asked. How did Victor react?”

“He was a little bit amazed. But when I told him that we were married and that things like this could happen, he was very happy for me.”

“Don’t tell me he didn’t know that you could become pregnant after a marriage.”

Anita laughed. “Don’t talk like that about my partner.” she laughed. “He was…well, more or less surprised to hear the news.”

Ray smiled. “Can…can I feel the baby?” he suddenly asked.

Anita smiled and grabbed Ray’s hand. “Of course.” she said when she placed his hand on her stomach. “Can you feel it?”

Ray nodded. “You must be very proud, mommy.” he said playfully.

“I am.” Anita said and she looked to Ray. “And how about you, daddy?” she asked with a smile. “Are you proud?”

“Of course. I’ve been always proud of you.” Ray looked to Anita and bend forward to give her a sweet kiss on her lips.


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Anita’s mouth felt wide open. “You have to be kidding me.” she said. “Me and Ray?”

“What about you and me?” suddenly sounded and Special Agent Ray walked into the room.

“Just read this.” Anita said and Ray read the story.

“Who wrote this?” he asked and he looked to Kowalski and Eliza.

“It wasn’t us.” they said and Eliza told Ray what was going on.

“I see, so there are people who think that Anita and I must be together.”

Kowalski got a devilish smile. “Not only you and Anita. I’ve got an other fan fiction.” she said and she typed something in.
After two weeks, I finally finished chapter one of this fanfiction. It could take a week before I can finish the next one, because I have so many things to do for school :(
(Oh, and btw, I'm not an AxR fan, I thought it would be interesting to let them read a fanfiction like this :devilish:)

next chapter: [link]
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VoltaliatheMajestic Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011  Student General Artist
Interesting pairing, Anita x Ray is! I guess if Victor were to die, I'd start supporting this pairing. Either that one or Anita x Louis (my OC who is a Gallade).
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :) And thank you for the :+fav:
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HOPEINATOR20 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
XD
RayxAnita! good story :D
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HOPEINATOR20 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
XD! RayxAnita?! XD
good story! :D
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2008
I had a lot to do before I could comment on this. I can't believe you done it I mean...I was just too speechless reading the first chapter. So Kowalski's introduced them to fanfiction and I'm really amazed by the reactions.

I love when Ray just pops in at the end and goes “What about you and me?” suddenly sounded and Special Agent Ray walked into the room.

I just imagined the most confused look on his face. XD Very wonderful job.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
aww, thank you =D I just couldn't resist to let Ray come into the room, just at the right time XD
I didn't mean to make you speechless, but I'm glad you liked it =D (And take your time to comment on this, I can wait =P)
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2008
I always like it when something makes me jump out of my seat. Your fiction just did that, it's like something I never read before.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:o I didn't know I made you jump out of your seat. =P I think you'll jump higher when I've finished my next chapter. :devilish:
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2008
Please do. =D
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Just wait till monday. I think you'll jump very high :devilish:
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008
Can't wait for it. =D
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
=D
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:O I didn't know I made you jump out of your seat. =P I think you'll jump higher when I've finshed my next chapter. :D
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miki-chan582 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2008
anita and ray huh well that was unexpected well great job did you make it urself. 100% for creativity
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
yeah, I thought it out. Thanx =D
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miki-chan582 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2008
np it was great
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
=D
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AnitaXRay?
Cool!! :D
Are ya going to do a VictorXAnita fan story maybe with them embarrassed?
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
of course, I love to do something like that. I only need to think of a good plot for the story :devilish:
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
=D
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