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Anita’s Choise
Chapter 2


There was something about him.
She didn’t know what it was, but there was something.
If it was really important, he would tell her…right?



Anita looked at Victor. They were sitting at their lunch table.

Anita knew there was something, but she didn’t know what there was.
Every time she talked about her wedding, Victor looked disinterested.

“Are you sure there is nothing?” Anita asked.

Victor gave her a little smile. “Why should there be anything?” he asked.

“Because you’re so quiet the latest days.”

“Well, it isn’t nothing when you loose a partner.” Victor said.

“So that’s all about.” Anita said. “Listen, Victor, because I’m gonna get married in four months, doesn’t mean I’ll be gone by then. It’s just…”

“Yeah, I know, you just want a family of your own. I understand.”

“I’m glad you understand it.” Anita smiled.

“Hey, Anita,” suddenly sounded. It was agent Kowalski. “When are you going to buy a wedding dress?”

Anita gave her a smile. “Why do you want to know that? Do you want to go with me?”

“If that’s possible.” Kowalski said.

Anita looked at Victor. “Why don’t you want to go with me?” she asked. “It would be a little honour to me.”

Victor sighed. “Well, all right.” he said.

“Thank you, Victor.” Anita said. She bended over the table and gave Victor a little kiss on his cheek.

For you, I would do anything Victor thought.



“So, agent Kowalski will be your bridesmaid.” Victor said.

He sat before a fitting room.
Victor looked around. Everywhere, he saw wedding dresses, in different kinds and in different colours.

Victor didn’t get the time to see what kind of dress Anita took with her, so it would be a surprise to see her.  

“Well, she is the only other woman at UZZ. So, I had to choose her, I guess.” sounded behind the curtain.

“How long does it take before I can see you?” Victor asked.

Then the curtain shoved away. Victor looked up and saw Anita in a beautiful, white wedding dress.

“What do you think?” Anita asked.

I think I would marry you right away “I think you look gorgeous in that dress.” Victor said.

Anita blushed. “Really?” she asked.

“Hey, how long do we know each other?” Victor asked. “When you ask me these kind questions, I’m really serious.”

Anita smiled. “I guess you’re right. I’ll take this dress.”


Not much later, Anita and Victor walked back to home.

“You know, Victor.” Anita said suddenly. “There is something I want to ask to you.”

Victor looked at her. “What do you…”

Anita stopped and looked in Victors eyes. “I want you to give me away to Alphonse and be my best man.”

Victor didn’t know what to say. If he said ‘no’, then he knew he’ll break her heart. But if he said ‘yes’…

“For you, Anita, I’ll do anything to make you happy.” Victor said. “So, yeah, I’ll be your best man.”

“Thank you, Victor. You don’t know how much this mean to me.” Anita said.

“But,” Victor said. “Promise me one thing.”

“What?” Anita asked.

“Would you think of me, when you’re married?”

Anita smiled. “Of course, I’ll always think of you.”

Anita looked at her house. “I've lived here for years. And now I live here two more months.” she looked at Victor. “I’ll never forget our friendship. Whatever may happen, I’ll remember the  good times with you.”
Thank you for those sweet reviews.
I really couldn't sleep last night, so I wrote further.
And now, I posted it on DeviantArt.

Again, I'm really sorry if there are really stupid grammar mistakes. So if you see one, would you please sent me a note or something and tell me what I could do for the next time, so I don't make that mistake twice.

O yeah, and I still don't own anyone and anything from The Secret Show(unfortunately)
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Kowalski4eva Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010
you spelled choice wrong...
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry, was one of my first stories, and English isn't my mother language
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Kowalski4eva Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010
oh i see
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You didn't know?
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Kowalski4eva Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010
uh no...
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
ok, well at least now you know it
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pandalilliwolf Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010
cool this remide me on the notebook movie
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
That's kinda... cool. But it really is the oldest story here, and it's... old.
But thanx anyway :)
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edgarellen1fan Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKK! I LOVE IT SOOOOOO MUCH! OMG IT'S SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you love it =D :)
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edgarellen1fan Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008
I DOOOO! YAY! uh- oh, the toilet just ran over! brb
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
thanx =D
I hope it isn't a lot of water
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edgarellen1fan Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008
It's all good now! it wasn't THAT much (okay, i do admit it was alot though...)
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Poor you, I'm glad it's good now.
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edgarellen1fan Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008
:D
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:giggle:
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008
This was a really great chapter and I'm so happy Victor didn't lose his cool. Awesome work.
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littlepuppyeyes Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008
well....uh how can I explain but uh
Anita: Why are you behid me
Me: Well I got your wallet
Anita: You idiot!
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww thats so fucking cute *crys*
^_^
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